| #1 HGA[38297] |
| pcsnha.hhj.hj.se |
| Just wanted to steal the first comment. Thanks for a great site. |
| #2 DivvyO[38306] |
| kpcrdc.kp.org |
Go su ... the new improved gosu! Not willing to be restrained by a single word, only the godly masters of SC get to have their pseudo-korean statements broken up into their separate syllables. Maybe I'm speaking with my feet up my butt, but this report didn't really seem to go anywhere. Sure, stuff happened, but maybe I just didn't have any energy into it. Heck, it IS 12:15 ... ah crap. Well, my only suggestion to you would be to add some livelyness (livelyness? sp?). Add some pictures. Make a joke or two. Nobody wants to read a report by Ben Stein. Well, maybe some people do, I just have to find them. and PS them's 2 paragraph reports make for a kind of difficult read as well.
DivvyO |
#3  [38310] |
| dt031nf7.tampabay.rr.com |
| when i saw the title i assumed it was our game :D |
| #4 Dr.MaNNerals[38369] |
| 1Cust48.tnt2.north-port.fl.da.uu.net |
| AHAH, bob...werd, man i was tired last nite though~ |
| #5 Dr.Mannerals[38370] |
| 1Cust48.tnt2.north-port.fl.da.uu.net |
| I DID take screenshots adn send them in though for this game:( they didn't send for some reason..gay |
| #6 BW-sux[38467] |
| spider-wm013.proxy.aol.com |
| This fits into my definition of spam. |
| #7 Tempx714[38470] |
| lsanca1-ar4-100-070.biz.dsl.gtei.net |
| it's "liveliness" ... i think. |
#8  [38536] |
| 208.196.35.239 |
The writing for this report actually wasn't too bad.
Suggestions:
1) paragraphs
2) Pick a non-beatdown
3) Add more description (make the battles sound exciting)
Err, something,
4
Dref |
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