| #1 {ahc}overmind[75610] |
| user-2ive7h2.dialup.mindspring.com |
| yo, what did i do wrong this time? And people are no longer blind because of my backround, tell me what's wrong, and I'll try to include it in my next report |
| #2 Monty Pylon[75612] |
| gateway.Culinary.EDU |
I thought it was *amen*???
Anyway a good BR and funny pics as always. Your bubbles still need work but that is just details. A gold lister for sure. |
| #3 Herminator[75613] |
| px1cl.gv.wave.shaw.ca |
was very well done, only two complaints
1. Damn those speach bubbles piss me off =þ
2. I just didn't really understand the relevance of the historical reference, call me stupid but i just didn't get it.
8-9
-Herm |
| #4 Derek[75615] |
| spider-mtc-tf052.proxy.aol.com |
hehe, your reports get better every time. nice BR.
7-8 easy |
| #5 Khas'andro[75616] |
| ool-18bc02ed.dyn.optonline.net |
I dunno, somehow, this BR struck it wrong with me. I hate it when you have a white player and white text, but that's not your fault...Still, try to use, like, light grey text or something for a white player...
None of the pics made me laugh, although they fitted where they belonged...Thos bubbles piss me off, try to make a circle and then a little pointy thing using the drawing tools...I assume that you are using PSP...
It was an alright BR...I'd give it a 6-7..
Oh, and the first pic was a great idea, but you shoulda centered it...and the one pic i DID like was the one where there are three or four Dragoons bursting into blue bubbles from tank fire...Sorry to pick you apart so much, but I just didn't like the BR...But still, I'm not a rater...I wanna see what Sid6.9 has to say about BOTH of our BRs... |
| #6 ~7th^Jantaru[75617] |
| ool-18bc4e6c.dyn.optonline.net |
| wooo im 5 |
| #7 DivvyO[75618] |
| 162.119.232.100 |
| with SCV's name being the only one in different color, I feel like I'm being subliminally messaged to like him. ... <i>SCV ... SCV ... you will worship SCV ... you will fear his italics ... you will give your sexy daughters unto SCV ...</i> |
| #8 Khas'andro[75619] |
| ool-18bc02ed.dyn.optonline.net |
| Hey, whoa, I WANT THEM SEXY DAUGHTERS!!!....please? |
| #9 CraX[75623] |
| dialups-14.palmer.mtaonline.net |
| Terran ownz =P |
| #10 bhelliom[75625] |
| proxy2-external.rdc1.on.home.com |
i dunno i didnt rly like that game.. rly one sided i mean i kinda thought that dialtone suxored. d-matrix on tanks so ownz just goons. those speech bubbles rly pissed me off. look at drawesomes report and try using those ones next time. neway not a bad report... 6-7 i say
BHeLL |
| #11 FuRyEDge[75629] |
| cx665824-a.irvn1.occa.home.com |
| Pretty nice report. You intros still mix up "he" and "I" a lot. I think I'm the 45th person to say this, but your speech bubbles need work. Although your humor is a little less than decent, I liked the "The command center needs wood." That cracked me up. Keep writing reports. This report is significantly better than your first one, and I know future reports will be even better. |
| #12 Falcon[75638] |
| px3he.ss.wave.shaw.ca |
Its not "uh im gonna slip"
its
" Uh Oh Spaghettio! " hehe |
| #13 Rim[75639] |
| 59.fort-worth-08-09rs16rt.tx.dial-access.att.net |
| Not bad. Solid 7, practice makes perfect man, keep it up. |
| #14 Sid6.9[75643] |
| 1Cust152.tnt4.tacoma.wa.da.uu.net |
Well since you are now Evil in The Starcraft Chronicles and turned on me (You bastard!) I'm just going to have to smack you down with the Things Report damn it!
Me likee, Me likee, this is the Things me likee-
- Ha ha ROFL, you fell out of bed?!? Now that's funny.
- Writing was very nice, good details, and flowed smoothly.
- Pic Quality was good.
- Pic Selection, wow, two reports in a row with lots of tanks getting blown up, and blowing shit up. Must be my lucky day.
- And for a game where SCV outscored his opponent big time, it was a somewhat decent game where it shoulda been totally one-sided. Dialtone did attack quite often, just too bad he didn't expand more.
- Like I said, I like the historical references. I don't know, it just adds something to the report, and plus, you are the first I've seen do that. It's like your calling card to have that in there, it distiguishes your reports.
