| #1 jeezumcrow (svwebw03.statestreet.com)[18968] |
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| nice report, :) |
| #2 AnderKryst (edjproxy1.edwardjones.com)[18973] |
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Another good piece.
Save for a few spelling erros, and the obvious format problems (lines ending in the middle of the column), the story was good.
Keep them comming. :) |
#3 [18977] |
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"nuke nuke"
"who's there"
=] Gotta love dem nukes. |
| #4 Oddjob0047 (cf1000.win.bright.net)[18982] |
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That joke rules
"Nuke nuke
Who's there?
Kiloton.
Kiloton who?
I kiloton of you with my little red dot."
hehe |
| #5 loserboye (BESS3.cbe.ab.ca)[19006] |
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| err something is wrong with the server not too bad a story but too many spelling mistakes |
| #6 TheRubberDucky (dfiatx100-044.dsl.gtei.net)[19022] |
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| Nice Battlereport! |
| #7 Wisest~Yoda (ppp30.blueriver.mwt.net)[19043] |
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| Good story, but the spelling, grammer, and some of the word choice needs work. Overall good though. 8.5 |
#8 (fjwilson.reshall.uc[19044] |
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| DOH! The network crashing erased my earlier comment. Um, I liked it. |
| #9 Sp|nE (dialup0438-pri.voicenet.com)[19048] |
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| I guess i am the only one here that absolutely despises br's that are in story form = I totally can't stand them, i need pretty pictures and such because my brain is too simplistic to comprehend stuff otherwise. |
| #10 Sp|nE (dialup0438-pri.voicenet.com)[19049] |
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| OMG why dont the fucking ='s work ... testing testing = = = =] =[ =] =[ = = |
| #11 Sp|nE (dialup0438-pri.voicenet.com)[19050] |
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| Hey admins, how come i cant type a ... hrm is that thing a backslash or forward slash? Hmmmm ... well anyway the slash next to the =/+ button. |
| #12 TheBestCow (24-216-2-36.hsacorp.net)[19054] |
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Um, Sp|nE I hate to be the one to tell you this, but this a story. Plain and simple. Not a BR in story form. Since when in Starcraft are their things called "Solaris"? =)
Great story line, keep them coming. 9.0
-TheBestCow (aka ][erranloser) |
| #13 Sp|nE (dialup0438-pri.voicenet.com)[19061] |
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Damn well i didn't want to read the damn thing because i don't enjoy reading lengthy text, but i read the comments and they said stuff 'great br'. Ohh well my bad i am dumb =/
I have this strange urge to flame ppls who write stories for a starcraft website in their spare time, but i shall control myself .... |
#14 (fjwilson.reshall.uc[19078] |
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Eh, flame away on Phoenix Legion Sp|ne! Makes for interesting comment sections. I was amazed when, in one of the last Chronicles comments, YRM and a bunch of people jumped to my defense before I read the flame =).
I sometimes get this strange urge to flame ppls who dislike stories for a starcraft website so much that they flame them in their spare time, but I shall control myself...
Remember, you don't HAVE to read every report or story posted on BR.com =). |
| #15 Annie47 (spider-wi033.proxy.aol.com)[19118] |
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| heh thanks for your comments. I thought this was deleted but my mistake. Maybe in the secound part to this [witch is like 95% done 8)] i can get someone who has a brain in there head to post for me. (Any volenters? You will see the story before anyone else =]) Anyways glad some of you liked it =] |
| #16 MasterOfMordor (gbl241.gbl122.northstar.k12.ak.us)[19141] |
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Jeeze, Annie, I *would* be posting your stories BUT I don't have a connection to the internet (I lost it right after you e-mailed me), the only reason I can comment here is because I'm on the school comps... :( I wont even be on BNET!
I'll mail you when I get it back, but it wont be for ATLEAST a week, because of 'complications'. 'Till then. |
| #17 Annie47 (spider-wg012.proxy.aol.com)[19259] |
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| Thanks MoM, but I think my problems are solved for now. |
| #18 |]agomar[108753] |
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| nice! :D |