| #1 Mithrandir[35777] |
| nic-30-c7-074.mw.mediaone.net |
1st!!
Haven't read it yet, but I'm sure it's good... |
| #2 Talon[35781] |
| cx110054-a.pwy1.sdca.home.com |
| no paragraphs =[[ |
| #3 Mithrandir[35784] |
| nic-30-c7-074.mw.mediaone.net |
| Hmmm, no paragraphs hurts, especially since many people have very short attention spans =). Pictures would've been very nice, helps people see the battles better. And a lack of color made it very drab. Since you don't know a lot about pictures, I reccomend developing your writing skills. But keep at it! |
#4  [35785] |
| 98CD6107.ipt.aol.com |
No paragraphs, but at least you did a decent job describing the game... sorta...
3
Dref |
| #5 Lord Venom[35798] |
| sj-isp-nat-pool-2.cisco.com |
| Read/Rate/Comment on my Other Report about Solar Vengeance! |
| #6 Barage[35799] |
| dialup-63.210.79.66.Atlanta1.Level3.net |
| Simply put, I know if I try to comment on a report with no paragraphs I'm going to be more blunt then I realy should be. |
| #7 Lord Venom[35801] |
| ranchi.CS.Berkeley.EDU |
Did I mention my Other Report? Have you read it yet?
....please?
<marquee>go ahead, read it... I'll be right here checking for comments every two seconds...</marquee> |
| #8 thecabbit[35806] |
| bgm-57-110.stny.rr.com |
| not readin, no paragraphs |
| #9 Jobe[35826] |
| super5300-dialup46.is.com.fj |
| Good story pity about the pictures,paragraphs and the spelling. But i got the general idea. |
| #10 I_Infest_Medics[35843] |
| spider-wo053.proxy.aol.com |
If you don't know how to take pics, press Prt Scrn/SysRq key above Insert during a game and it will say "Screen Captured to img00.bmp" or whatever. I would suggest paragraphs, and if you're not sure about HTML, read the guide of it on this page. Keep at it, I'm sure your next one will be better.
(sounded like a great game, pictures would've been <i>reeely</I> nice) |
| #11 =Silencer=[35844] |
| usr15-dialup35.mix1.Sacramento.cw.net |
| Have you guys made a battle report on this site with paragraphs? cause if you have, you may wanna tell him how to do it. i don't know how... so i can't tell him... by the way, venom, thats cool what you're doing at the bottom of your comment there. |
| #12 BW-sux[35848] |
| spider-wa033.proxy.aol.com |
| I am not reading this, because I am sure this reads like a brick. |
| #13 Mellinium_Ben21[35849] |
| spider-wn053.proxy.aol.com |
Pretty decent,it could use a few things though:
1:paragraphs
2:some in-game chat to liven things up
3:since your Jewish howzabout a Priest and a Rabbi joke?
BTW.I`m also a quarter Jewish so don`t try using your genetic/racial history to get sympathy.
If it worked I`d have used it at least once by now.=P
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| #14 </font color="#000033><b>Barage</b></font>[35870] |
| dialup-209.246.190.135.Atlanta1.Level3.net |
They could've changed things, but I could've sworn that all you need to do is make sure you don't click the "Disable Auto-Insertion of [BR] tags" button, then use good old 'enter' as normal.
Of course, if you are going HTML, then you'll be best of clicking that thing and adding BR |
| #15 Barage[35871] |
| dialup-209.246.190.135.Atlanta1.Level3.net |
| oh gods.. my first messed up comment :( |
| #16 Barage (what I tried to say...)[35872] |
| dialup-209.246.190.135.Atlanta1.Level3.net |
They could've changed things, but I could've sworn that all you need to do is make sure you don't click the "Disable Auto-Insertion of [BR] tags" button, then use good old 'enter' as normal.
Of course, if you are going HTML, then you'll be best of clicking that thing and adding BR
Mental note: be VERY careful with the way you work HTML into your name :/ |
| #17 Syndrome Zed[35881] |
| wmb6217-daley.neuro.emory.edu |
The real reason you won - your opponents SUCKED ASS! I may not be the best player in the world (well, ok, there's no "may" about it :) ) but geez. As near as I can tell from your BR, they didn't attack you at all. I mean, what the heck were they doing the time it took you to get scivessels and irradiate. A lousy hydra drop of 12 hydras would've done significant damage - and only one of them needed to do that while the other teched to guardians or expanded like a whore.
BTW, it's not a 2v1 when your parnter's still in the game.
Finally - you may have no clue about pix, but please get a clue about paragraphs. It makes it sooo much easier to read.
You did do all right describing things, but there did seem to be some gaps in the story that may have made things a little easier to understand at some points. |
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