The Things that could be done to improve your report.
Everyone basically covered everything, but here's a brief list of it. With a few extra minor adjustments.
- Your intro was a little too long.
- Use Gray for a White Player
- Once or Twice with the bubbles is okay, but not all the time please. And they do need a little work still, but are improving.
- Borders for your pics will enhance your report even more.
- If you want to put commentary onto your pics, look into doing Alt-Text. It's easy to do, and when your writing in the HTML for the pics you can put in the Alt-Text at the same time. Just make sure to write down what you want to say on a piece of paper so you don't forget it.
Report Card Reads-
Writing- A- (The intro could be shorter.)
Pic Quality- B+ (Just missing borders to really bring them out more.)
Pic Slelction- A
HTML Usage- B (The white for Dialtone really detracted from the report, it shouldn't really be a big deal, but for some reason it did annoy my enjoyment a little.)
Entertainment- B+
Overall- B+
Personal Comments- You are coming a long way Overmind, keep em comin. With the imporvements that I and others have mentioned you will only improve, and quite possible become a "don't miss this report" author. Keep at it. :) |
| #15 znzf[75654] |
| 24.65.81.66.on.wave.home.com |
this truly shows how incompetent sid6.9 would be as a rater
"pic quality was good"
the speech bubbles ?
distracted from pic quality
he likes the historical references
thats the only total distraction of waste that is in this report
end note: at least he aint rude with the bad/ugly part
report - 7 |
| #16 <FONT COLOR=YELLOW> |]AGOMAR[75658] |
| gateway.ncdsb.com |
Nice br, I'd give it a 7 - although work on those friggin' speech bubbles!
Otherwise, sweet. |
| #17 HKRules[75660] |
| c319235.extern.lawrenceville.org |
| Why isn't the comments section broken yet? |
| #18 Napoleic[75661] |
| 01-026.036.popsite.net |
| Hmm I liked it I thought it should be an 8. I don't why you guys hated the History and speech bubbles so much. And the writing I found was rather gripping. That map is kinda imbal to terrans favour so I can sympathise with Dialtone, but Hack accusing is bad manner. I would think that any of us are beyond suspicion. |
| #19 Dialtone_[75663] |
| athe530-o019.otenet.gr |
Great report Overmind, maybe i wont break you comments section after all. :)
Anyway about accusing SCV of hacking, i _always_ do that and he replies the same, we've played long enough for both to know that it's a joke. I lost the game when my bottom left expansion went down, i had about 5k in bank and my main/natural was almost mined out, but my last offensives didnt fare that well. Ah well at least the rematch went better for me ^^
Great br again, an 8 i'd say.
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| #20 Shepherd[75665] |
| res104a-013.rh.rit.edu |
LOL, Dial
Great BR. . .8 a lot of descriptions that really bring into the battle. . .
and whoa. . .long battle for a bridge, eh?
TERRAN OWNS TOSS!!!!!! |
| #21 TheCrypticDwarf[75681] |
| spider-tl051.proxy.aol.com |
Guess I can't say what Dref said on this report......
Great Report!
Don't think a gosu freak of nature that changes his name every 10 days. My new name is IThinkI'mAClone and you probably don't care and you think i'm a bitch for wasting your time.
Uh oh. I hear the car rumble better get out of this house and go home..... |
| #22 SCV~007[75682] |
| t2o57p76.telia.com |
Hey I just read it, great report Overmind!
I enjoyed the speech bubbles, all but one made me laugh hard ;) I think you described the game very well, you even made it sound more interresting although some details was left out (such as me totally owning dial, thx gw.)
And as Dialtone_ says, we always call each other hackers, its just a joke we have. And he DID own me in the rematch ;)
GW on the report, its definately <b>gold</b>. |
| #23 Flying_Yoda_Monster[75765] |
| spider-tp024.proxy.aol.com |
Is it always cold in New York? It really isn't! I didn't like the history (it was lame and confusing) and some of bubbles were horrible especially the ahmen one (discriminator, racist). but all in all it was OKAY (and I stress the okay). SO plz be not a discriminator and may your next battle report clean it must be
BYE !!!!!!!! |
| #24 SCV~007[75837] |
| t3o57p58.telia.com |
| Gogo power ranger raters! Hurry! Kekekekkee |
| #25 (DL)Spam[75872] |
| hst000003162um.kincannon.olemiss.edu |
| Mousepaint ownage but the comments in your super cool MSPaint bubbles were lame, except the first 2. |
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