| #1 Templar569[51707] |
| 168.168.234.60 |
Wheee! First!
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| #2 Templar569[51709] |
| 168.168.234.60 |
| Ok, I read it now. Another good report on a hard fought game! Nice work. |
| #3 Dark-Berzerker[51714] |
| d2-kt01-ktnr-pdi.attcanada.net |
awesome report good work
i like the movie of the minimap |
#4  [51715] |
| rliv113.infocom.com |
I loved the color scheme on this report and it was a pretty good game too. I think one thing that would improve your report would be to describe the battle scenes in a little more detail. The writing seemed to be a little rushed. Still, this was a good report, very pleasing to the eye.
8
Cheers,
Dref |
| #5 ovinder[51718] |
| erbium-asy-67.rutgers.edu |
I agree with Dref about battle scenes. Also, the upgrade picture would have been helpful.
As for why zergie lost, it didn't seem like it was cause he was powering too hard. It seemed to be cause he let toss consistently take the initiative and dictate the tempo. Also, toss had his mineral only virtually unguarded for much of the game, but zergie never capitalized on its nearly unguarded state until quite late.
Also, if zergie wanted expansions all over the map, he really needed a containment force outside the toss main / natural to prevent toss from cherry-picking which expansion he wanted to destroy. If toss had been forced to fight his way through a large containment force before attacking expansions, his speed and effectiveness at taking out expansions would have been greatly reduced. |
| #6 ovinder[51719] |
| erbium-asy-67.rutgers.edu |
| Oops. Meant to add that this was a very good BR. |
#7  [51722] |
| 206.148.3.198 |
Yeah what Dref said, but you did wait like 10 years to post this. Great job! But we had plenty of battles that weren't described very well. But still good job.
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Fox^1 |
| #8 ::nobody::[51726] |
| dt0f4n84.san.rr.com |
Fox, where did you get such godly toss v zerg skills? hehehehe Great game to you both and nice report Proto :O
Ciao!
Nobo |
| #9 Starookie[51728] |
| edtn007640.hs.telusplanet.net |
| Good report, nice picture editing done......seemingly tho, it seemed kinda one sided....toss dominated =p anyhoo its alllll good ^^. |
| #10 Talon[51730] |
| cx110054-a.pwy1.sdca.home.com |
| i dont know what you mean by mysterious but voted for probe cuz he smurfs a lot |
| #11 Bane[51731] |
| fcs01asm.asm.bellsouth.net |
that game sucked =[ plus it happened like 2 months ago when i powered so hard it wasnt even funny =[
but anyway, ok report, lots of typos and stuff but good pictures, etc.
Bane |
| #12 <font color=yellow>Protophobic</font>[51733] |
| cm-24-161-2-135.nycap.rr.com |
| <FONT COLOR=YELLOW>There were no typos. I'm very careful about spelling and grammar. |
| #13 Bane[51739] |
| fcs01asm.asm.bellsouth.net |
You're right I'm sorry I just skimmed it and the weirdness of the spacing and stuff made it seem that way, now that I've read the whole thing there weren't typos.
And btw, don't put my name in pink :P :) |
| #14 <font color=yellow>Protophobic</font>[51740] |
| cm-24-161-2-135.nycap.rr.com |
| <fonr color=yellow>Heh. Purple was a little too dark on a black background. Sorry =] |
| #15 CynicalMagician[51741] |
| px1cl.gv.wave.shaw.ca |
Dive right in.
Writing: Good stuff, for the most part. Some somewhat undescribed battles, but for the most part it was good. I like seeing a little more humour, but that's just me. It was very easy to follow, and it did seem to flow well though. As you said before, no grammar errors.
Images: Unfortunately, although the images were good, they had a very washed out and 'dead' look to them. Also, some of the text imaging was hard to read (although not really). The animation at the end looked a little weird though... It's mostly just the brightness of the pics that got me though. In whatever photoeditor you use, just screw with the brightness/contrast settings, and they should look more vibrant.
Appearance: I loved it. The borders, the justification, it all looked great. Black and dark red go well together. However, I agree with bane that you shouldn't put his name in pink..
Overall: Good stuff. I knew the outcome from the getgo unfortunately, as I know that reynard=fox.. That was kindof annoying, but no biggy. All in all, good stuff. Make more.
