| #1 ~7th^Jantaru[75090] |
| ool-18bc4e6c.dyn.optonline.net |
| Sorry about the whole controversy i kinda improved it from last time... |
| #2 unknown[75095] |
| proxy2-external.wlfdle1.on.home.com |
| wheeee...bah |
| #3 testosterone[75096] |
| mkc-65-26-143-252.kc.rr.com |
| 3rd times a charm |
| #4 -citizenkane-[75098] |
| c209662-a.haywd2.sfba.home.com |
| Contrary to popular belief, recent studies have shown taht you are actually NOT supposed to triple-click the 'submit report' button. There's some news you can use. |
| #5 -citizenkane-[75100] |
| c209662-a.haywd2.sfba.home.com |
Okay.
6.
unfunny :( |
| #6 ~7th^IllusioN[75104] |
| spider-wb034.proxy.aol.com |
I am quite sexy :o. Oh, yeah the BR was great too. But still, im quite sexy.
^Sexy!
Not a ten, but good for first timer ^^. Would give it a 6, but since i am sexy and in your sexy clan, a 6.1 ^^. |
| #7 ThanatoZ[75105] |
| 63-224-222-49.customers.uswest.net |
Hm.. Your descriptions were ok, pictures were decent (though you should have the text wrapped around them, makes it look much better) and your collages were pretty messed up. Put a border on the pics you are putting into the collage, or SOMETHING so we can tell what goes where...
I think this is in the 4-5 zone. |
#8  [75111] |
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| I fixed the tables for ya |
| #9 ~7th^Agsdad[75112] |
| 1Cust178.tnt1.irvington.nj.da.uu.net |
Pretty good for your first try. You forgot to mention that I had high score that game. And you forgot picture of archon with 39 kills (zerglings, but kills nevertheless).
(Yes, I know I sucked that game.)
Try wrapping text around pics, and make collages sexier.
~7th^Agsdad |
| #10 {ahc}overmind[75116] |
| user-2ive69p.dialup.mindspring.com |
a relatively well done report, especially for a first. However, I do have some complaints.
1) Use more text, without text I would get lost. I could follow the game with the screenshots, which were pretty good, but the entire problem with the br was that there wasn't enough text
2) {ahc}overmind is crazy about text and should shut up about it
3) Include more details, and also fnd better games to br
Well, that's about it, now to give it a range on how well it did.
At the least, it will get a 4, at the best a 7. I would give it a 6 to be honest.Again, well done
Sincerely yours,
{ahc}overmind |
| #11 Scarab[75121] |
| spider-wc044.proxy.aol.com |
kane, shut the fuck up
really |
| #12 ~7th^jantaru[75123] |
| ool-18bee171.dyn.optonline.net |
| yes that is my real handwriting at the end=P |
| #13 Falcon[75133] |
| px3he.ss.wave.shaw.ca |
| good job copying SuNBoY's sig :( |
| #14 livingexception[75136] |
| spider-wl083.proxy.aol.com |
A clan fight...oh well. The writing was bare, and the pictures were, to say the least, massive. You got off good pics no doubt, but they were soo huge it really stole from what little writing there was. You need to be alot more detailed, and make smaller pictures. Also, when you do paint, make sure you fill in all the little holes made by the letters, cause it doesn't look good. After game chat is always a plus though, and I liked the alt-text myself. Just write (alot) more, and trim down picture size abit. It also wouldn't hurt to get a non-clan game when you post here. I'll slap a 6 on it.
LE |
| #15 Sp|nE[75137] |
| dialup0360-pri.dialup3.voicenet.com |
| might have been decent if you didnt act so fucking korean |
| #16 TheCrypticDwarf[75140] |
| spider-tl023.proxy.aol.com |
HAHAHAHAHAHA
I have the last comment muahahahah
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| #17 Rommel_1942[75141] |
| spider-wd061.proxy.aol.com |
"might have been decent if you didnt act so fucking korean"
Ow. |
| #18 Cearas[75157] |
| proxy-02.pe.iqnet.net.au |
Ummm Sp|nE you seem different, I mean that was funny, but goddamn, harsh?? I fucking think so.
