| #1 [HK]Grin'in[49215] |
| 254.0212.mel.iprimus.net.au |
Well, my first BR is done. Because this is my first I want lot’s of constructive criticism because I want to advance my BR skills. FLAME AWAY! - But only if it will help me :)
- [HK]Grin'in |
| #2 <font color="deeppink"><u>Duke-Nukem</u></font>[49218] |
| 209.88.197.162 |
<font size=5>W</font>hoopee.
First (non author that is, damn the authors who comment first on their own reports :-)
Now 2 Read.
Firsts: 7
Firsts (non/a): 5
Top 5: 327 |
| #3 [HK]Grin'in[49227] |
| 254.0212.mel.iprimus.net.au |
Did you even read it?
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| #4 <font color=yellow>Protophobic</font>[49228] |
| cm-24-161-2-135.nycap.rr.com |
| <font color=yellow>Top Five. |
| #5 <font color=yellow>Protophobic</font>[49229] |
| cm-24-161-2-135.nycap.rr.com |
<font color=yellow>And just to round out the Top Five...
:) |
| #6 [HK]Grin'in[49231] |
| 254.0212.mel.iprimus.net.au |
Thanks for all your input guys. I know I'll be writing better BR from now on!
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| #7 <font color="deeppink"><u>Duke-Nukem</u></font>[49234] |
| 209.88.197.162 |
<font size=5>H</font>eh, hey [HK]Grin'in, don't get a flip-over :-) i said i'll read it.
i really like how you add a touch of story to the report.
From what little graphics you incorporated, i can see that HTML isn't new to you - so why not make it that much more graphical ? With all due respect to the best text there is, some graphics won't hurt.
Very good for a first report, i think. You could have done much better, though - and this is meant as a compliment.
<font size=4 color="deeppink">7</font> |
| #8 <font color="deeppink"><u>Duke-Nukem</u></font>[49236] |
| 209.88.197.162 |
<font size=5>O</font>h, and <font color="yellow">Protophobic</font>, Top 5 is MY style, u stick with Firsts and non-authors :-/
Heh. |
| #9 BackStabingLiar[49271] |
| 63.239.42.130 |
thios game sucked, you deserved to lose. four buildings.
peace
BackStabingLiar |
| #10 [HK]Grin'in[49290] |
| 254.0212.mel.iprimus.net.au |
Thanks Duke-Nukem. The above comments weren’t meant seriously, I did them in good humor (Or sarcasm) and no offense was to be taken :)
BackStabbingLair, what are you talking about? Four buildings?
- [HK]Grin’in
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| #11 [49295] |
| 63.239.42.130 |
"I start the production of two starports after realizing I didn’t have one! Oopps…….
At this point in time [HK]Phoenix thought it would be funny to drop 2 tanks above my natural expansion with about 10 wraiths as support. Because of my late production of the starports (I now have a further two building, that makes four now) I didn’t have enough wraiths to nullify this little drop."
<p>--[hk]grin'in
I was referring to the second paragraph here, and i didnt realize u were continuing the same idea. I thought u repeated yourself and meant 4 buildings total, 2 starports, 1 rax, 1 factory.
Im sorry I was mad tired and pissed off this morning. Now that I reread it at 5 and I'm going home, I can see that this was not as bad a game as i thought it was, and i never meant to criticize the BR! it was truly, pretty good.
peace
BackStabingLiar |
| #12 Your Mommas Cock[49302] |
| user-2inihg3.dialup.mindspring.com |
| kool |
| #13 ~PL~CloudStrife[49321] |
| ci991207-b.edgewd1.ky.home.com |
| Gosu! Your pretty good at this. I know you were playing and all but a little more detail is always a good thing. Upgrade checks, mini-map checks ect. Pics are good too. Watching, not playing a game helps you get more detail/pics and such. Bye now. |
| #14 [HK]Grin'in[49357] |
| 254.0212.mel.iprimus.net.au |
Thanks CloudStrife!
Next time I do a BR I will be planning to do so there will be pics and upgrade checks and other stuff. I wish someone would rate it :)
- [HK]Grin'in |
| #15 [49359] |
| 254.0212.mel.iprimus.net.au |
Crap!
I just noticed that the pic at the end isn't working! It woked when I previewed it. Damn. I'll go check if it uploaded properly.
- [HK]Grin'in |
#16  [49424] |
| csdi2-proxy.support.compaq.com |
This was not bad. But next time you do this you should be an observer and not a player. I mean it's ok to be a player, but you have talent to make it so much better.
The match seemed rather quick, or you didn't add enough details. Both of which can be because you were playing and couldn't keep up with everything that was going on. Good job though
6
Fox^1 |
| #17 [HK]Grin'in[49434] |
| 254.0212.mel.iprimus.net.au |
I intend to do my next BR as an observer, and add a lot more detail. Thanks for the encouragement!
[HK]Grin'in |
| #18 angrysalad[49809] |
| 216-215-61-6.flash.net |
| its refreshing to have a BR from the viewpoint of a player. Observed games get kinda wearing sometimes. Nice report |
| #19 [HK]Grin'in[50154] |
| 254.0212.mel.iprimus.net.au |
Why thank-you :)
I Like to hear positive comments! :)
My next BR will actually be fictional and it will have a song at the end! Just wait and I'll have it to you soon!
- [HK]Grin'in |
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