| #1 [AsF]AzNSuNBoY[74787] |
| AC846DEF.ipt.aol.com |
| Hi |
| #2 [Mr.T]Hoss[74788] |
| spider-tn011.proxy.aol.com |
First non-author.
you only had one joke of my 5..... automatic 1 =( |
| #3 -citizenkane-[74789] |
| c209662-a.haywd2.sfba.home.com |
| Hi |
| #4 !SphincteR![74793] |
| cacheflow3.sasknet.sk.ca |
2nd senceless post ^^
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...sorrry |
| #5 Sid6.9[74796] |
| 1Cust254.tnt11.tacoma.wa.da.uu.net |
Time for the "Things Report" from the roaving reporter that you either love to hate, or hate to love, or are indifferent too. Let's take a closer look at Asvsunbo...ahh hell, I'm just gonna call you Alphabet.
Things I liked...
1. Writing very well done, details were good, all the way up til the end.
2. Pictures were very well done, except the coloring of the last one, don't know what happened there.
3. Nice action shots, me likes blood and gore and all the other stuff in between.
4. Nice use of HTML, I always say that a black background enhances reports so well, especially for color and pics.
5. That Team Newbie logo musta been a bitch to keep doing over and over again. Whatcha do, copy and paste?
6. In game conversation is always a plus for reports.
Things I disliked, or could use some work...
1. The game itself. Even though Newbie team was on the attack most of the time, none of their attacks did anything.
2. The way you finished it. Team TM finishes Team Newbie. What the hell? With what? Didn't team Newbie put up a fight? It just seemed you were in a rush to end the report.
3. Damn you for trying to kill my hamster! I'll get you Alphabet, I'll get you if it's the last thing I do. * /Me shakes his fist in the air * My poor hampster is huffing and puffing now. It's okay Melvin, the bad man is gone.
Report Card Reads-
Writing- B+
Pic Quality- B+ (The last action pic was a little off color.)
Pic Selection- A (I would have liked a pic of TM beating down Team Newbie.)
HTML Usage- A
Entertainment- B+ (Everything was smoking, right up til the end.)
Overall- B+
Personal Comments- I enjoy your work. Very well put together. Just more of an ending without and "They won." And maybe look into some Alt-Text, you've got a good sense of humor so I believe you can come up with some classic Alt-Text. Keep em coming Alphabet, and I'll keep reading. :) |
| #6 DivvyO[74799] |
| 162.119.232.100 |
| MY POOR HAMSTER!!! DON'T DIE, LITTLE HAWK!!! |
| #7 Frost[74805] |
| spider-mtc-tb033.proxy.aol.com |
Good BR but..
Please dont insult Wangsonn by comparing him to dropped.Wang has some skill. I once beat dropped with a zeal rush, and he was a walled in terran. ROFL. |
| #8 [AsF]AzNSuNBoY[74806] |
| AC86DAF7.ipt.aol.com |
Hoss, if you notice, I put in <u>3</u> of your jokes =P.
"don't drop droped," "cost-efficient firebat," and "lucky zergling." =P |
| #9 [AsF]AzNSuNBoY[74807] |
| AC86DAF7.ipt.aol.com |
| And Sid, there's a collage there with the attacks and stuff =P. Unless it didn't load... |
| #10 Sid6.9[74808] |
| 1Cust157.tnt13.tacoma.wa.da.uu.net |
| Really? Shit, my hampster did die then. |
| #11 Illgetdroped[74810] |
| dialup-209.244.100.12.NewYork2.Level3.net |
| ok.. frost.. i think i know who u are.. let me ges.. cyan.. if it is u THAN GO FUCK URE SELF.... and if it not than GO FUCK URE SELF TOO..... and wang is my good friend tooo.... and i dont think he thinks of me as a newbie... and so i dont of him... so STFU plz.. and gl... nice report.. i liked it. gj and gl |
| #12 Illgetdroped[74811] |
| dialup-209.244.100.12.NewYork2.Level3.net |
| and one more thing.. a zeal rush was one game.. and one game dont prove anything... thats y there are 3 games in the tournament |
| #13 Melvinator[74812] |
| ppp-206-171-173-147.sktn01.pacbell.net |
| wtf call your hamster melvin, that's my name :( |
| #14 [LoR]-Napoleic[74825] |
| van3d32.dial.uniserve.ca |
| Ownage collages, pretty nice writing, shitty game... good job overall, I liked it |
#15  [74831] |
| HNW0511.RESNET-STUDENT.UPENN.EDU |
quite nice. Try to get correct description though. 10 marines is not 8 marines for example.
