| #1 Falcon[74781] |
| px1he.ss.wave.shaw.ca |
| nice doublepost |
| #2 [AsF]AzNSuNBoY[74783] |
| AC846DEF.ipt.aol.com |
| It wasn't double...the other was half =P |
| #3 [killer]~~;)[74786] |
| ookmail.nait.ab.ca |
wha..?? hm.... oh.... ah.... hm....
fawk. =P
its 4a.m and thats all i have to say about that. |
| #4 Pvt`spark's`SA[74791] |
| hybrid-024-221-136-208.az.sprintbbd.net |
Hey nice one, I think you should have asced your opponents after the game to see what they did. A 6.5.
Pvt`spark's`SA |
| #5 Sid6.9[74794] |
| 1Cust254.tnt11.tacoma.wa.da.uu.net |
You know, a few people dislike my Good, Bad, and Ugly because it gives 2 negatives, so I'm going to do something different. A things I like, and things that could use some work. We'll call it the things report. (All right I know that's lame, I'll see if I can come up with something different.) Hopefully people will like this better. :)
Things I liked-
1.Writing was good for a quick game replay.
2.I liked that you used color for the players names, it just adds so much for the report.
3.I also liked the captions, kinda a telling of the coming future. I wish everyone did that, but that's my own personal preference.
Things that could be changed or worked on...
1.Details. For how fast the game went, you could have thrown a few more details in there about the battles and so on. You started to do that at first, but backed off rushing us to the end.
2.Yellow for a players name is a big "no, no" for white background. You should change the background to another color, preferably black for the yellow color.
3.I really needed some pics for how short the report was. If you want to write short reports like this, pics will be more benifical for the reader in closing any gaps there may be.
Report Card Reads-
Writing- B- (Missing some details.)
Pic Quality- N/A
Pic Selection- N/A
HTML Usage- B (Yellow on white, yuck)
Entertainment- B- (Too short, not enough details. I just didn't get into the game.)
Overall- B-
Personal Comments- Not bad, but needs a little work. Keep at it though, and remember, give more details in future reports and you should be alright. Don't give up, I want to see more from you. :-D |
| #6 (TYC)Khas'andro[74797] |
| ool-18bc02ed.dyn.optonline.net |
OMFG, this guy gets ONE complaint about his color, while every other comment on my first BR was about the colors? MWAAHHHH!!!
I didn't read, yellow blinds me. Yellow + White = Big Lawsuit when you burn out a person's eyes ;) |
#7  [74832] |
| HNW0511.RESNET-STUDENT.UPENN.EDU |
What cost this BR:
no details
no idea what's going on
bad choice of color coding
game does not flow
no tech info |
| #8 Cearas[74838] |
| 004.paradox1.n.iqnet.net.au |
| umm, yellow on white = not fucking cool |
| #9 livingexception[74974] |
| spider-wb013.proxy.aol.com |
Hrm, well, like above, color coding was muy malo. Game was short and choppy. More details if you would, but not garbage like some other writings. Come back again with pics, and a better game. I give it 4.
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