-CynicalMagician |
| #16 <font color=yellow>Protophobic</font>[51748] |
| cm-24-161-2-135.nycap.rr.com |
| <font color=yellow>BTW the little cartoon of the Fox i made myself. |
| #17 Certs[51754] |
| spider-wq052.proxy.aol.com |
| Nice report very cool although it would be cool if there was more details like how many gates he had and upgrade feautures |
| #18 Limp_Bizkit666[51775] |
| la-ip-1-12.dynamic.ziplink.net |
man, a nice very visual battlereport... yet, half of the report, the "report" of the "battlereport" section was taken for granted...
although the pics were fine, the borders looked great and the game was pretty fun, you could have really used some more action in the writing...
it really seemed like coming out of a kid, not giving much detail....
still, a nice eye-candy and by the time and effort you put into this BR, 8 is justified..
great work, dude.. now if you will just promote me on yeer bot... =]
oh well, got to go celebrate.. LAKERS WON THE CHAMPIONSHIP!!!!
byeya
p.s-i've waited 4 years to see this day.... |
| #19 S_Warrior[51790] |
| d5090.dtk.chello.nl |
whee
Fox^1 rules man =)
this br was kewl 2 =) |
| #20 T_Mac[51802] |
| on-tor-blr-a58-02-585.look.ca |
Yes there was a typo, you said "and and" :p
anyway, good report, gay poll |
| #21 ProtectorofAiur[51805] |
| coswebproxy1.core.hp.com |
I don't get the poll
good report Proto |
| #22 Bane[51807] |
| fcs01asm.asm.bellsouth.net |
I don't get the poll either, but I think it's good I only have 1 vote =]
Bane |
| #23 BW-sux[51810] |
| spider-wl041.proxy.aol.com |
Other than the game being on temple, this report is cool.
8
BW-sux |
| #24 <marquee behavior="alternate">EnThuseD</marquee>[51832] |
| clt-pxy04.firstunion.com |
good report, i found it very easy to follow.
proto, less gay reports PLZ THX GW GL GJ...GG?
-- typical obnoxious nohunter
so that is how you spell ^ that word
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| #25 <marquee behavior="alternate">EnThuseD</marquee>[51833] |
| clt-pxy04.firstunion.com |
did i mention i hate html?
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| #26 SlingsNArrows[51837] |
| bgm-24-95-150-230.stny.rr.com |
| how did the T-10x ( or whatever his name is) report beat this by a full point? Ridiculous. |
| #27 S_Warrior[51838] |
| d5090.dtk.chello.nl |
btw
There are typos in there
in one line you said dragoos instead of dragoons
freshly baked does not have a -
as mentioned above you repeated and >>> "and and"
Le Renard does not have a ( whatever it's called ) above that e
Personally I don't see the problem in making typos/grammar mistakes
after all we're only human
and you're no different than any other of us
<marquee behavior=alternate>stop whining about those typos and grammar stuff and stop acting like a know-it-all rater</marquee>
something that does bother me are some of those br's ratings
I mean come on
some have ridiculous scores
why don't you save yourself your breath and do a good job at rating?
ps if someone finds typos/grammar mistakes in this comment space give me your mail adress so i can send you a dollar to call someone that actually gives a damn
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| #28 <font color"green">AlienEater</font>[51977] |
| dialups-438.palmer.mtaonline.net |
| ARRG! not that friggen cow! persomaly i think this deserves higher than a 8. but thats just me suckin up =) |
| #29 <font color="green">AlienEater</font>[51978] |
| dialups-438.palmer.mtaonline.net |
| now that i think about it it deverves lower than a 8 for THAT FRIGGEN COW!! |
| #30 ~PL~CloudStrife[52025] |
| ci991207-b.edgewd1.ky.home.com |
Good rrrreporrrrt. I'm now rooooling my rrrrrr's theatrrrricly! :) Ok, time for the super annoying marquee.
<marquee> POA is the most mysterious NoHunter! </marquee>
That cow is scary... :P |
| #31 <marquee>S_Warrior</marquee>[52039] |
| d5090.dtk.chello.nl |
that cow is weird
and POA is not the most mysterious
<maquee>he's the most</marquee>
<p>
<font color=red><h1><marquee behavior=alternate>gayest!</marquee></h1></font> |
| #32 garett[52086] |
| tyrcache.tyler.net |
| when its pvz and they both have equal expos, its game over. By the way, i am 7-0 vs fox and im retiring that way :). |
| #33 [52097] |
| inehou-pxy06.compaq.com |
LOL Garett. More like 3-7 =o
Fox^1 |
| #34 garett[52116] |
| spider-tk034.proxy.aol.com |
| NO POA IS MY WITNESS, DIE |
| #35 Bane[52159] |
| fcs01asm.asm.bellsouth.net |
| equal amount of expos? i had like...6 to his 3 then fucked it up by not making ..stuff =[ |
| #36 [52181] |
| inehou-pxy03.compaq.com |
Garett play me now! =o
Fox^1 |
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