| #1 <font color="blue">Blue~Devil</font>[49307] |
| dialups-632.palmer.mtaonline.net |
| First! First! YES! |
| #2 <font color=teal>Silent_Sniper</font>[49308] |
| cc576077-a.vron1.nj.home.com |
| Don't you think that 14 bunkers is *cough* a little too much? A little short too. |
| #3 Starookie[49311] |
| edtn009147.hs.telusplanet.net |
Hahahahahaha! The marine's body was "riddled" ??? (Must look like a piece of swiss cheese then...hehehehe)
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| #4 Starookie[49312] |
| edtn009147.hs.telusplanet.net |
Hahahahahaha! The marine's body was "riddled" ??? (Must look like a piece of swiss cheese then...hehehehe)
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| #5 BladeofDark[49317] |
| c790560-a.smateo1.sfba.home.com |
14 bunkers? geez how many turtles are out there? no wonder people dont play that much terran anymore (though im a terran only =])
BladeofDark |
| #6 +InsAnE+[49319] |
| cacheflow4.sasknet.sk.ca |
| what point of BR??? |
| #7 [49320] |
| dialup-209.245.113.197.Weehawken1.Level3.net |
| whats up with everyone writing all these fanfics lately? = |
| #8 Peons4Ever[49325] |
| d16-kt01-ktnr-pdi.attcanada.net |
fan fic is cool dude...
good job, i liked it |
| #9 Shepherd[49326] |
| cm-24-161-49-168.nycap.rr.com |
Gee. . .It doesn't seem to be finished.
To repeat what I said,
<b>IT AIN'T OVER UNTIL A FAT ZERGLING SINGS!!!</b> |
| #10 probe[49327] |
| 242849hfc100.tampabay.rr.com |
<script>alert("probe is cool~")</script>
noooooooooo.
12 year old fanfics SUCK.
im going to the country, im gonna build alot of bunkers...
im going TO the countryyyy, im gonna build a lot of bunkers...
millions of bunkers, bunkers for me...
..millions of bunkers, bunkers for me...
yeeeeeehaw! |
| #11 probe[49328] |
| 242849hfc100.tampabay.rr.com |
asdf~~~~~
i meant
12 year olds WRITING fanfincs SUCK.
:}
major error, minor correction. |
| #12 [WaK]Farmer[49329] |
| nic-160-c201-135.mw.mediaone.net |
I love when brs have endings I don't understand
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| #13 <font color=teal> Silent_Sniper </font[49330] |
| cc576077-a.vron1.nj.home.com |
| hey probe, i bet you are a 12 year old yourself. You sure act like one. |
| #14 Shepherd[49331] |
| cm-24-161-49-168.nycap.rr.com |
| SOMEONE STOP THAT PROBE-POPUP-MAKER!!!!! IT'S DRIVING ME CRAZY! |
| #15 <font color=yellow>Protophobic</font>[49332] |
| cm-24-161-2-135.nycap.rr.com |
| <font color=yellow>Lack of paragraphs makes Proto's eyeballs bleed |
| #16 Starblaze[49346] |
| MIAMA020-1309.splitrock.net |
| Being a 16 YEAR OLD newbie, I'm not sure if replying to my own fanfic is approproate, but to bad. I apologize for errors, and the general imcomprehensible style of writing, but what can I say? The 14 bunkers was a mistake, typing error, meant to be 8, dont ask how I messed that one up, but I did, so live with it! :p Still I agree, even 8 is alot, this was written after an easy win over some newer newbie, who turtled up pretty well. Guess that is all I have to say, 'cept if you want more, then ask :) |
| #17 ~`-`~[49347] |
| MIAMA020-1309.splitrock.net |
PROBE IS NOT COOL :P
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| #18 <font color="red"><big> Executor</big></font>[49361] |
| p471-tnt4.akl.ihug.co.nz |
Yah I agree Probe Sux.
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| #19 GAY[49364] |
| spider-ti012.proxy.aol.com |
| what the fuck is this u waste time writing this shit? lol. sad. |
| #20 <font color=yellow>Phoenix</font>[49366] |
| node156e4.a2000.nl |
Don't post half stories damnit.
<script>alert("probe is annoying")</script> |
| #21 The_darkmercy[49372] |
| 142.227.251.77 |
| great br a 9 |
| #22 Warfare[49376] |
| 209-63-113-57.sea.jps.net |
Strange change of POV. Stick with the SCV or start with the general, teh switch is confusing.
Warfare |
| #23 Starblaze[49377] |
| MIAMA020-1332.splitrock.net |
Thanks for all the, ::cough:: comments, and help, if I'm not stoned first by angry vagina baskets (Probe) then I guess I'll finish it, or start a new one, with one point of view, thanks again!
Starblaze |
| #24 DonnyBeast[49378] |
| spider-ti041.proxy.aol.com |
Kudos to starblaze, I liked the POV change. To all you morons who don't have anything better to do than ridicule this guy I've got something to say to you: "If you don't have something nice to say, don't say anything at all." My mother taught me that, and I'm sorry to hear yours have skimped in that lesson. Don't get me wrong, constructive criticism is a good thing, but some of you could be a lot nicer, Probe specifically.
--The Beast |
| #25 Aquamarine[49386] |
| 204.164.198.202 |
| If someone is going to write fiction, it shouldnt be as in game as this. this was basically a br disguised as fanfic. Like when it says an scv was building an academy off in the corner....that doesnt bode well in real fiction, only in a starcraft game. |
#26  [49425] |
| csdi2-proxy.support.compaq.com |
This was o.k. Although you may want to use paragraphs and make sure everything is spaced out correctly. Looks kinda jumbled, but things like that can be fixed easily and would have made this BR much more enjoyable to read. Don't stop!
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Fox^1 |
| #27 Viper$[49514] |
| spider-tn043.proxy.aol.com |
Why is everybody making fanfics? I like fanfics as much as the next guy but enough is enough. Probe, you are gay. If I see one more "Probe is cool" popup I am going to personally go to your house and do not nice things to you wich you won't soon forget. About the BR, don't post incomplete stories and don't do BRs on newbies (or newbish strategies). Good race choice though.
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