| #1 Monty Pylon[81240] |
| gateway.Culinary.EDU |
| Geez...so many fan fics are coming out and none are good. Including mine! If this gets as bad a response as the last ones did it is time off for me. |
| #2 _Insanitarium_[81241] |
| spider-ta056.proxy.aol.com |
Fan Fiction...yay!
Insan |
| #3 HKRules[81244] |
| c319224.extern.lawrenceville.org |
| He;s only a commander? |
| #4 UDontknOwME[81246] |
| bsg-ma9c-63.rasserver.net |
This was a good start Monty. But I find this writing style confusing. You went from person to person and place to place too quickly. Next time, calm yourself before you write and write thorough stories. This was a good start though. Better than mine
UDontKnOwME |
| #5 Eat-the-Chobo[81248] |
| spider-wa063.proxy.aol.com |
| NOOO DONT STOP WRITING NOW I WANNA SEE WHAT HAPPENS TO RAYNOR AHHHHH KEEP WRITING AHHHH AHHH AHHHHHHHH KEEP WRITING |
| #6 pen and ink[81258] |
| extfw.dcgov.org |
| eh...fan fics are nice, but usually battlereports are better. |
| #7 Star134[81259] |
| spider-wk021.proxy.aol.com |
| I enjoyed this and look forward to more. |
| #8 the()vermind[81268] |
| spider-ta072.proxy.aol.com |
| BRING THE TRAITOR, "{Ahc}overmind}" back, and connect it! |
| #9 ThieverIV[81269] |
| spider-wo053.proxy.aol.com |
| Someone should add a section to BR.com for stories (of any kind) so people who just want BR's can get just BR's so they're not always complaining. |
| #10 UDontKnOwME[81271] |
| spider-tj051.proxy.aol.com |
Theiever, people can usually tell the difference between a fanfic and a br. If you look at the title, it's not that hard to figure out.
10th comment owns all. I look down on all of those single digit people!
Oh, and good fanfic Monty, keep'em coming.
UDontKnOwME |
| #11 Monty Pylon[81280] |
| gateway.Culinary.EDU |
Sorry Overmind but your ass is dead. You and a cruiser crashed onto Aiur in a blazing inferno thanks to CKane. You can not be brought back. But what about your bastard son from Kerrigan. I AM KIDDING. I also am not putting people in this one so sorry but don't ask. And UDKM...11th comment owns all I look down on all the single digit comments and those with only a 1 and a zero. hahahahhahahahaha
Damn the man, save the Empire!
Monty Pylon |
| #12 ~ZC~K@O$[81301] |
| 216.241.44.88 |
monty monty monty, how ya doin? =) i like it for sure no doubt keep it up dun stop hell yah fan fic=you. I dun really read other fan fic, so keep it up. And definetly good start for this one. too bad more people can't appreciate fan fic TT
Peace
-kaoS |
#13  [81310] |
| 208.196.35.239 |
*sigh*
Another unfinished fan fic.
Again, I beg you guys. Finish the damn stories before releasing them. Or at least make sure you have a good chunk of the story done.
This was like a two page free write. No coherency or consistency and totally confusing. No time to develop any characters or real plot.
There's been too much of this lately and its starting to really grate on me. Sorry if this sounded harsh.
Dref |
| #14 Khas'andro[81342] |
| ool-18bc02ed.dyn.optonline.net |
| I hate you. You suck. Die. Burn in hell. Just for this, I'm gonna write a fanfic and have you die three or four times. Burn your pubes off. Suck my left nut. YOU ALL SUCK!! Why did I have to die? I'm not ready another report by Monty, cuz HE SUCKS. |
| #15 Khas'andro[81343] |
| ool-18bc02ed.dyn.optonline.net |
| /me can't type, I'm not reading another report by Monty, cuz HE SUCKS. |
| #16 Khas'andro[81344] |
| ool-18bc02ed.dyn.optonline.net |
| I'm gonna be gay now: |
| #17 Khas'andro[81345] |
| ool-18bc02ed.dyn.optonline.net |
| YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! YOU SUCK!! |
| #18 Monty Pylon[81349] |
| gateway.Culinary.EDU |
| You know Khas I was going to place you in this story and have you play and intricate role. Since you have so homosexually wasted the comment section I will not be putting you in the story. |
| #19 Khas'andro[81350] |
| ool-18bc02ed.dyn.optonline.net |
Sorry, but I had to.
BTW, this fanfic sucks. |
| #20 Endz[81426] |
| 3ff8b06e.dsl.flashcom.net |
| lol khas'andro u sux |
| #21 america~jin[81493] |
| 12.7.75.67 |
| fanfics suck |
| #22 UDontKnOwME[81512] |
| spider-wm062.proxy.aol.com |
Dont be so hard on Monty peeps. Everyone goes through rough phases. I am currently going through a fanfic, and it's not any better than Monty's. Dont worry Monty, I know you can pull this through. Dont be so hard on fanfics. Its just as hard to write a fanfic as a br. porobably harder. and america, if you don't like fanfics, dont read them.
Good luck,
UDontKnOwME |
| #23 Khas'andro[81543] |
| ool-18bc02ed.dyn.optonline.net |
yay i sux
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| #24 fat matt[87828] |
| 216.82.63.11 |
| eh....it was alright nothing special...a little confusing |
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