| #1 British[FTL][39696] |
| 204.245.4.7 |
I'm a first comment whore, short and stout
Here is my handle, here is my spout
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| #2 [39701] |
| sdn-ar-007mokcitP206.dialsprint.net |
| ... |
| #3 Dialtone_[39704] |
| athe530-o087.otenet.gr |
| well,i'm #2 since the real #2 has not name or comment.so #3 that's realy #2 ownz your bonez.ha!. |
| #4 <font color=yellow> |]agomar[39706] |
| static-47.itcanada.com |
Great report!
It deserves a Port
Straight to an 8.5!
(|]agomar turns red in embarassment at his poetry skills) |
| #5 Strom[39708] |
| ext216.mosx.com |
The report looked and, and was quite well written. However there were a few spots in which it was really pretty confusing...
The racial choice paragraphs were needlessly confusing. The Zerg commander picked protoss (huh?) well at least we can figure this one out from context. The stalwart Terran commander ... of the random division ... hand picks terran. Did he random or choose? I assume the latter but the flowery language really got in the way of what you were trying to say.
You said that the protoss rebuilt his natural, but never described it being built up in the first place, or being destroyed? This was confusing.
Later a group of siege tanks + mines & vultures loses to a group of dragoons, some templar and an archon? I think some more details of the two forces would have been good. Were the groupd the same size? A group sortof implies 12 units and it's hard to imagine 12 siege tanks being overwhelmed by that force.
Finally - how was the second turbo newbie stopped? It's very odd seeing a 3 drop ship, 6 tank turbo-newbie. What happened to support units? How was the factory float stopped?
Were these experienced players? It looked like the Protoss went goon containment but didn't send his goons to contain? To the point where his goons were still in his base after eVince started a command center...
Strange game.
Rating 7
Strom
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| #6 Strom[39709] |
| ext216.mosx.com |
Hmm, I should've listed what I liked about it as well, it's too easy to get caught up in what might be changed to make it better.
The report looks good. The pictures are nicely done and the embedded mini-maps are a very nice touch. Picture alt-text tags are always a bonus.
The text was well written (didn't have lots of spelling/grammatical errors either) and apart from the problems that I noted above it seemed to cover the action reasonably well.
Strom |
| #7 BW-sux[39716] |
| spider-wl083.proxy.aol.com |
These couldn't be some of the better players in NoHunters for a few reasons, most of which are mentioned above, and I also noticed lots of psi storms in the same area. Now I know that psi storms don't layer, or I could say
1 psi storm = 5 psi storms in the same exact square at the same time.
I think it is impossible to understand what I just said in the above paragraph. (is this good random quote material, JV/Mark4?)
Now to the BR. I liked it. I think (I think a lot) it should be added to the gold section, but you could have told us what stopped the 2nd turbo-newbie. |
| #8 wallabystein[39741] |
| cust216.tnt1.dial.vic1.uunet.ca |
Gorgeous absolutely! It made me cry because it's such art. really, these players were bad manner, because neither was very good. The game was a bad move exchange pretty much... but hey, that's not what matters.
The pictures were big and didn't often show much.. I reccommend cropping the pics more, just so that they don't take so long to download. Oh, and I like the toilet part.
Can ye dig it?
wallaby |
#9  [39769] |
| as530009.infocom.com |
Too much picture... not enough text. Crop the pictures to make the load time of your reports faster. Don't use pictures to support your text, use text to support your pics.
7
Dref |
| #10 .......[39848] |
| proxy.netsetter.org |
Good Report...one of the easier ones to read right now and the pics were nice except for that 1 cut off one. Even the you did forget tell some important stuff, the information was easy to read and explained the situation at hand well.
(try to put some more pics in there)
Overall a good report, I have some reading to look foward to.
Rating:8.5
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| #11 TaloN[39919] |
| cx110054-a.pwy1.sdca.home.com |
| 11th comment! |
| #12 [40013] |
| pcp017747pcs.tc.tufts.edu |
Greetings!
1-3:Thanks for wasting comments. =(
|]agomar-Thanks for blessing me with your poetry, lol it rules!
Strom-Thanks as usual for the constructive criticism, you're a fountain of suggestions, and I appreciate it a lot!
Drefsab-Same goes to you as I said to Strom. It's great to have a rater that actually gives feedback with the numbers.
Wallabystein-LOL,I'll keep your suggestions in mind for the next report that I write. =) Thanks!
.......-Thanks, I know I left out some stuff...I guess I just lost it in the transfer from notes to BR...I'll be more meticulous next time, thanks for the compliments though.
Also, Where are all the commenters? =( My last one sucked hard and still got 18 comments. 3 ratings too...I wonder where everyone is? <sigh> Some that got posted yesterday managed 60+ comments already.
Thanks all!
~Naveed~
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#13  [40069] |
| we-24-24-166-145.we.mediaone.net |
| I thought this was a good report. I'm too tired and can't remember the password to rate this but my rating would be a 7. 3 months ago this woulda been an 8 but the bar is simply higher today |
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