| #1 VanDaMan[31051] |
| ppp-192-216-192-178.tstonramp.com |
| Stay Tuned for the next part. it will prob. have about 3 or 4 parts. Sorry for no pics. |
| #2 TheCabbit[31053] |
| bgm-57-110.stny.rr.com |
| 1st non author! |
| #3 Thecabbit[31054] |
| bgm-57-110.stny.rr.com |
| NOT LOOKING AT THIS!!!!! NO PARAGRAPHS!!!!!! |
| #4 Talon[31073] |
| cx110054-a.pwy1.sdca.home.com |
| Damn taktiks, you gotta be in more of <i>my</i> reports. This kinda smurfin is gonna make you look bad. |
| #5 [z]RubberDucky[31078] |
| dfiatx106-090.dsl.gtei.net |
| I'm embarassed to even comment on this report |
| #6 Barage[31130] |
| dialup-209.246.187.95.Atlanta1.Level3.net |
A short comment by me:
Simply put.. no paragraphs= too painful on the eyes |
| #7 @}~MaKiTa~[31233] |
| spider-tp012.proxy.aol.com |
| Way too hard to read without paragraphs dude. |
| #8 Reporter~USE~[31333] |
| bgm-150-230.stny.rr.com |
| hmmm...... you went and used that big monster paragraph to explain basically the early part of the game. Dude, why break it into parts? you aren't gonna bait us in. At least, not when there are better games to read about. Just my opinion. |
#9 [31446] |
| fjwilson.reshall.ucsd.edu |
| Use paragraphs, and don't use parts on a report this short. Your report should, at the end, be at least over 10 pages long to break it into parts. |
| #10 <font color ="red">red eye</font>[33561] |
| sac3-214.calweb.com |
| I cant see. |