Pics = needing borders when in collages |
| #19 Cearas[75159] |
| proxy-02.pe.iqnet.net.au |
| OK, next person in 7th clan who uses sexy will get punched in the gut. |
| #20 Screw this =P!![75165] |
| ACA975E0.ipt.aol.com |
| images don't seem to work here |
| #21 [75210] |
| 1Cust88.tnt1.tacoma.wa.da.uu.net |
Oh those wonderful "Things". Don't you just love "Things"? I know I love "Things", especially on a rainy day, or down on the beach, or hell, even on Battlereports.com. So lets get busy shall we?
The things that were good-
1- Nice short intro, I like it when people say something about the competitors.
2- Writing was good, and flowed well.
3- Pic Quality was amazingly good for MSPaint. They usually don't show up that well.
4- I loved the 3D borders, but you stopped halfway through, why? Did you just want to try other styles?
5- Pic selection was decent, good action shots.
6- HTML skills were okay, but that opening build order, you didn't need to color the buildings.
7- I liked that you kept us updated on upgrades.
Things that could be worked on-
1- The collage, yikes. Me thinks that needs a little fine tuning. Don't have pics within pics, seperate them.
2- More details. You relied to heavily on the pics telling the story, when it should be the other way around.
3- It's good when you know the players, but, it's funner to read when you don't, and are surprised if the game is a good back and forth affair. Trust me, it will come out in your report, because you will be excited by it. I know you won't be able to do an introduction of the players, but the writing will be better.
Report Card Reads-
Writing- B- (Needs more meat.)
Pic Quality- A- (MSPaint sucks, but you pulled it off nicely.)
Pic Selection- B+
HTML Usage- B+ (That opening build coloring kinda irritated me.)
Entertainment- B
Overall- B
Personal Comments- I liked it, it was a very nice first try. Lately there seems to be alot of newcomers that take their time to do a report, that's good. Keep em coming, and I'll keep reading. |
| #22 {ahc}overmind[75213] |
| user-2iveblu.dialup.mindspring.com |
| sid, you forgot to write your name at the top, and I like the good, the bad and the ugly, cause we see what is fair in our report |
| #23 Sid6.9[75216] |
| 1Cust88.tnt1.tacoma.wa.da.uu.net |
| Well actually Overmind, the G,B,U had 2 negatives in it, so I decided instead of 1 positive and 2 negatives, I should shorten it up to 1 pos. and 1 neg. Although I think the negative is actually a positive, cause it will help make better reporters. |
| #24 Napoleic[75220] |
| van5d30.dial.uniserve.ca |
Zerg vs Toss on temple. Zerg beats Toss. Someone pinch me before I die of shock.
thx
(next time not there plz) |
#25  [75230] |
| as530062.infocom.com |
Not bad for a first attempt. However, choppy writing and collages with pictures that ran together made this a tough read. Not to mention the fact that the game was your basic zerg beatdown on Temple. Get some borders around the pics in your collages and concentrate on coming up with more detailed text.
6
Cheers,
Dref |
| #26 (TYC)Khas'andro[75263] |
| ool-18bc02ed.dyn.optonline.net |
MY EYES!! MY MOTHER FUCKING EYES!!
try a different background on the collages, and try to have their borders defined a little more.
I'd give you a 6, but since you were already featured in my BR and didn't have to become known on BR.com, I give you a 1.0000000000000000000000001. J/K, nice report, better than my first one ;) |
| #27 {ahc}overmind[75465] |
| user-2iveaaq.dialup.mindspring.com |
| uhhh, sid, I would like to say that 2 negatives ain't bad. It's better then things that can be worked on, so what if it's a double negative, I LIKE GOOD, BAD AND UGLY. |
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