| #1 Wisest~Yoda (ppp33.blueriver.mwt.net)[21907] |
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| First! |
| #2 Wisest~Yoda (ppp33.blueriver.mwt.net)[21908] |
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| Short, and not all that good. Post about 10 times that much and it might be worth while. |
| #3 loserboye (24.66.200.212.ab.wave.home.com)[21909] |
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| yeah bit short and using jim raynor is getting old. but going that far down the line might be a different twist |
#4  (fjwilson.reshall.uc[21939] |
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| Using Blizz major characters gets old the first time they are used, in my opinion. Besides, this writer, while possibly talented in the few words that were there, needs to review, ummm, the PLOT. Confederacy falls BEFORE the Overmind. Sheeesh. |
| #5 animedension (sfe-nm6-145.ix.netcom.com)[21967] |
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| Why would Jim Raynot join the Confedracy? I though he hates them, and didn't the confedracy fall already. Oh and one writing tip if your going to introduce a new character like taurras you should give a little back gorund on the character. |
| #6 Glak (dhcp-219-189.res.UMassD.Edu)[21992] |
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| yeah Raynor and his men work for the protoss. He hasn't worked for the confederacy ever since he was the local marshall back on that wasteland planet. He and Zeratul are probably hiding somewhere from Kerrigan |
| #7 Macdonough (dial210-68.star-telegram.com)[21996] |
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this is funny
don't quit your day job Phat |
| #8 Titan_8[22576] |
| 168.baltimore-05-10rs.md.dial-access.att.net |
| Seems like a real cheap imitation of Praetor's PL:C |
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