| #1 TDM[95053] |
| ci991207-b.edgewd1.ky.home.com |
Well, I'm glad I can put my reports in the right section!!
Admin, fix this please.
Also, First Author comment.
First comment, too.
:) Enjoy.
-TDM |
| #2 ZealotWarlord[95058] |
| host-216-78-27-83.clt.bellsouth.net |
| #2 Damn I'm Good |
| #3 xld.aldogrez[95059] |
| spider-th012.proxy.aol.com |
heheh, nice
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| #4 Drintr[95060] |
| user209.pop2.cwia.com |
| LOL, interesting br (if you could call it that). Some parts were a bit unclear though. |
| #5 TDM[95063] |
| ci991207-b.edgewd1.ky.home.com |
| Such as? |
| #6 Falcon[95065] |
| h24-66-252-151.ss.shawcable.net |
where am I TDM?
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| #7 iggy[95071] |
| adsl-64-160-24-96.dsl.lsan03.pacbell.net |
this fucking sucked
iggy for prez |
| #8 Psyonic_Reaver[95074] |
| 1Cust206.tnt1.bend.or.da.uu.net |
This gave me a good laugh. But wheres Ling-erie or CrackHeadJeb or YourRoleModel.. Your leaving the important ppl out!!
*Note to self: Shut up* |
| #9 Squad-o-death[95075] |
| h000094c7d4a8.ne.mediaone.net |
| nice...but wayyyyyyyy too short. you also definitely need to work on ur grammar. |
| #10 Kralgon[95077] |
| c847772-a.boulder1.co.home.com |
| ya, it was pretty short. You kinda made it seem long(er) by double spacing it ^_^ Good concept though, and it *was* pretty funny. |
| #11 derek[95088] |
| tcache-mtc-tc01.proxy.aol.com |
hahahaha
"Derek: I have an argumentative demeanor."
hahahaha |
| #12 [SM]Strega~F[95092] |
| proxy6.senet.com.au |
Hehe, funny stuff. Keep it coming.
Strega |
| #13 the()vermind[95102] |
| tcache-wm01.proxy.aol.com |
| you should have put stuff about who raters, and others alike hate. Drefsab hates me, scarab hates me, krebster hates me, hawk used to hate me, etc. But of course i submit to authority, so i'd probably end up as an unwilling slave, n/m |
| #14 TDM[95116] |
| ci991207-b.edgewd1.ky.home.com |
| Dudes, FYI, there are 5 parts, this one is the shortest with 3 chapters... Everyone else comes in in the 2nd and 3rd parts, with the 4th setting up the climax, and the 5th being the climax. |
#15 [95118] |
| user63.net128.va.sprint-hsd.net |
gave me a chuckle, not bad tdm
ill let you choose rating part.. do you want me to rate each one individually or as one big thing? |
#16 [95119] |
| cb790950-b.elmhst1.il.home.com |
I would give this a better rating if you had finished it. This was too short, but funny... :)
I liked,
Breeze: *stabs Fintonial with sword*
Fintonial: *dies*
:)
6
Dref |
| #17 Eradicate~Me[95127] |
| pa-millscreek2a-240.buf.adelphia.net |
| gw not putting my gayness in =[ |
| #18 Khas[95139] |
| ool-18ba98a3.dyn.optonline.net |
Khas says: put me in there!
Make me like, the evil, maniacal couch or something! |
| #19 livingexception[95144] |
| spider-mtc-tb053.proxy.aol.com |
lol I'm gonna watch Testosterone come in, then me be his fanatical lackey.
Hail the Lord of Macro!
LE |
#20 [95147] |
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| Yah too short. But has potential, if you developed it a little more |
| #21 Ling-erie[95176] |
| igw-se.astra.com |
hahahahahah WTF WAS THAT?????????
na, i found it pretty funny, the bit of it i read anyway =p |
| #22 the()vermind[95199] |
| tcache-mtc-tg01.proxy.aol.com |
| please remember us br'ers, the nobility of the site. We atract people here. In probability most of us would side with fox, but it's up to you to decide almighty author. |
#23 [95208] |
| barry-asy-80.rutgers.edu |
| if im not in sequal i ban this |
| #24 CrackHeadJeb[95284] |
| pppwb150.htc.net |
| hehehhe, funny ;) |
| #25 TDM[95463] |
| ci991207-b.edgewd1.ky.home.com |
I dunno... Rate as ye wish. Starting 2nd part now.
Glad it made ppl laugh, makes me feel like I'm doing my job. |
| #26 EnragedWorm (Mistah._T)[95564] |
| alg32011y213f.ab.hsia.telus.net |
| Good job on the br TDM, i found it funny, made me laugh. Keep it comin. |
| #27 EldritchEvil[142984] |
| nr11-216-196-184-122.fuse.net |
| Should I be ashamed that I wrote this? |