| #1 Fox^1[42760] |
| inehou-pxy06.compaq.com |
uhhhh oooook... 1st :)
Fox^1 |
| #2 Fox^1[42762] |
| inehou-pxy06.compaq.com |
Ok 1st off you need more details. I mean when that huge attack came basically zerg killed the shuttle and that was pretty much it?
I mean what happened any micro? Was there any storms from the HT? Also you need to show more paragraphs. Your grammar needs a little improvement, but so does mine. Sorry this BR just wasn't that good.
3.0
Fox^1 |
| #3 {EkT}~Unibrow[42765] |
| KRLDA010-0370.splitrock.net |
| Eh... Wow. That sucked. |
#4  [42767] |
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| Hmm, nice first effort. Cool that you did a report on two very good players. |
| #5 T_Mac[42768] |
| on-tor-blr-a58-02-689.look.ca |
| paragraphs plz, its late, my eyes hurt |
| #6 DFA[42772] |
| spider-wc021.proxy.aol.com |
This seemed like it would be a great report, but it really did lack details, also there were a few sentances that didn't make a whole lot of sense, ie:
"When Blades Army attackers were gone, Mark decides to attack butcannons."
Maybe but cannons changed his mind? no sure, just check over you report for any typos, and cover battles with more details and you will have a much better report =]
DFA |
| #7 DivvyO[42773] |
| kpcrdc.kp.org |
| "They were two great players, and this fight kicked ass, but your heathen newbie eyes are not able to grasp the ultimate strategies that they utilize, so I will make a bad battle report with pootie grammar and laugh at you all from my Lay-Z-Boy parked in front of my computer while I observe more elite players kill eachother with the grace and style that only people that can get 30 billion points on the ladder (sans hacking) can do." |
| #8 S Warrior[42778] |
| d5090.dtk.chello.nl |
very odd
someone that claims this person he's BR-ing is not very good in english while putting up a br with very odd/annoying grammar mistakes
anyways back to the topic
not enough details
if u didn't put up those compliments about who they were etc the thought of them being newbies would definitely hit me
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| #9 S Warrior[42779] |
| d5090.dtk.chello.nl |
actually
let me rephrase that
"if u didn't put up those compliments about who they were etc the thought of them being "normal players" would definitely hit me
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#10  [42787] |
| HNW0511.RESNET-STUDENT.UPENN.EDU |
heh
I recommend getting a friend of yours to read it before you submit it to the public. |
| #11 BW-sux[42793] |
| bess-proxy.ba.k12.ok.us |
| This report sucked. |
| #12 Tariq[42797] |
| 198.168.49.221 |
| I know this isnt english class but "And <u>putted</u> 3 drones" is english your first language? |
| #13 lect[42803] |
| 64.13.55.77 |
you need to work on your sentence structure, layout, grammar, and spelling. also, a few screenshots would've been nice. also, "Mark sends all of his units to Leader even his peons for a laugh. And Leader was soon to be elminated.." wtf is that? who is Leader?
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| #14 Gob_DaBong[42809] |
| ns.wsd1.org |
LOL
I loved these report was good there wer not any gramerr problems i think it is good becaus they are good when they are so and then when he diesdetal is verry good an i know what always.
This is your first report, and your first attempt at English right? |
| #15 ?????[42811] |
| cache1.gw.utexas.edu |
sucked
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| #16 [WaK]Farmer[42819] |
| nic-160-c201-135.mw.mediaone.net |
| his name is =pLur=Leader not [B_Blade]Leader |
| #17 Tariq[42820] |
| 198.168.49.221 |
| =plur=leader = [b_blade]leader |
| #18 Mogalin[42935] |
| co853273-a.foti1.on.wave.home.com |
| So-so |
| #19 asdf[43148] |
| 160.providence-01-02rs.ri.dial-access.att.net |
| omg i have played mark plenty of times and i have no idea what this 8 yr old is talking about. i have beaten mark plenty of times and im an average player. as far as i know bblade leader is a real good player... way better than mark. mark either got very lucky or im thinking of the wrong bblade elader. |
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