| #1 [ToJ]Kralgon[74555] |
| c847772-a.boulder1.co.home.com |
| hi |
| #2 AkumaSpawn[74557] |
| cate1-216.reshall.ou.edu |
2nd? JOY
It was an okay report, but a bit too dry for my taste. Preemptory thumbs-up. |
#3  [74560] |
| on-tor-blr-a58-04-1135.look.ca |
Yeah it was kind of bland, i didnt really enjoy your jokes, and some pics were a little hard to see
7 |
| #4 [ToJ]Kralgon[74561] |
| c847772-a.boulder1.co.home.com |
Well... this was supposed to be a more serious, straight-forward report. I just added the alt-text at the last minute because I was bored =)
I was trying to keep the pics smaller by putting them at 75% size but I guess that kinda made it blury. |
| #5 america~jin[74564] |
| 12.7.75.67 |
| I thought the report was well written. The pics were sufficient if you noticed the 'lines of succession', but definitely nothing special. The strategy was covered very well. The aggressive Toss powering instead of the early rush, and the fact that he continued to go zeal/temps throughout the game was intriguing. Good job. |
| #6 Sid6.9[74569] |
| 1Cust143.tnt11.tacoma.wa.da.uu.net |
And then they want to ban me. Good luck Falcon. And now, on to another Good, Bad, and Ugly on Kral's battle report.
The Good-
Writing was well done with good descriptions of the action.
Plenty of pics, even through the 75% size, they really did look pretty good.
Good use of the lines to direct the multi-pics.
Good selection of pics, good action throughout. Especially the storm pics, me likes storm.
The Alt-Text, while going for a serious tone, did have a few funny moments.
The Bad-
The intro. I really knew who was going to win because you put MasterD on a pedastal, and didn't really make me believe that Candle had a chance.
The writing, while very sound and good, but, you may want to juice it up a bit with a little humor, just a suggestion. I still enjoyed the report without it.
While the game had plenty of action, MasterD really was doing all the smacking down. Candles attacks only came away with minimal damage at best, save for the 6 Overlord drop, and that still wasn't very effective in slowing down MasterD's war machine.
The Ugly-
Nothing to see here.
Report Card Reads-
Writing- B+
Pic Quality- B+ (I would say use 100% on the pics.)
Pic Selection- A
HTML Usage- B+ (All you had missing was a background.)
Entertainment- B (The game itself wasn't a good back and forth affair.)
Overall- B+
Personal Comments- Good job, while the game was a little in MasterD's favor the entire game, candle did stick up a pretty good defensive fight. You really brought that out well in the report. Just add maybe a background to your reports and use normal size for your pics and you will be another great battle reporter here. |
| #7 GeNiN-Gbr[74571] |
| inh1ts04-qfe0.ims.bt.net |
| Great players - but a few nydus's at a cheap 200 minerals each would have helped Candle's xpos no end - either by getting more troops or helping the drones flee. |
| #8 -citizenkane-[74580] |
| c209662-a.haywd2.sfba.home.com |
Great writing. Font too small- bleh ;p
Nice pics. Coulda been a little more gosu, but gosu nontheless.
7
mark gimme rating power gogogo |
| #9 [ToJ]Kralgon[74581] |
| c847772-a.boulder1.co.home.com |
america~jin - thx for the compliments. If you look carefully, you can also see numbers near the corners of each picture, but they didn't show up very well... too lazy to change the color =/ Zealot/temp is very powerful if you play it right and don't storm your own guys. MasterD is a good player and can handle that "burden" so i'm not surprised he stuck with that strat.
Sid6.9 - thx for that comment. i didn't notice that about the intro. won't do it next time =)
GeNiN - I think Candle was strapped for money. He didn't have Hive tech yet, so he'd have to get that for nydus canal. One thing about the game that's more of a personal comment. When he dropped and killed MasterD's nexus, he took down little or no probes. I think if he killed the probes instead of the Nexus, he may have fared better. |
| #10 [1]=)[74582] |
| ookmail.nait.ab.ca |
| =p |
| #11 Illgetdroped[74583] |
| dialup-209.246.74.93.NewYork2.Level3.net |
| Well i was looking at the picures, as usual.. but i think u need more minimap help... its useful, so u dont lose the track of whats going on and have better idea who is wining... GJ anyway, the battle report was nice and the game was exelent!! |
| #12 the teacher[74584] |
| 211.50.9.199 |
My student sucked ass , and candle sucked more . :D
The br was impossible to read easily , because of the text right stucked to the pics that are also too close to each other so u cant make easily the timing difference between what happened , we dont understand nothing of the oppening of each player , and u dont talk about the midle opponening order that is even more important . U dont take larges pics of the fights , and u dont separate them enough , u need to be more clear less messy . try to enlarge pics , and zoom on what is really interesant , in all ur screens , we c 8 hydral fighting 7 zealots or less , we SEE NOTHING , WE CAN UNDERSTAND NOTHING . Anyway hopefully dustin won , so im okwith your report .
A man with a very selfish point of view . |
| #13 mattkid[74585] |
| 00-60-97-d5-1d-d0.bconnected.net |
umm read this: Candle begins scouting by sending his Overlord to the 6 o’clock main then sending his second Overlord to the 12 o’clock main while sending his first one to the 6 o’clock.
