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- Mogalin




#1 Cearas[89289]
cache02-e3c.syd.optusnet.com.au
1st y0.
#2 Cearas[89290]
cache02-e3c.syd.optusnet.com.au
Ack, watch that html buddy. Read the Reporting Guides too thx.

#3 DracoLich[89291]
h24-67-82-135.cg.shawcable.net
Why whats wrong with the HTML?
#4 the()vermind[89298]
spider-mtc-ta051.proxy.aol.com
you show great promise, just the text was a tad short, and it's always bad when pictures take up more text that pictures. The game wasn't that good either, 4-7.
#5 willwinforfood[89299]
ool-18bcec8e.dyn.optonline.net
a little too one sided and lack of detail but still nice. like during the zerg's attack what happened to the mutas? maybe some minimap pics for the battle scenes too. what else..uuh..oh more pictures of the battles if you arent going to describe micro or what went where during the attack. all in all it boils down to detail. cant wait for future reports cause you show promise!

-wwff

4-6



#6 Ling-erie[89303]
igw-se.astra.com
That was ok, but it lacked any real zeal. I think you should've reported either (A) a better game, or (B) more detail of the final battle in this game.

Otherwise it was ok, but nothing special.

#7 Cearas[89304]
perax7-140.dialup.optusnet.com.au
Was it just me or is the report all un-aligned with the page. Like uhh yeah.
#8 eat-the-chobo[89305]
spider-tm073.proxy.aol.com
sux
#9 iggy[89307]
intergate.spusd.k12.ca.us
hi
#10 y0urg0d[89308]
px3nr.wp.shawcable.net
report longer game next time. Otherwise, not bad.
#11 Monty Pylon[89310]
gateway.Culinary.EDU
The game was a bad choice and your pics were less then exciting, particularly the first. I would get a better game, and choose pics of more exciting action. You should have taken a pic of that early ling vs zealot battle.
#12 badtz maru[89315]
barry-asy-65.rutgers.edu
the borders stuff were fuXord

#13 CKane[89326]
c209662-a.haywd2.sfba.home.com
Too damned short

5

#14 CaughtNaked[89346]
spider-wf044.proxy.aol.com
<i>hmmmm, game was kinda dull. Nothing to exciting here...Cept the part where you said that the Reporter was YOU! WOW! who would have though...nuff sarcasim. Everyone else said pretty much, buy HTML For Dummies, or read some guides. For adding detail, if you took bad notes, just describe each units attack(ie hydras spit green acid..so on, be more creative). You do so some potential though, if you keep at it long nuff and work hard, I think you might become a reporter worth watching for. gl</i>
6ish, hard to tell
t2yl,
~CN




#15 CaughtNaked[89347]
spider-wf044.proxy.aol.com
<i>btw, has anyone else noticed iggy becoming even <b>MORE</b> annoying? If thats possible that is...</i>
#16 [89390]
on-tor-blr-a58-04-1092.look.ca
to get a better rating
-choose a better game
- use more detail
-pics with action in them
not too bad though, 6



#17 SCV~007[89691]
t1o57p20.telia.com
<i>Stop using the bloody italics</i>

I liked the report, or rather, the style and language. The game was good as far as I can tell, if the zerg hadn't wasted his army on a solid cannon/zeal/temp defense he could have won.

I don't think the pictures were bad, but try adding a minimap in them, so you know where the action is. I get a feeling it was a good game, reported with good style but with a lack of detail.

Write a few more reports, you'll get the hang of it.





#18 blade[ek][97726]
193.231.230.7
gg fjk



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