| #1 :BUCKEYE:[53396] |
| dhcp9561206.columbus.rr.com |
Hope you like it and please comment on how good/bad it was.
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| #2 Silent l Sniper[53397] |
| cc576077-a.vron1.nj.home.com |
| First non-author |
| #3 3rd![53399] |
| users2.xorchicago.com |
| woo woo now to read |
| #4 BW-sux[53400] |
| spider-te061.proxy.aol.com |
Pretty good. Put the names of the players in the colors they drew for the game. Games on temple aren't the best games. Pics a little messy, but not too bad. The rest was good too.
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BW-sux |
| #5 Scrode[53401] |
| users2.xorchicago.com |
Good first report. Pics were a little small though. Try grouping them together collage style. Also you can shorten the names of the players a little (i.e. Rubydrake = Ruby). Like BW said, use colors to highlight the players names, and add some humor...have a little fun :).
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| #6 BackStabingLiar[53404] |
| 63.239.42.130 |
<html>
<body>
<p align="center"><font size="+4" color=blue><B>
<sup>N</sup>I<sup>C</sup>E<sup>!</sup>!<sup>!</sup>
</b></font></P>
<body>
<html> |
| #7 <font color=yellow>Protophobic</font>[53406] |
| cm-24-161-2-135.nycap.rr.com |
| <font color=yellow>way to go buck |
| #8 Hostile~SCV[53409] |
| spider-tk012.proxy.aol.com |
Not bad for a first report. Try to use some of the tricks that most BR writers use next time, like shortening the names and color-coding them throughout the report.
Almost to Gold, but not all the way there, I'd say. Humor & Extra detail will get you there in no time. However, it was your first report, so I'll throw in some extra credit.
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The Hoss Bot |
| #9 Starblaze[53410] |
| MIAMA020-1331.splitrock.net |
I don't know if I'm alone on this, but the game was rather boring. The Zerg player, sucked. No offense, but 3 hatchs'? That's it? Pfft! He could have supported at least twice that number. Good reports though. I won't rate it, thats not my bag baby.
Later amigo |
| #10 CaptainAhab[53417] |
| spider-wg013.proxy.aol.com |
| Great first report. Game was somewhat lame due to a somewhat crappy Zerg player, but the BR wasn't bad. |
| #11 T_Mac[53421] |
| on-tor-blr-a58-02-59.look.ca |
| Hmm, we dont need text that big, and add some humour. Br a better game and you'll be set! great br for a first one :) |
| #12 IamCanadian[53424] |
| cr467192-a.slnt1.on.wave.home.com |
| I liked it ^^ |
| #13 Terranomics[53446] |
| tc3-dyn41.netlabs.net |
Nice report.
Terran dont own zerg though. If the zerg player expanded to six instead of trying to offensive expand at 12 expansion, he would have had more of a chance. He also didnt make queens or lurks which would have helped greatly.
But on the other hand, its hard to concentrate when you're in the heat of a game, so i cant really say he did the wrong or right thing.
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| #14 a[W]o_Stilicho[53451] |
| KRLDA010-1022.splitrock.net |
Dang... if I wanted a picture book, I'd get Goodnight Moon.
j/k ^^ nice. |
| #15 `~DarKnight~'[53453] |
| NYCMA080-0346.splitrock.net |
| great first br. a tad too many pics, but i guess i'm not one to talk (hint:look at one of my reports). saw u on b.net today, we were only ones not afk. good job. |
#16  [53458] |
| inehou-pxy02.compaq.com |
Not bad for a 1st BR. Even though Garett was in control from start to finish it was still detailed. The font though was kinda big and your format didn't look that good. Still good for a 1st BR
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Fox^1
Garett 1on1? |
| #17 <font color=orage>Phoenix-S-[53461] |
| r-177.105.alltel.net |
<font color=orage>Pretty good report. Was thsi your first try? Hm... It seemed to me like you flew through the game and didnt include a lot of details. Try to draw it out more next time, and make some fancy pics and you'll have yourself an 8 or 9 for sure.
<center><font color=red><h1>7</h1></font></center> |
| #18 :BUCKEYE:[53464] |
| dhcp9561206.columbus.rr.com |
damnit, put the wrong there/thier/they're twice
the text size was for all thoughs ppl to lazy to go out to get glass :P and i promise ill color code and take more notes |
| #19 garett[53486] |
| tyrcache.tyler.net |
| fox, sure |
| #20 Hostile~SCV[53491] |
| spider-wm058.proxy.aol.com |
Haha... I'm undefeated vs. Fox.
::Realizes that he's never played Fox::
Damn
The Hoss Bot |
| #21 enforce[53577] |
| 64.13.55.77 |
| garett sux =O |
| #22 freeyourmind[53762] |
| 1Cust54.tnt4.broken-arrow.ok.da.uu.net |
This has probably already been said, but oh well. A little humor, MAYBE one or two uses of the word "gay", and better proofreading and you've got a winner. Also get some shots of the final score, etc.
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freeyourmind |
| #23 Findail[53831] |
| UTCAA010-0365.splitrock.net |
i liked it. it was good for your first br. keep up the good work and i will be reading your work more often. =0 next time find more exciting subjects!! like me !!! just kidding cause every one knows i sux. and i like when words are exchanged and recorded
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| #24 Agent_of_Sol[54387] |
| nav-34c.dsl.navpoint.com |
Excellent first report.
The pictures were fine, but what I'd really suggest working on is your writing style. More detail and slightly better grammer would make this report an excellent read.
...but maybe I'm overemphasizing that. I do write all-text reports after all....
Anyway, good work.
-Agent_of_Sol |
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