| #1 T.T.Boy[1425] |
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Another good report .Praetor. One suggestion is to put some more emotion into the story. Instead of "one marine killed, two bats killed, three zeals killed, etc", which sounds like a news report, let the emotions flow as grunts lose their best buddies, the anger, the hatred, the angst, the sorrow, the fear, let it all show in the actions and words of the charectors. This is war, man. And war is hell.
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| #2 templar of doom[1538] |
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| or add a lurker or 10, then there would be no need for them to say they ever lived |
| #3 Greenish-Coloured-Fungus[3369] |
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| Heehee i agree with templar, but i think turning some of the dead zlots into a dragoon might be kewl! |
| #4 ~Talon~ (cx110054-a.pwy1.sdca.home.com)[21977] |
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| how could there only be 5 comments on a 10 report???? |
| #5 Seeka[23956] |
| d133.gemlink.com |
Heres another comment, just for the hell of it
good report.
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#6  [26760] |
| fjwilson.reshall.ucsd.edu |
| Posted this report in the same 24 hours of the first one, when the site didn't have all that many visitors. Most of the comments just stayed on PLC I. |
| #7 YOURGOD[27162] |
| dialup-166.90.45.108.SanFrancisco1.Level3.net |
| I want MORE!! |
| #8 shady_soldier17[46656] |
| 207-172-93-44.s44.tnt2.abr.md.dialup.rcn.com |
| great report, i see why it got a 10. keep on writing |
| #9 the()vermind[89138] |
| user-2ivea9v.dialup.mindspring.com |
| he he, April 9,2001. I'm from the future, SELL MICROSOFT AND DELL! |
| #10 .Praetor[102307] |
| cookies.csus.edu |
| The best time to buy stocks is immediately after or during a market crash. |
| #11 UltimateFire[113241] |
| spider-ntc-tc083.proxy.aol.com |
| dang almost top 10 on a .Praetor report, oh well, maybe I should have been here 2 years ago =P |
| #12 Yes[138511] |
| 1Cust158.tnt4.fredericksburg.va.da.uu.net |
| I agree. |
| #13 Timid[141372] |
| 198.134.2.2 |
| 5-23-03 |
| #14 4177[150991] |
| dialup-4.232.24.202.Dial1.LosAngeles1.Level3.net |
THIS REOPRT sucks nuts man u all should gert a lfe and then fuck urself up ur asses bunch of motherfuckun mofos
i own u all
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| #15 .Praetor[152774] |
| c-67-172-163-127.client.comcast.net |
| Weird, a spam comment on an old report. *shrug* |
| #16 maareek[152792] |
| mblt-ac012.gtcom.net |
There's a lot more of them then you might think. As for a non-spam comment...can't find one.
I like this part more than part 1, and I thought part 1 was great. |
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