| #1 wAr2wIz})FA({[49586] |
| cr12888-a.etob1.on.wave.home.com |
| <B>first! |
| #2 <font color=yellow>Protophobic</font>[49589] |
| cm-24-161-2-135.nycap.rr.com |
| <font color=yellow>Second? |
| #3 Shepherd[49594] |
| cm-24-161-50-172.nycap.rr.com |
| Third? |
| #4 Sp|nE[49600] |
| dialup0739-pri.voicenet.com |
| eigth |
| #5 Sp|nE[49601] |
| dialup0739-pri.voicenet.com |
| wait a minute ... |
| #6 Sp|nE[49602] |
| dialup0739-pri.voicenet.com |
| i just realized i didnt even spell "eighth" right |
| #7 Phoenix-S-[49608] |
| r-177.113.alltel.net |
| Ninth? |
| #8 2Inadequate[49610] |
| 112.chicago-05-10rs.il.dial-access.att.net |
| WTF is with all these gay comments... who gives a damn about order |
| #9 <font color="blue">Blue~Devil</font>[49616] |
| dialups-492.palmer.mtaonline.net |
| NINTH! And i care *sniff* about the order. |
| #10 Viper$[49629] |
| spider-tf012.proxy.aol.com |
Tenth
OK report. The writing was easy to follow and you didn't leave any story gaps. But you did make a few mistakes: first of all wraiths don't have shields and second why did everyone decloak before attacking this isn't Star Trek you now. Also the story had no point. Otherwise pretty good.
Terrans own |
| #11 Belt[49632] |
| p121.netwood.net |
| I apologize for the inconvenience I have caused to your community. I pledge that I shall never post another story again. I shall just be another ordinary reader. |
| #12 KoolManBloke[49766] |
| webcache-15.p.ps.ifl.net |
thats the spirit. now never speek agen.
p.s. 12th |
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