"Yes, Maynard did "maynard" his scv's over to his natural when he expanded there. Hmm, I should be shot for saying Maynard 'maynarded' , eh?"
-Dr.Zchivago
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| #1 Sp|nE[36571] | | dialup16x25-pri.voicenet.com | | i am jesus himself | | #2 [z]MRHD[36575] | | resnet180-39.resnet.buffalo.edu | | War2 rules. Some of the phrases were pretty good, like "mentally sobbed", and overall the writing was fairly good. But it is bad manner to hide peons on people.^^ Next time, try to expand the text more, and get some images if you can, but overall a decent first effort, reminds me of my first. | | #3 SCV[36621] | | c3-1a086.neo.rr.com | | Normally when I write a response, I attempt to go into an elaborate speach to prove nothing, but I will not do that here, for I am speechless. That is not a good thing, nor a bad thing, take it as you will. | | #4 MexicanMoe[36672] | | spider-tp011.proxy.aol.com | wow i actually liked it..
paragraphs woulda helped..pics woulda been cool too. The ending was pretty well written. | | #5 Alita99[36677] | | urel88.URel.Berkeley.EDU | I must commend your very literate peon. Were I to find myself in his predicament, I wouldn't bother to write my last words in a journal. I'd clamp my mouth shut and run! =)
Nice report. We don't get too many War2 reports here! | | #6 No name[115745] | | async6-2.remote.ualberta.ca | Ok didn't your peon die when the knight hit it?
Cause he can't finish the journal if he died.
And if he did live to write the journel then i guess you must of lived :) |
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