| #1 Monty Pylon[47995] |
| client-115-129.bellatlantic.net |
Look for games 2+3 See you next time
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| #2 TheGaur[47999] |
| freenet-in2-p102.isholf.is |
| This sucks ass |
| #3 +InsAnE+[48001] |
| cacheflow4.sasknet.sk.ca |
| HAH i laugh at u haha |
| #4 BW-sux[48014] |
| spider-ta082.proxy.aol.com |
| HTML would be nice (tables)... |
| #5 Ashdate[48017] |
| nat195.5.mpoweredpc.net |
I'm not entirely sure what the problem is with the paragraph spacing (probably my monitor spacing), but I'm guessing it's that you were throwing 'br' tags every which way. Let the paragraphs conform to their own path (eg don't throw any line skippers in em) and jsut throw a 'p' tag or two 'br' tags at the end of a paragraph and start your next paragraph directly after.
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| #6 person[48024] |
| 1Cust250.tnt8.lax1.da.uu.net |
| is it just me or did mines started attacking scv's |
#7 [48025] |
| as530005.infocom.com |
You don't need <br> tags if you're just gonna type it out.
I'm not sure if it was the spacing or the writing, but I had a really hard time following this battle. I read the whole thing through twice and I'm still not sure who was who and who won... :(
You need to make your writing clearer. Try to find some way to distinguish the two players, especially if they are both using the same race (i.e. both terran in this report). Try using <font> tags. Red and Blue would have helped in this report. For example <font color=red>Hammer</font> would show up like this: <font color=red>Hammer</font>. Using colors helps the reader keep track of who is who.
Use paragraphs and the preview button to make sure everything looks okay and is spaced okay. This will make your report easier to read as well.
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Dref |
| #8 CHiPs[48036] |
| kmlp01m07-69.bctel.ca |
| umm, ya, mines dont attack peon units, which i figured out the hard way in many-a-game. |
| #9 Spuzz[48039] |
| jfsn-01-189.dialup.netins.net |
Let's have parts 2 and 3.
Spuzz |
| #10 Monty Pylon[48047] |
| client-209-158-180-3.bellatlantic.net |
I wish to thank those of you who have given me advice and insight to writing a good BR. I don't know what happened on the spacing and I hope to correct the problem next time.
As for the peon mistake, I was busy watching the air fight and missed what the mines had hit. Dogg was bitching about losing peons and I assumed that they were the casualties. I personally had never seen a mine attack a peon but I took his word for it.
As for those who wish to sh*t on this report. I freely welcome you to read elsewhere and cordually ask you to give insight instead of this sucks ass.
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| #11 TZ[48049] |
| 212.143.87.162 |
Dont bother . Either make some effort or dont post .
post.advice!=post.flame
Have a nice day
TZ |
| #12 witz...[dNs][48061] |
| 193.171.63.31 |
bullsh*t.. since when do mines attack scv´s??
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| #13 Just An Idea[48063] |
| cp-cache1.cpinternet.com |
| I really really really dont think you should make the other 2. |
| #14 afd[48064] |
| cp-cache1.cpinternet.com |
| <font color=red>moo</font> |
| #15 afd[48065] |
| cp-cache1.cpinternet.com |
| <font color=red>Hammer</font> |
| #16 <font color=yellow>Phoenix</font>[48066] |
| node156e4.a2000.nl |
Just for those people that are still uncertain:
<font color=deeppink><b>Mines don't attack workers.</b></font>
As well as the don't attack enemy vultures and your won units (duh).
Let me give comments:
<ul>
<li>Monty Pylon is still a cool name
<li>I had a very hard time following the course of the game
<li>The game was better than last time, at least as far as I could follow
<li>The BR is worse though
<li><i><b>Maybe</i></b> you should add pics (emphasize "maybe")
</ul>
My rating for this report is a
<font color=blue size=5>3</font>
Phoenix |
| #17 <font color=yellow>Phoenix</font>[48067] |
| node156e4.a2000.nl |
<i>Correction of comment #16</i>
third line should read:
"As well as the<b>y</b> don't attack enemy vultures and your <b>own</b> units."
In case anyone wondered what "won units" were..=]
Phoenix |
| #18 Curious[48080] |
| 168.168.234.60 |
| What's a "Terran fraction?" Is that a piece of a marine cut off by the enemy? :-) |
| #19 ~PL~CloudStrife[48081] |
| ci991207-b.edgewd1.ky.home.com |
My workers like killing my own mines. It's funny to see <font color=red>hammers</font> scv's commit suicide. =) < br > tags don't work. just use < p >.
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| #20 <font color=red>Friendly~Fire</font>[48093] |
| cc326114-b.hwrd1.md.home.com |
| <font color=red>Uh Phoenix, mines have splash like tanks, so they can attack your own units. For example, once I played a temple game, I was toss, and the opponent was terran. He did a 4 vulture drop on me, and he started laying mines everywhere. I tried to attack with my goons, but the mines popped, and damaged my goons, but also killed my probes. End result = all my peons dead, and 4 dead vultures.</font> |
#21 [48095] |
| csdi2-proxy.support.compaq.com |
I am unsure if you were using BR tags or not, but as you can see the spacing was rathing messed up. The BR was not easy to follow as well.
Like Dref said try to seperate the 2 players into colors so it makes the BR a little more colorful and easier to follow.
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Fox^1 |
| #22 person[48155] |
| 1Cust82.tnt2.lax1.da.uu.net |
| actually friendly~fire, mines don't attack your own units. it's just the splash damage that hurt your own units. so bascially if your units are to close the unit the mine targets and detonates on that unit, your unit(s) will get hurt. |
| #23 <font color=yellow>Phoenix</font>[48376] |
| node156e4.a2000.nl |
Dear Mr. Friendly~Fire
<b>DO I SOUND LIKE A TOTAL NEWBIE???</b>
(...stupid question...)
That mines can damage your workers does not mean they attack them. If a tank's splash kills my own marines, does that mean the tanks have attacked my marines??
Something I was just wondering on splash BTW:
And why did Blizzard decide to not let the scarab splash damage your own units? Anyone cares to elaborate. It still confuses me (though I <font color=deeppink><i>Love</i></font> Reavers..)
Phoenix
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| #24 Marena[142428] |
| h24-84-21-27.vs.shawcable.net |
| what does this place do???!!! |