| #1 EdV[86152] |
| spider-te071.proxy.aol.com |
| Primero! |
| #2 livingexception[86153] |
| spider-te071.proxy.aol.com |
| I own you all, now I read |
| #3 Hype[86156] |
| 172-148-237-24.sol-dial.gci.net |
NOOOOOOOOOOOOO so close =] #3
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| #4 Iron Lung[86158] |
| a-db.aspn.net |
| not bad |
| #5 Jester-C-Bomb[86177] |
| spider-mtc-ta053.proxy.aol.com |
| well.. not bad at all,, not great, but not bad, and at least the short plot developement is beter than bad plot developement |
| #6 Nice^0ne[86178] |
| c1457880-a.sttln1.wa.home.com |
| Sorry. I just realized fanfics are dumb! |
| #7 Nice^0ne[86196] |
| vpop-86.ucdavis.edu |
| Administrators, please delete comment #6. Poser. Check the IP address. |
#8  [86226] |
| frasier.ford.com |
| I enjoyed this story. Short and sweet. Makes good use of the Starcraft universe. First one I've read that focuses on a ghost. Keep up the good work. |
| #9 Franklin James[86400] |
| mkc-65-28-50-248.kc.rr.com |
| Pretty good..it was a lot better than most I've read coughcoughUDontKnOwMEcoughcough..and at least the ghosts didn't try to lock down some hydras or somethin =] |
| #10 Wisest~Yoda[86403] |
| pm3-1-11.boscobel.mwt.net |
| alright |
| #11 Jester-C-Bomb[86404] |
| spider-mtc-tf052.proxy.aol.com |
| FJ got it right |
| #12 SilverLeafTree[86443] |
| c519836-a.iowact1.ia.home.com |
| not bad could have been better but everybody already knows that any report writer could kick my ass. |
| #13 Robert Frazer[86598] |
| frazers.demon.co.uk |
Not bad, but one wonders how you could merely refer to a mile-wide Science Vessel as 'oh it just finished ten minutes ago sir". The story was a bit too game-oriented to make it plausible
Good writing all the same, though. |
| #14 Nice^0ne[86626] |
| vpop-69.ucdavis.edu |
T.T.Boy: thanks for the comments, and for rating. The ghost is a character I've always felt deserves further elaboration.
SliverLeafTree: Buck up, chum! Try your pen. You might be surprised.
Robert Frazer: thanks for the input: you're right of course, the story is game-oriented. I was trying to imagine an actual scenario based on a recent game I played. Of course, in reality, the time scale would be greatly increased. I'll take it into consideration.
All other commenters: thanks for leaving your mark!
with best regards to all;
(the true) Nice^0ne |
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