| #1 PeonLover[46479] |
| 13.morristown-16-17rs.nj.dial-access.att.net |
This is so all you who live for first comment don't get it.
ENJOY!!! |
| #2 Blue~Devil[46481] |
| dialups-277.palmer.mtaonline.net |
Dame U!! i wanded First!! heh now i go read the report=]
blue~Devil |
| #3 Hiso[46482] |
| proxy1-external.santab1.ca.home.com |
Great report man.. in only 1 day tho? you are fast.
Btw first who read:) |
| #4 dizdik{F@M}[46483] |
| 139.m66.mon.catskill.net |
| Puzzy wuzzy report, but you could of went into more depth. And also gotten some quotes in the mix |
| #5 Joo[46484] |
| sdn-ar-006mokcitP090.dialsprint.net |
dude, SCV's don't make soup when they die, that's only goons.
otherwise decent report. like i say with most pic reports, try including minimap pics so we can see where exactly the action is happening. let's see more |
| #6 BW-sux = wannabe rater...[46487] |
| spider-wj073.proxy.aol.com |
I thought this report was pretty good. it was a little one-sided though.
8
BW-sux |
| #7 Kralgon[46488] |
| 216.160.142.17 |
| decent report |
| #8 Limp_BIzkit666[46489] |
| 199.182.54.178 |
HMMM, it LOOKED okay, but as i read it, it kinda sucked...
i think more detail could be used... more pictures with ACTION, better recap, and maybe more humor and cooler ending...
you really died out at the end, but the game itself was pretty close in the first few minutes..
oh well...i can't give it an 8... there were few grammartical mistakes, bad pictues, not-so-great text, and some wierd stuff
7...
byeya
p.s-i never miss the sunday night of Fox. FUTURAMA, (king of the hill kinda sucks), SIMPSONS, MALCOM, and the dope ass X-FILES!!! WHEEEEE |
| #9 <font color=yellow>Friendly~Fire</font>[46490] |
| cc326114-b.hwrd1.md.home.com |
| <font color=yellow>Nice report. Good pics, but not enough info.</font> |
| #10 The Asylum[46491] |
| ce-stjh-01-02-e0.cbl.nf.net |
Pretty good report. It was pretty one-sided, but the thing I didn't like was the abrupt ending. It seemed to me like you just got a bit tired of the report and tried to end it quickly with minimum description. Overall though, great job.
P.S-I won't give my rating because I'm not one of the test raters and I don't want to make anybody else think I am. You'll all just have to try and live without my rating :p |
| #11 The Asylum[46492] |
| ce-stjh-01-02-e0.cbl.nf.net |
| Hmmm... Limp and friendly commented while I composed mine. Interesting. |
| #12 Phoenix[46494] |
| node156e4.a2000.nl |
Just repeating what other said:
* Nice pics, but not much action in them
* I miss some in-depth information.
* SCV's don't make good soup. SCV-soup has a nice sound
to it though
* Queens don't make particular good escort for air units ^^
But then again, if this is your first report, nice job.
I go with BW-sux:
<font size=5, color=blue>7</font>
Phoenix |
| #13 PeonLover[46495] |
| 13.morristown-16-17rs.nj.dial-access.att.net |
Thanks for the comments.
There weren't many good battles that weren't covered by swarm.
The queens were used as scouts to see where to go in.
The end wasn't much action. It was 2 lurkers and non attacking buildings vs. that shitload of stuff terran had.
7.33333333. Not bad. And Pheonix. BW-Sux gave me an 8. You meant to agree with Limp. |
| #14 Fox^1[46496] |
| csdi2-proxy.support.compaq.com |
Good report. The game description was lacking. Zerg makes a drop that has queens and lurkers. What happened between the beginning and then? Also all of a sudden he has plague and dark swarm. The pics and the format was good, but maybe you should add more details. Not bad though!
7
Fox^1 |
| #15 CynicalMagician[46498] |
| 24.69.48.15 |
What prog do you use for text image editing? Specifically for the fire/shiny lettering. It reminds me of WilliamWC3 stuff, so could it be that you use Picture Publisher 8 too?
-CynicalMagician |
| #16 PeonLover[46500] |
| 13.morristown-16-17rs.nj.dial-access.att.net |
I use Adobe Photoshop 4.0 with Eyecandy Plugin for the fire/shiny stuff.
Rate it cyn. RATE ME!!!
I want to set the world record for sevens. I already have 3. |
| #17 Peon-Harraser[46501] |
| spider-wl014.proxy.aol.com |
| I havnt read the report yet but it looks decent. Also I just had to say how dare you love Peons<i>!!</i> All they do is just mine too slow and then get killed somehow :) Ok im off to read now. |
| #18 Ashdate[46504] |
| nat201.197.mpoweredpc.net |
A pretty decent report all and all. It was short however; It seemed like it was sort of a back and forth game with no one really having the advantage until the end. I think perhaps those defilers could have been used a bit better (One along with the drop could have been devestating had it been aimed right I think) but all in all a decent report.
