| #1 Khas'andro[81361] |
| ool-18bc02ed.dyn.optonline.net |
| Hope everyone likes this...I'm trying to let my writing style flow... |
| #2 King_[LSRS-13][81364] |
| c1081558-a.clmba1.mo.home.com |
| I read a bit of it, I don't usually read fan fics, but there were a few mistakes. 'affect on the townspeople' is supposed to be 'effect'. |
| #3 UDontKnOwME[81365] |
| spider-mtc-tb032.proxy.aol.com |
Needs to be longer. Maybe you should unsend this... Drefsab is gonna kill you if he reads it.
Rating = 3.5 |
| #4 Khas'andro[81366] |
| ool-18bc02ed.dyn.optonline.net |
Whoa...you're that Counter-Strike guy I curse out all the time...Hi.
Anyways, that line is pretty far into the story so you musta read most of it...and BTW, sure, criticize me, but don't read it all...and no one's perfect..except me =P |
| #5 Khas'andro[81367] |
| ool-18bc02ed.dyn.optonline.net |
| I just wanted to get this out because my creative juices were overflowing, and I wanted to see what people's reactions to a D1 fan-fic would be, I mean, I didn't want to post half the story to find out that no one liked it. If you hate me for this, Dref, I peomise chapter 2 will be a lot longer...Like i said, this is kind of like a computer game demo...you either like it or not, but it decides whether or not you want the whole thing... |
| #6 Khas'andro[81368] |
| ool-18bc02ed.dyn.optonline.net |
| And yes, I mean CREATIVE juices |
| #7 SixtyWATZ[81369] |
| h0010b59b0728.ne.mediaone.net |
| Khas i got banned from icantwin.com server. Gimme aim name and ill talk to you bout it. |
| #8 Khas'andro[81370] |
| ool-18bc02ed.dyn.optonline.net |
| haha wtf did you do? OZKhasandro |
| #9 the()vermind[81371] |
| user-2ive67s.dialup.mindspring.com |
| his khas, no offense, but dref will, let's say, kill your commendable lifetime average with this. A) It was too short, B) who here wanted a d1 fan fic? Well it doesen't matter, comendable effort |
| #10 HKRules[81372] |
| c319249.extern.lawrenceville.org |
Bah griswold - crunched under the iron soles of my barbarian in D2 already.
too short.
Where'd your previous fan fic go? |
| #11 Khas'andro[81376] |
| ool-18bc02ed.dyn.optonline.net |
| Haha HK...my previous fanfic was flushed down the proverbial toilet. And as I've said, I swear to God that the next chapter will be MUCH longer, i just wanted to see how people liked my writing. The D1 part is because I love D1. Period. |
| #12 Scarab[81377] |
| ACA99490.ipt.aol.com |
| <font size="18">that font was big</font size> |
| #13 Khas'andro[81378] |
| ool-18bc02ed.dyn.optonline.net |
| <big><big><big><big><big><big><big><big><big>Thank You</big></big></big></big></big></big></big></big></big> |
| #14 badtz_maru[81379] |
| barry-asy-94.rutgers.edu |
| diablo is confusing |
| #15 <font color="red">Char4Life</font>[81383] |
| extfw.dcgov.org |
| heh, first time ive seen a d1 fan fic. but isnt this story real pointless since everyone is tristram eventually dies and diablo comes back, making the soceresses quest meaningless? oh well, keep it up. |
| #16 campingcommie[81388] |
| nas-86-43.chicago-t.navipath.net |
| i stopped reading when you meantioned it was a diablo 1 fan fic. |
#17  [81456] |
| 208.196.35.239 |
Hi,
Well written for what was there. Too bad nothing happens... :P
4
Dref |
| #18 Khas'andro[81497] |
| ool-18bc02ed.dyn.optonline.net |
| Dref, did you fuck up the rating or is Bob the Newt playing a nasty joke on me?? |
| #19 the()vermind[81498] |
| user-2ivebhl.dialup.mindspring.com |
| a 10? IMPOSSIBLE! |
| #20 DarkMage[81501] |
| 209-81.dialup.cloud9.net |
sorry to disapoint you Khas, but dref fucked up the rating...
-DarkMage |
| #21 Khas'andro[81504] |
| ool-18bc02ed.dyn.optonline.net |
| Haha fuck you Overmind...next will be better. And who cares, it's a 10, no matter hwo I got it =P |
| #22 testosterone[81506] |
| mkc-65-26-143-252.kc.rr.com |
hah khas, lucky bitch:(), INTERESTING....
by the way, hows your momma doin, we went out |
| #23 Scarab[81511] |
| AC83C005.ipt.aol.com |
haha dref
fun with numbers, eh? |
| #24 Khas'andro[81519] |
| ool-18bc02ed.dyn.optonline.net |
| Haha, the joke's on you testos, that was my dad |
| #25 Khas'andro[81530] |
| ool-18bc02ed.dyn.optonline.net |
| Damn he fixed it.. |
| #26 the()vermind[81614] |
| user-2iveabt.dialup.mindspring.com |
| well, once something is fixed, it doesen't come back |
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