| #1 Wangsonn[68559] |
| fcs00gsp.gsp.bellsouth.net |
| 1ST OWN!!!!!!!!!!!11 |
| #2 L2S[68560] |
| dial-205.keokuk.mwci.net |
| 2nd |
| #3 Baal_66[68561] |
| p3EE2DD8E.dip.t-dialin.net |
| Something between the second and the fourth |
| #4 [bad]derek[68564] |
| spider-ti032.proxy.aol.com |
gj
text-only own like fox text-only
own |
| #5 Dausuul[68565] |
| lucre.tcom.purdue.edu |
| 5th comment, but I actually read the report. |
| #6 Starookie[68567] |
| edtn010012.hs.telusplanet.net |
Gj on the report. Pics woulda helped tons, but nice paragraphing and organization. I give this a 7, but that's just me.
Starookie
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| #7 Dog101[68572] |
| 2Cust93.tnt60.chi5.da.uu.net |
7th! it was pretty good but needed pics.
Dog |
#8  [68577] |
| as530002.infocom.com |
Nice text only. Simple and easy to follow. It seemed like you ran out of steam at the end. I'm sure if you had worked on it a bit, you could've have made the ending seem less anticlimactic... ;-)
6
Cheers,
Dref |
| #9 smackemupagus[68588] |
| ith2-d9b.twcny.rr.com |
hey guys, thanks for the feedback, glad you liked it. i'll definately work on pics in the future.
Dref, i see what you mean; i sort of reported the end the way it felt in the game... rather than stepping back and finding a dramatic way to tell the story. i'll keep that in mind.
-smack
p.s. wang thanks for jumping on 1st comment, it makes me feel like a real battlereporter :) |
#10  [68594] |
| 63.164.154.2 |
| A solid seven. Good job. |
| #11 .ClanKiller.[68600] |
| sdn-ar-004flfmyeP136.dialsprint.net |
Well, as for the pics, I didn't even notice there weren't any, until someone had mentioned it! I believe this report goes to show how sometimes a bazillion pics isn't necessary, although one or two key ones might add a bit of flavor. Anyhoe I like it, but the ending was a little lacking.
.ClanKiller. |
| #12 MultipleBoogies a.k.a }|battle'lord|{[68606] |
| access1-1.onatel.bf |
Good job, dude.
I also think that it deserves a 7. I have to say that the BR was a good read, but as mentioned somewhere above, the ending could have been better ^_^. Afterall, the win wasn't a piece of cake :O).
Pic's would have been nice...I'd recommend a few showing your sieges...how they were placed, enemy attempts to deplace your cliff positions etc, etc.
Keep cool & peace,
MultipleBoogies a.k.a }|battle'lord|{ |
| #13 SixtyWATZ[68618] |
| spider-wn083.proxy.aol.com |
Clearly Marked: Text Only BR... SO guyz rate it and critique it as a TEXT-Only BR. Good br snuffemupagus (aka shockwave yadayadayada?) I liked the style and it was a good game to report. Keep it up.
Chao,
WATZ |
| #14 ~iron_lung~[68632] |
| a-db.aspn.net |
| That was a great text only report, keep 'em coming. |
| #15 .ClanKiller.[68634] |
| sdn-ar-004flfmyeP136.dialsprint.net |
SixtyWATZ,
While being a text-only BR and labelled as such, suggesting pics is still fairplay, thats what a critique is...suggesting...
.ClanKiller. |
| #16 Sexy^Orangutang[68637] |
| spider-we021.proxy.aol.com |
Well, u said u wanted to improve your game in the beggining. I suck so theres only one thing i have to say: U shuda dropped a suicide squad of 4 bats, 2 rines and 2 meds to get rid of some tech like the cavern and maybe the pool. That would slow him down and it seemed like he was running dry on minerals. Thats always important in planning shit, like trying to think what he will counter you with by checking how much income he might have. The loss of tech would buy u enough time to amass enough men to overrun him.
It seemed like the toss wasn't attacked much if not at all during the game.
Pretty good game.
Sexy^Orangutang ( i wouldn't take that tip seriously, i suck) |
| #17 archon6[68863] |
| spider-tj044.proxy.aol.com |
| learn to spell epilogue :) |
| #18 MultipleBoogies a.k.a }|battle'lord|{[69318] |
| 206.82.130.23 |
No. 15 post, .ClanKiller., thanks for the support. If you hadn't made your post, I would never have known how to reply.
But, SixtyWATZ, you're also right. Life's a _ _ _ _ _, oh well, sometimes.
Keep it real & peace,
MultipleBoogies a.k.a }|battle'lord|{ |
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