| #1 the()vermind[83618] |
| user-2ive6f1.dialup.mindspring.com |
| Welcome to the 3001 report on br.com If you want to make comments, please be specific, i know that i made lots of enemies with my critiquing style, and i promise to change that, but feel free to break my little feelings by mimiccing it. |
| #2 DarkMage[83623] |
| 209-81.dialup.cloud9.net |
quit posting after me! oh wells, now to read
-DarkMage |
| #3 znzf[83626] |
| 24.112.14.162.on.wave.home.com |
need a pic or two in early section of the report to capture the readers attention
or
smaller font in the beginning so the reader can see the pics faster
|
| #4 ...[83627] |
| 24-240-44-88.hsacorp.net |
| This is going to be a gold... good work |
| #5 Zalbag[83639] |
| chi-tgn-gof-vty18.as.wcom.net |
| "1, we all hate you" ^^ |
| #6 CaughtNaked[83644] |
| nas-3-87.dc-t.navipath.net |
GandC quit fucking breaking the comments section!! gay.
~CN |
| #7 Wisest~Yoda[83657] |
| pm3-3-197.blueriver.mwt.net |
| ban that retard, gj! |
| #8 }DraginslayeR{[83663] |
| ip-111-2-106.nyc.navipath.net |
You DO need something in the beginning; a big title or some pics or something. The report was great, but one last thing:
You need more alt-text! }8P
I LIKE DIGGING THE SAME PILE OF DIRT OVER AND OVER.
-- }DraginslayeR{
"I wish I were Irish." |
| #9 ape[83664] |
| c193.150.239.42.cm-upc.chello.se |
This was a very good one, indeed the best this month,considering that there has only been fan-fics this month=(. But then again, this would kick ass even if there were other decent reports :).
-Keep up the good job!
-ape, AKA nyTt_konto |
| #10 Falcon[83676] |
| px3he.ss.wave.shaw.ca |
| holy jeez the comment sections fucked one of the pics looked a little fuzzy to me |
| #11 <font color=yellow> |]agomar[83725] |
| static-114.itcanada.com |
This report had SO much potential . . . but ovie you've GOT to listen to your critique. This is almost <b> exactly </b> the same easily preventable flaws as the one you wrote before.
For one, CONTINUITY!!! I mean, every pic here was different. Some had borders, some didn't, some were cut off, others had irritating words ( like "cell" ), etc. Also, remember that CENTER html! And some images were blury.
Plus there was just too much text for the number of images. If you're going to have pics, do it properly!
Finally, the little blurbs on your images should be catchy and immediately intriquing. Even your best little blurb "A hesitant attacker, an aggressive defender," could have used a lot of work. Something simple like "Repulsed - but barely!" would even have been better.
For more, just read my review on your latest report. I'd give this an 8, but really a 7.5 might be better ( for not taking your critique seriously ). I'm sorry Ovie, you're a nice guy, a good writer and you have lots of talent . . . you could do alot better than this! |
| #12 HKRules[83726] |
| c319183.extern.lawrenceville.org |
Alt-text Alt-text Alt-text Alt-text Alt-text Alt-text.
I bet the solitary 10 was voted by yourself. |
| #13 A_Monkey[83727] |
| spider-te071.proxy.aol.com |
| I was looking for a game to obs not playing 3v1 rush. Draginslayer is a weird person who has no idea what he is doing |
| #14 SoY~b0mB[83854] |
| A010-1000.KRLD.splitrock.net |
| Hmm....even though you made fun of my forum posts, I have to give this a 10 because it's not a fanfic. ^^; |
| #15 Cearas[83874] |
| cache07.syd.optusnet.com.au |
Todays profound thought; "I wish I was black"
Tomorrows profound thought; "No I dont"
yay, nice work. I voted for number one though. |
| #16 derek[83892] |
| ACACF43F.ipt.aol.com |
| the overmind > all |
| #17 <font color=yellow> |]agomar[83916] |
| static-114.itcanada.com |
| Kudos on your first 9! Though I still think the mark shoulda been lower ( ;] ) I congratulate you heartily and welcome you to the club =D |
| #18 TheInsaneRedToad[84294] |
| ool-18bf1607.dyn.optonline.net |
| Uhhh get better players to play plz, otherwise GJ |
| #19 BOBBY357[84589] |
| spider-mtc-tb032.proxy.aol.com |
| nice job, ()vermind. toad, plz piss off. the players were good. u have no friends. now go in your room and cry and slit your wrists so u die a slow and agonizing death. gj. (nothing personal toad :P) |
| #20 iggy[84642] |
| 106.los-angeles-01-02rs.ca.dial-access.att.net |
| yes master, *bends over* asdf |
| #21 The Chosen One[84833] |
| p432-049.ppp.get2net.dk |
| now listen up BRs with only gaming gets tedius lets face assholes here we actually have a FUN BR (love the start) |
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