| #1 Danny.[68713] |
| h00a0cc41906d.ne.mediaone.net |
| Eck! i was gonna win when i disced, he had 1 island, and i had 3 mains, and 2 island exps =/ cable modems are gay t.t i didnt even know you were gonna br, but gw on your first =D |
| #2 Dog101[68714] |
| 2Cust108.tnt4.ind1.da.uu.net |
Woooho 2nd!!!.
reading right now.
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| #3 L2S[68715] |
| dial-153.keokuk.mwci.net |
| 2nd |
| #4 Dog101[68716] |
| 2Cust108.tnt4.ind1.da.uu.net |
Gj for a first time brer although u needed pics & more desc. of the map, obs, players,etc. other than that pretty good.6.
Dog |
| #5 L2S[68717] |
| dial-153.keokuk.mwci.net |
Damn he got that like 1 second b4 me :(
3rd |
| #6 L2S[68718] |
| dial-153.keokuk.mwci.net |
| damn |
| #7 WarLeaderJustin[68724] |
| spider-tr053.proxy.aol.com |
Hi, Seph, nice all text BR... uhm, I mean... :P
Yeah, right, you use same text and same color scheme... hehe, no insults if you aren't Seph, but I think you are... hehe!
70%
-WLJ |
#8 [68727] |
| 242835hfc143.tampabay.rr.com |
| that was lacking everything |
| #9 Starookie[68734] |
| edtn008081.hs.telusplanet.net |
Pics, pics pics. Nice text only, but needs a little...well....meat to it. Read foxes or cattlebruisers text brs. youll see what i mean.
i dunno, ill go with a 6.1-6.5 on this one. =[
Not bad tho! Not bad one bit!
Starookie
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| #10 Wr@th[68746] |
| 134.117.137.53 |
| Uh. In lessons learned, you said that valks > upgraded sairs. But Toss had no upgrades. What i said was Valks with upgrade>Sairs without. And you just mentionned me out of the blue at the end... Get a paragraph at the start about player, obs, minimap and starting position etc |
| #11 [bad]derek[68768] |
| spider-tr044.proxy.aol.com |
| yeah...where were the air battles? arbiters and carriers should own terran, right!? valks>sairs? when!? oh yeah and why didnt danny just make a wraith or comsat for expansions? valk scouting is the new fad, eh? |
| #12 Danny.[68781] |
| h00a0cc41906d.ne.mediaone.net |
| [bad]derek: valks absolutely rape sairs. maybe you thought otherwise, but it is true. also, i had comstat, but no wraiths, cause they are sucky little tin planes. |
#13 [68793] |
| 242835hfc143.tampabay.rr.com |
<i>valks absolutely rape sairs</i>
haha =[ |
| #14 Danny.[68798] |
| h00a0cc41906d.ne.mediaone.net |
| well they do t.t |
| #15 MultipleBoogies a.k.a }|battle'lord|{[68805] |
| 212.52.140.12 |
Hello dude,
Since no one else bothered to congratulate you on your first, here it is: congratulations.
Sadly, your BR leaves much to be deserved. First, your writing style needs some work. I found myself fighting to finish the BR because I had absolutely no sense of excitement :(.
If you're going to write an all-text report and you know that your writing ability isn't that of Steven King, you probably should include some screen shots; they'll do much to liven up the reader's enjoyment.
Keep it real & peace,
MultipleBoogies a.k.a }|battle'lord|{
PS. Better get that photo editor!!! ;-) |