6 |
| #19 [46509] |
| spider-wj084.proxy.aol.com |
| 12213214 |
| #20 bongoloid[46510] |
| fw8.intuit.com |
| This report sucked cuz the ending was given away with the first minimap shot. When you included the minimap pic to show where the start locations were, it showed red all over the map and purples barely alive. Thus, I didn't even bother reading it. |
| #21 The Asylum[46511] |
| ce-stjh-01-02-e0.cbl.nf.net |
| Oh yeah, and you might want to watch that "I couldn't kill my last Scv and he had only 5 HPs left and I floated my CC away to the empty place" stuff. Dref got pretty mad with somebody about that not so long ago and it's not really that funny anymore. However, what wallabystein did by making a story out of it in one of his reports was pretty cool. |
| #22 -=-Vicious-=-[46513] |
| ip46.washington21.dc.pub-ip.psi.net |
| WTF? This guy must play terran all the time or something. The guy is a mad m&m+sv rusher. It's sick. He pumps crap out like it's BGH =[ |
| #23 {t4r}KronosIII - Future Rater[46525] |
| ci991207-b.edgewd1.ky.home.com |
Hmmm....not bad for a first. Capitalize your "i"'s and go more in to detail and you'll get golds all the time.
-7 |
| #24 [WP]BlacKnight[46531] |
| 134.240.54.43 |
K, I have been drinking, so this might not be indicative of what I normally think. I actually would break from most people and say 6 (no I am not a test rater, just opinionated). Although good use of pics, the writing was lackluster at best. From what I can tell, no attempt at humor, or anything else really. Not that straight up reporting is bad, your report just didnt really move me...
If you work on your writing style and keep the pics on par or better you will do great things. |
| #25 ::nobody::[46555] |
| dt0f4n84.san.rr.com |
Well...i thought that you had good detail in a few places, but kinda skipped around in other places...
The writing was a tad dull, i would suggest attempting to liven it up a bit and humor is a nice touch (but i wont penalize you for not having it :D)
The pics were nice and useful, but i also noticed that the minimap pic at the beginning showed red dominating :/ There was some definiee effort on the pics tho :)
It was a good report and i contemplated an 8, but i think that there are a good number of areas you can improve on, so i give you a gold and advice to keep on reporting! (you'll get an 8 next time :D)
<b> 7</b>
Ciao!
Nobo
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| #26 Sp|nE[46560] |
| dialup1841-pri.voicenet.com |
pics good, writing/descriptions could use a wee bit of work.
gj tho
7 |
| #27 <b><font color=yellow>Protophobic</font><b>[46564] |
| cm-24-161-0-73.nycap.rr.com |
<font color=yellow>Pics were well crafted and edited, but not the most carefully chosen in my opinion. For example the "Nice Drop" pic of zerg is difficult to decipher.
You did loyally color code appropriately and follow the action textually and fluidly.
Was the centered closing paragraph a mistake? It distracrted from the wholeness of the report.
7 |
#28  [46593] |
| as530015.infocom.com |
Not bad... a decent game that was worth the read.
I'm gonna go ahead and slap my 7 down to go along with everyone elses... :)
Cheers,
Dref |
| #29 ?????[46612] |
| cache1.gw.utexas.edu |
For a first report, that's not bad. Here's what I thought was kinda amusing:
PeonLover wrote:
"The game started normal for the terran player with a rather NORMAL, yet ODD build."
Hmmm...how could the build order be nomral and odd at the same time?? |
| #30 Elendale[46645] |
| 205-213-43-67.sdlax.k12.wi.us |
Wow! That was your first report? It looked real nice. I say an 8, might have been 9 (gasp) but it was a bit rough around the edges. I'm looking forward to your reports in the future
-Elendale
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| #31 Mellinium_Ben21[46648] |
| spider-wn022.proxy.aol.com |
How much you wanna bet the lucky guy who becomes a rater will go back and rate all of his at 10?
If I was rating this would get an 8,Expansion DENIED is overused.As for Lost Temple itself:WHEN THE $%^# ARE THEY GONNA MAKE ANOTHER MAP USED AS MUCH AS BGH AND TEMPLE?!?!?!?!?!Just ranting.Later=/ |
| #32 Asty[46649] |
| spider-wn063.proxy.aol.com |
| Yeah... I'll give you a 7 too. It was a nice report...just not as good as most I've read. They usually have more humor and quotes in them... like the one's on Tao's site...those are nice.... written by Stranix and peeps..well nice job though...peace out yo! |
| #33 Melvin[46653] |
| proxy3.frmt1.sfba.home.com |
| "Tonight I dine on SCV soup" comes from a Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles quote... Shredder says "Tonight I dine on turtle soup!" so booya. |
| #34 Homy_F8[46756] |
| user-33qtgoc.dialup.mindspring.com |
Remember my report? Let's all start voting on mine!!
-10 |
| #35 [49709] |
| haz69.kih.net |
SCV's GO POP!!!
no soup |
| #36 ~ZC~k@o$[49726] |
| spider-wb043.proxy.aol.com |
Nice BR. I liked it and looks like u will have a good carreer. How can i get in touch with you so maybe u can give me tips on writing BR's?
8
Peace
-KaOS |
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