Also, try to include some minimap action so we know what's going on better. |
| #16 Wangsonn[74853] |
| adsl-78-164-41.gsp.bellsouth.net |
| yeah cyan stfu, every freakin report you post on you try to get yourself as much as attention as you can. droped doesnt suck, ive played 55432545 games with him. youve played one jackass. |
#17  [74868] |
| rliv120.infocom.com |
Report Good. Game bad (well, sorta).
:) 8
Dref |
| #18 Illgetdroped[74871] |
| dialup-209.246.75.43.NewYork2.Level3.net |
| Tnx, wang.. |
| #19 Activus[74877] |
| sdn-ar-001nyrochP198.dialsprint.net |
Is Cyan that guy who bragged that he beat me, later on it turns out it wasn't me at all it was Tmac? =] gw
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| #20 Kindalikeurface[74879] |
| spider-to031.proxy.aol.com |
OK nice report blah blah blah but i have a questoin?
Who is sid6.9? I mean this guy always posts like a report himself all about the report.......i mean i like these people who have there own special rating system and stuff.... |
| #21 Paradox~Zero[74880] |
| AC9D220E.ipt.aol.com |
| LOL, Owned, Cyan... |
| #22 Frost[74882] |
| spider-tj052.proxy.aol.com |
| ahah yeh acti. Um wang ive palyed him 4 1v1s beaten him all. Hes not as good as you. All im saying... |
| #23 :::ShaunX:::[74894] |
| spider-mtc-td032.proxy.aol.com |
| Hey this one was pretty nice. The game was kinda onesided, but it was interesting to read. The only thing I would have liked to seen was an occasional minimap update and a final one at the end. This would help immensely in understanding the scores |
| #24 Illgetdroped[74927] |
| pool-63.53.82.195.nwrk.grid.net |
| it was not onesided because at the begging kinslayer was always attacked and was near death always.... so i needed to help him and didnt have alot of army.. so begging was their..! |
| #25 [AsF]AzNSuNBoY[74930] |
| AC8FEDE5.ipt.aol.com |
| People see my name as the writer of a BR and they automatically say "ONE SIDED!!!" =P |
| #26 Frost[74963] |
| spider-mtc-ta054.proxy.aol.com |
| I CHALLENGE TEAM TM. You can BR it too. Il lchoose my partner soon, maybe VisualJ++6.0:) |
| #27 SlingsNArrows[75012] |
| bgm-24-95-150-230.stny.rr.com |
| whoa, newbies toss around challenges now? |
| #28 Starookie[75026] |
| edtn009416.hs.telusplanet.net |
Frost, i have come to the conclusion (the fact of you treating droped so bad) that you are gay. OOOOOOOOOOOOO BIG BURN!!!!
Azn, gj |
| #29 {DD}Fatboy[75254] |
| 1Cust166.tnt7.sjc4.da.uu.net |
| lol. Nice report, and frost, I've played droped a bunch of times too, hes no newbie. so go away frost, nobody likes you =( |
| #30 'Bengalaas'[75266] |
| 1Cust164.tnt2.reno.nv.da.uu.net |
| I like u frost.... Nice report man, what image editing program do you use btw? I hate mine, I dont know how to make collages wit it. |
| #31 TerranTurtle[75313] |
| pc8bdn03.fcc.net |
| You guys should set stricter standards for achieving gold in reports, since basically any report that is deemed "coherent" or doesn't suck completely gets the "coveted" rating. I mean really now...the ending of this battlereport totally blew. It really wimped out at the end. So join me, brothers and sisters! Help make earning a gold rating something special and to be proud of! (Well...as proud as one can get about receiving praise about a story concerning a computer game. :) ) |
| #32 america~jin[75344] |
| 12.7.75.67 |
AzureFart, no kidding, lol
What was he doing all game? (check score) |
| #33 [AsF]AzNSuNBoY[75388] |
| AC9A80B0.ipt.aol.com |
TerranTurtle, there was supposed to be a collage at the end with all the action, but i guess it didn't load for anyone.
Bengalaas, I use MS Paint =) |
| #34 -GrappleM1-[77283] |
| spider-ti052.proxy.aol.com |
| Whats a Turbo-newbie? |
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