| #1 barage[83528] |
| 160.10.203.35 |
| 1st? *shrug* |
| #2 Barage[83529] |
| 160.10.203.35 |
| To be true, I'm realy starting to see what AkumaSpawn said in Udontknowme's second fic:sentences with only 1 idea always does makes reading rather monotonus. This is a similar case. Check on the comments section of "The Adventures of the Hunter II" to see it. |
| #3 HKRules[83535] |
| c319097.extern.lawrenceville.org |
| HI |
| #4 HKRules[83537] |
| c319097.extern.lawrenceville.org |
OoooKkkkk
Approximate Quote from Brood War Secret level, Duran:
"I am merely the servant of a higher power"
So, if he was created by the ()vermind,which is gone, then you are not following the blizzard storyline. |
| #5 outsider[83538] |
| spider-te054.proxy.aol.com |
| damn i am sick of fan fics |
| #6 Monty Pylon[83539] |
| gateway.Culinary.EDU |
Just because the thing is dead doesn't mean he can't serve it. Besides don't you realize that you have to wait and see what i do next. People always assume too much and then make judgement based on assumtions. be patienet and you will see what i have in store.
As for Barage UDKM had a basic "Dan runs this way and Dan runs that way" sort of deal. My focus is on the storyline and the progression and explanation of certain features. Not the same think. |
| #7 HKRules[83542] |
| c319097.extern.lawrenceville.org |
Uhhhh Higher Power man.
If it's dead then it couldn't really be "Higher", right? |
| #8 Monty Pylon[83544] |
| gateway.Culinary.EDU |
| hmmm....well It doesn't matter any more. Shockwaves awesome fic has raised fan fic writing to a new bar and simple text only fic like mine is doomed to failure. Pictures win again...ah well. :-( |
| #9 -=FOrsaken=-[83549] |
| c114217.upc-c.chello.nl |
| Ah Pictures who cares.. Shock writes great shit btw but it's more one fight in a whooolllleeee campian, ur shit is the long lin ein the story and mich more interesting concerning plot, shockwave just describes actions or battles, you describes the whole story like I said and It's good stuff keep em coming. |
| #10 Allyn[83554] |
| 24.70.17.244 |
| Keep them coming Monty. You have me hooked. |
| #11 ThieverIV[83559] |
| spider-wc023.proxy.aol.com |
I will repeat for the 93287432947 time that although your fanfic is excellant and always has been YOU HAVE A BIG PROBLEM WITH PUNCUATION (or lack therof), ESPECIALLY WITH COMMAS. Sentances like "I do not appreciate being ordered by the likes of you Raynor" would be much better with a comma thus: "I do not appreciate being ordered by the likes of you, Raynor."
Besides that, continues to be good, if people get pissed off about it being a fanfic start posting in the other section. |
| #12 C|oud[83560] |
| d226-49-232.home.cgocable.net |
| screw you, fanfic boy |
| #13 CKane[83570] |
| c209662-a.haywd2.sfba.home.com |
| Dude... meet the 'other' reports section. Post there please... :*( |
| #14 Daedeloth[83571] |
| bele175.wuh.wustl.edu |
Monty Pylon,
You do an excellent job with this fanfic. I was extremely happy to open up BR.com and see not one, but two new additions to your work. I really do enjoy what u've done and ur creative writing skills are impressive. Do not let these other people discourage you from continuing to post. They have obviously not given this story a fair read if they are so ready to pass it off as simple "another fanfic." Your originality and willingness to venture a bit past convention (i.e making kerrigan human again) make ur fanfics decidedly unique from the others that plague this site. Keep up the good work.
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| #15 Monty Pylon[83576] |
| gateway.Culinary.EDU |
Thanks man. I wonder if its worth it and then someone tells me to keep going. I will finish this story no matter what. For now, I have to sit back and rethink my next episode.
Damn the man, save the Empire!
Monty Pylon |
| #16 Black Label[83600] |
| nchobo03.telenet-ops.be |
| Good work Monty Pylon! Please keep them coming!!! |
| #17 Death's Servant-TPF[83647] |
| cr926028-a.rct1.bc.wave.home.com |
| If you will stop writing, I will hunt you down, stalk you, and murder you in cold blood.(It's hard enough stalking Invictus) |
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