| #1 (-}Voldemort{-)[73700] |
| h24-70-17-244.cg.shawcable.net |
| First, and I read most of it |
| #2 (-}Voldemort{-)[73701] |
| h24-70-17-244.cg.shawcable.net |
BTW, good job for a second report. I am new here, so you will see me around more
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| #3 SlingsNArrows[73702] |
| bgm-24-95-150-230.stny.rr.com |
And so the next great migration begins :o|
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| #4 {ahc}overmind[73704] |
| user-2ive79c.dialup.mindspring.com |
thank you guys, I AM THE FEEDBACK MONSTER, FEED ME BACK!!!!
right... thank you for reading my battle report, rate it from 1-10 please |
| #5 Somebody...[73705] |
| proxy1-external.etntwn1.nj.home.com |
Hmmm... this br seems better than the first. try to include more graphics in your br's, and not just the screenshot. Also, have a nicer background color; black is always good. :P
sby...
P.S. Cheer up Slings, everything goes through change, and so does br.com |
| #6 starlore~[73706] |
| 207-172-129-173.s173.tnt2.col.md.dialup.rcn.com |
lol
Testosterone:P
Dunno what to rate this (not bad considering I dont rate anything:p) |
| #7 Somebody...[73707] |
| proxy1-external.etntwn1.nj.home.com |
| errrrrr.....6 |
| #8 Falcon[73709] |
| h24-66-252-151.ss.shawcable.net |
| That DT rush was like what I did to Collsy in one game. I smelled my 6th victory ever |
| #9 Falcon[73710] |
| h24-66-252-151.ss.shawcable.net |
| err I mean Lurker |
| #10 testosterone[73711] |
| mkc-65-26-143-252.kc.rr.com |
| ugh i got raped i dunno why u reported it :/ |
| #11 Monty Pylon[73713] |
| gateway.Culinary.EDU |
| Good job on taking advice from your first BR comments and shrinking the pics and the margins. However pick your BR games wisly. A bad or short game will equal a bad score. If you BR a game that is short and relativly uneventful maybe you should not post it. You have talent and all you need are some better games. GL and keep on rollin |
| #12 [-Loser-][73714] |
| ool-18bd4ed2.dyn.optonline.net |
nice job Overmind i enjoyed it Distinguish the names of players though. Easier to focus that way.
[-Loser-] |
| #13 Sid6.9[73717] |
| 1Cust153.tnt3.tacoma.wa.da.uu.net |
| Oh sorry, you want a rating. Well I'm not a rater, though I think it will be somewhere between a 6 or 7. |
| #14 Khas'andro[73721] |
| ool-18bc02ed.dyn.optonline.net |
Great BR, it was a nice mix of text and pixtures. Like someone above me said, the pcitures weren't neccessary because you could visualize what was going on. That just shows how descriptive you are. The introduction was funny, and the way it lead into the BR was nice, too. Only thing I can think of is to highlight the players' names in their colors and to make the pictures a little larger. Also, next time, try adding some alt text, I love alt text.
6-7 |
| #15 [73722] |
| ool-18bc02ed.dyn.optonline.net |
| I really gotta learn to type |
| #16 Sp|nE[73724] |
| dialup0245-pri.dialup2.voicenet.com |
| i liked him more when he talked in the third person |
| #17 OuTSiDeR[73725] |
| spider-wl064.proxy.aol.com |
| lol |
| #18 Skyblazer[73747] |
| mkc-31-238-216.kc.rr.com |
| uh no ...NO MORE THIRD PERSON plzzzz ...this br was better in that way ...reported a stupid game though |
| #19 Napoleic[73754] |
| ip-20-61-40.vancouver.navipath.net |
You forget a lesson learned: Never go metal against zerg!
he should have had a shitload of rines with med support. Good br, bad game.
6 |
| #20 testosterone[73786] |
| mkc-65-26-143-252.kc.rr.com |
| napoleic he 10 pooled, i had 2 at top of ramp, was wraith rushing/scouting, lurkers > early m&m if used right and he was using them right |
| #21 starlore~[73797] |
| 207-172-129-169.s169.tnt2.col.md.dialup.rcn.com |
| Terran usually tech's to a fast wraith vs zerg to do some ol harrasment, and get's a fast tank to kill the lurks, then you get vessals and transist into tons of M&M |
| #22 Dr.Zchivago[73831] |
| proxy1-external.bremtn1.wa.home.com |
Hehe, better.
At least the table size was right!
Ok, your pic total far outweighed your text though. Look at all your pics from the game, write your report from them and your notes then pic a few pics that really capture a specific instance and insert only those.
Bottom line is this is better than your last one.
6
-Dr.Z |
| #23 america~jin[73844] |
| 12.7.75.67 |
Ugh,
The commentary fully displayed a lack of knowledge about game strategy. That's the most positive thing I have to say about this BR
"Testosterone forgets one thing about the Terrans that make them favored by skilled players, lift off"
So THAT'S why I play terran. thx
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| #24 Cearas[73959] |
| proxy-02.pe.iqnet.net.au |
| ohh come on Jin, give him a break that was a definate improvment on the first BR, keep going at it, you will improve as you make more |
| #25 Superiority-Complex Man[73989] |
| A100-0017.NYCM.splitrock.net |
ALthough this is one of the first battle reports i've read, and I really have nothing to compare to, I'd say you just picked the wrong game to Report. You should definitely keep the 3rd person Introduction in the beginning, but that shouldn't be the best part. Just find a better game to report on and you're set.
hmmmmmmm......6 maybe?
PS: I THOUGHT YOU WERE GOING TO REPORT ON MY GAME YOU IMBECILE!!!!!!! |
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