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| #14 [ToJ]Kralgon[74586] |
| c847772-a.boulder1.co.home.com |
kane - text is the "normal" size
teacher - umm.... read the text? maybe? screens had number in corner (kind hard to see) that told which order it was in the sequence and the lines that directed from picture to picture. Also if I *enlarge* pics, it makes it pixelated and I'm trying to keep it so it doesn't take three decades to load the pictures on the page. That's why I cut it down to just the attacking units where you can see the actual "action" and micro going on
mattkid - oops... should be 9 o'clock. |
| #15 mattkid[74587] |
| 00-60-97-d5-1d-d0.bconnected.net |
| have you noticed the last 9 reports we're gold reports |
| #16 Napoleic[74588] |
| van3d47.dial.uniserve.ca |
Hey I thought this was a damn fine report. Everything was described nicely, I knew what was going on the whole time, and it was a good game. Nice to see a toss beating a zerg after all, although it seemed like the zerg didn't know how to macro, like you said he always seemed to be behind in units.
I say 8, great! |
| #17 (orky)Priest[74593] |
| 2-102.dialup.comset.net |
gw intotherain
:( |
| #18 Starookie[74604] |
| edtn009955.hs.telusplanet.net |
what can i say? gj!!!
(btw, thx for pushing me off gold list, you bastard :)))
Mmmm this deserves an....7.8
GJ`! |
| #19 cosby_basketbal[74608] |
| knox-d-14.planetc.com |
I would like to say pretty cool report, I am glad dustin won more power to the orky boys. I give it a 8, well written and pictures was nice. Still took a little long to load, but you can't please everyone. There either took big or not clear enough. GW
SHOT OUT TO oTTer! |
| #20 The teacher of the teacher that teached the student that now needs more teaching[74633] |
| 211.50.9.199 |
1) to win at starcraft u need units .
2) to kill the zealots you need lurkers .
3) to kill the lurkers you need dragoons .
4) to kill dragoons u need more hydra .
5) to kill the hydras u neeed templars .
6) to kill the templar u need to lurker drop the cliff expansion of protoss .
7) to win , u need hatcheries , and gateways . |
| #21 JJB[74654] |
| proxy1-external.indnpls1.in.home.com |
I think "the teacher" needs a lesson in paragraphing....
Lessee, I don't think there was anything wrong, except for neon green borders on pix. LT can go and lick cunt, IMO. But for the most part, wording was proper, minimap at intro was nice. . .
I think I need to reread for some issues mentioned in previous comments.
Till then my G,
JJB |
| #22 Candle[74657] |
| cs2749-121.austin.rr.com |
My thoughts on the game,
I lost to MasterD partly because I didn't anticpate how many zealots he had (or rather, didn't scout that out). I should have made more lurkers to compesate but failed to do so. As for upgrades, I was sloppy, I had evo chamber, but didn't get things researched in a timely manner.
I wanted to comment on my drop attacks. I made 2 main drop attacks, one was to kill Master D's nexus, the other was lurkers in the mineral line. This doesn't come thorugh in the battle report very well. I dropped Master D's natural with 5 lurkers. The two were supposed to happen close together, so that I take out MasterD's main and then the probes get transferred to the natural, and then I put lurkers there to kill all the probes at his natural. Unfortuately I also wanted a "distraction" attack so that I coudl drop his natural with lurkers and hopefully MasterD would be occupied.
All this attacking and trying to distract wound up taking up too much of my attention, and it was poorly executed. I thought I'd shed some light on the report by sharing what I was intending to do, even though I failed on execution to do it in a timely and aggressive manner. |
| #23 bob[74725] |
| spider-wk081.proxy.aol.com |
| u had a spire, how come it came of no use? and ya upgrades are thx ^^ nice BR i thought, unfortunately the last few BR's i have seen were either korean's trying to speak english which is real ugly, or bad no namers trying to BR =( so nice job |
| #24 Bratwurst in Germany[74846] |
| p3EE3553C.dip.t-dialin.net |
| I think that report was good enough to read and i can not agree with opinion that the pics are too small cause they aren´t . So greetings to all who read that ,thx cYa !!! |
| #25 Wing_SuN[74940] |
| 1Cust26.tnt4.rome-utica.ny.da.uu.net |
I thought that the report was well done, but could've had more comments from the other observers. It also could've had bigger pictures. Besides that, the report was great. Nice job and gg to Candle and MasterD. See Ya!
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| #26 to bob[74982] |
| 194.67.180.157 |
| omfg you suck you english ass ok? We could write everything in Korean because KOREANS play better this is OUR game so you would suck BADLY. STFU and say THANK YOU for us to translate all this into your stupid shitty straight language |
| #27 ~Blue22~[75142] |
| spider-mtc-td043.proxy.aol.com |
| Anybody check the time on that game? |
| #28 Digityl[75195] |
| 138.86.151.7 |
cool report kralgon. the writing was pretty good and the humor was ok. I think the report deserves at least a 7.5. coulda been 8 but minused some for the blurry pics. that flash intro was cool. I liked how u made it scroll over the map of lost temple, nice idea.
~Digi |
| #29 Vortex[96348] |
| krone.cc.strath.ac.uk |
ARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRGGGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHH!
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| #30 Vortex[96349] |
| krone.cc.strath.ac.uk |
oh and one more thing.........ASS!
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| #31 :+:Grinder:+:[165046] |
| 75.136.207.133 |
| Hoho masterd u stud, someday I will learn to bw as good as you. Cosby is teaching me how to play. He owns me. |
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