| #1 Viper$[49552] |
| spider-tn071.proxy.aol.com |
I AM FIRST HAHAHAHA!!!
now to read the report.
Terran own |
| #2 Viper$[49554] |
| spider-tn071.proxy.aol.com |
This story sucked. The protoss just stood by and let the terran kill them while they tried to convert him or something. The terran had almost godly fire power (4 shots to kill a high templar come on) The only good thing is that the terrans won. This story could actually be good if you put more into it. You could make a much larger story out of it in wich you would tell us why the protoss kept trying to convert him. As for the writing style it was very discreptive and well formed. But writing can't make up for a bad story. Better luck next time
Terrans own |
| #3 Belt[49635] |
| p121.netwood.net |
| I apologize for the inconvenience I have caused to your community. I pledge that I shall never post another story again. I shall just be another ordinary reader. |
| #4 <font color="red"><big> Executor</big></font>[49657] |
| cache3.ihug.co.nz |
Protoaa should annihilate those stupid little terran
PS. And by the way in the beginning of original SC who bombed terran worlds from orbit? Protoss did! and did they anything? Nothing! And who got their ass kicked by zerg? terran! |
| #5 <font color="red"><big> Executor</big></font>[49658] |
| cache3.ihug.co.nz |
Protoss should annihilate those stupid little terran
PS. And by the way in the beginning of original SC who bombed terran worlds from orbit? Protoss did! and did they anything? Nothing! And who got their ass kicked by zerg? terran! |
| #6 BackStabingLiar[49779] |
| 63.239.42.130 |
yo Belt, these guys are idiots for trashing your shit like this, seriously, they didnt like it cause "terran ownz!!!" and because "toss nuked terran in original SC." Fuck that shit, this story, like My War was awesome. really imaginative. i hope you didnt write the comments about never posting again because of these guys.
peace
BackStabingLiar |
| #7 [49947] |
| spider-tf061.proxy.aol.com |
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| #8 [49948] |
| spider-tf061.proxy.aol.com |
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| #9 radicator[50007] |
| ren.ncsa.uiuc.edu |
Some of Belt's fanfics were good (part 1 or the threesome was cool) but this was completely random stuff... almost made belt seem like a writer who didn't do enuf research.
1. High Templars don't fight (darks do..)
2. Neither Templar convert. (archons)
3. Even though you have a writer's liscence, you can't twist stuff completely (seems like terrans fought some overwhelming odds, more like james bond stuff with the ghost hero of yours) |
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