| #1 ![49416] |
| slip-32-101-120-124.il.us.prserv.net |
| hey hey |
#2  [49417] |
| dt031n2f.tampabay.rr.com |
haha
get your own name tho =o |
| #3 probe[49418] |
| 242849hfc162.tampabay.rr.com |
| hehehe pretty funny |
| #4 Ethel_The_Frog[49419] |
| 207.198.174.22 |
| Sorry Newt, but I'm a big Monty Python fan. Guilty as charged. |
#5  [49422] |
| csdi2-proxy.support.compaq.com |
Um if you going to do stuff like this, make it longer. Your writing has potential, so if your going to do more of these try harder.
2
Fox^1 |
| #6 Ummm[49423] |
| adsl-63-204-75-108.dsl.scrm01.pacbell.net |
I didn't get it
make it longer, include more details...
Work hard, a paragraph or 2 of fan fic wont get you anywhere
in summary
try not to suck so much
thx gw =[ |
| #7 Glak[49426] |
| 177.cambridge-11-12rs.ma.dial-access.att.net |
| I liked it. I think making it short was a very good decision. It would have been dumb if it was long but as something short it works well. |
| #8 powerman5000[49427] |
| spider-wd013.proxy.aol.com |
| yes very good decision on making it short because not everyone has time to read br's all day. |
| #9 powerman5000[49428] |
| spider-wd013.proxy.aol.com |
| especially people that have yet to finish hooked on phonix, like me =0 hehe........ |
| #10 Shepherd[49429] |
| cm-24-161-51-238.nycap.rr.com |
| My favorite part of this? Seeing the face of the "Rater Orc" exclaiming at the number. |
| #11 ~Toaster[49431] |
| ppp197.57-253-207.hull.mt.videotron.net |
| That was funny! I like it! |
| #12 Landon[49432] |
| dyn42.c5200-1.king-george.246.crosslink.net |
| This was great! Why did it get such a crappy rating? Philistines! |
| #13 miserableman[49450] |
| porus.mcc.wwwcache.ja.net |
Hahahahaha!! Funny as hell!! How much worse could it have been?? Hahahahaha!!!
Admin, delete this please.
mis
PS what the hell was it about? |
| #14 Yeesh..[49466] |
| slip-32-101-121-192.il.us.prserv.net |
Why does something have to be long to be good? The shortness of this was deliberate, and it was hysterical. I don't think it could have been improved upon.
Could've at least given it a 6 or something : |
| #15 British[FTL][49470] |
| 204.245.4.12 |
I mean, he COULD have made it longer, but really now. Didn't the Starcraft manual say something about how the average lifespan of a Marine is approximately 7 seconds?
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| #16 ~PL~CloudStrife[49491] |
| ci991207-b.edgewd1.ky.home.com |
| It was funny, but you could have worked harder. Whats up with all the fan fics lately.....yeesh... |
| #17 Yeesh[49505] |
| slip-32-101-120-141.il.us.prserv.net |
| Some of the most respected poems ever made were only 5 or 6 lines long. Why write a novel when a paragraph works just as well or even better? |
| #18 Viper$[49516] |
| spider-tn043.proxy.aol.com |
ANOTHER FANFIC AHHHH!!!! When will they ever stop?
Kinda short and pointless. Good writing though. I hate when this happens to me. The terran should have won with a CG of vultures or BC's. Otherwise OK.
Terrans own |
| #19 probe[49523] |
| 242849hfc131.tampabay.rr.com |
"With the addition of Medics of the field, the life expectancy of the marine is now greater than the average 8 seconds"
- SC game manual |
| #20 -xdragon-[49827] |
| 209.67.161.34 |
| LOL. You guys are cracking me up. |
| #21 -xdragon-[49829] |
| 209.67.161.34 |
| The story is pretty good. Only one thing is strange: How can you be your own friend Jim? And you died twice... and yet... ack... maybe need to rephrase the first two pronoun, and mention them as your friends instead of "I". |
| #22 Viper$[49885] |
| spider-tq013.proxy.aol.com |
<P ALIGN=center>He was changing the piont of view each time a new marine came out -xdragon-
<P ALIGN=left><font color="red">T</font><font color="blue">e</font><font color="white">r</font><font color="yellow">r</font><font color="green">a</font><font color="purple">n</font><font color="aqua">s</font> <font color="orange">o</font><font color="lime">w</font><font color="silver">n</font> |
| #23 -xdragon-[49907] |
| 209.67.161.34 |
| I know... but it's still weird :P |
| #24 Limp_BIzkit666[49909] |
| 206.117.45.191 |
BLAHHHHHHHHHH
BLAHHHHHH
BLAHHHH!!
byeya
p.s-crap shit. good idea, poor execution. 3 |
| #25 no[50094] |
| spider-wd041.proxy.aol.com |
| NONONONONONONONONONONO |
| #26 gay[50096] |
| spider-wd041.proxy.aol.com |
| That was gay |
| #27 Billy Bob[61059] |
| proxy2-external.mntp1.il.home.com |
This is my favorite report ever.
<B>EVER</b><i>!!!</i> |
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