| #1 Shadow D'Arc[95716] |
| spider-wk061.proxy.aol.com |
| 1st. Now to read |
| #2 Shadow D'Arc[95717] |
| spider-wk061.proxy.aol.com |
Too short. Bit of a crappy game to report though, "He sent stuff, I finally killed it off and killed him" kinda plot. Poor Mr. SCV :(.
Peace,
Shadow D'Arc |
| #3 [SM]Strega~F[95718] |
| proxy3.senet.com.au |
Gay.
That is all I have to say.
Now you are gonna pay.
When I go
Away.
Strega |
| #4 triped[95731] |
| cf2.utc.com |
lol strega
The secret to a text-only is to describe scenes well enough that you don't need pictures. Unfortunately, it was a bit unclear how exactly this was all taking place. Plus, a bit of flair put into these reports certainly never hurt anybody. |
| #5 Ling-erie[95733] |
| igw-se.astra.com |
more detail, what was the map called? where did u start? describe it a little, make more sense with your 1st paragraph, i had to read it 3 time to get it in full (i m assuming he made gis 1st pylon ion your base). I'll watch the replay when i get home to see what exactly u were on about, then i'll comment on what u missed. Also, he attacked with 9 zealots vs 1 tanks, 2 medics 3 bats and a rine, and u lost only a tank.... Are you micro-god? how the hell did u achive that???
We'll c on the replay, and i'll give u a full comment then.
hf |
#6  [95734] |
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Post this in replay section, and it woulda been a great one, because its not enough text for a good battle report, but PLENTY of text for a good replay.
-JV |
| #7 LuckyNewbie:P[95742] |
| user-33qtpdt.dialup.mindspring.com |
| I thought replays would end text-only br's |
| #8 iggyson[95745] |
| intergate.spusd.k12.ca.us |
FIRST
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| #9 (Atma)[95764] |
| 84-136-237-24.fbx-dial.gci.net |
| In responce to Ling-erie comments on the Game name, it is on the top first line =P. This was my first Battle Reportt and thus far I new I would make sistakes. Thnx for the comments I will take all in consideration on my next one. thnx a lot. |
| #10 BADKITTY![95896] |
| ss11.ny.us.ibm.com |
| Dont quite understand what happened... at all.. sure seemed like there was a gateway in the terrans base and a barracks in the protoss base and both of them were producing units... but... that's just too strange to be right. |
| #11 -Legacy-[95955] |
| cx187442-a.dt1.sdca.home.com |
| If you were meaning to do a text only, you should have put more detail into it and more effort, not base the thing around the replay. Every detail should be clearly visable in your mind when you are doing a text only report because then people whomp on you for not having pictures :P Next time, more effort, please. I've seen a 90 year old guy on viagra put more effort into sexin' women then you have spent in time on this battlereport. Hehe..anyways.. try to add more detail, increase the length a little, and use propper ingylsh kay? cuz peepz kneed 2 kno wut ewe seigh. Following this advice I wish you good luck in writing your next battle report. |
| #12 CaughtNaked[95991] |
| spider-wf062.proxy.aol.com |
If your gonna do a text-only report heres a rule of thumb,
'Have as many verbs as you have periods.' YOU NEED ALOT to describe EVERYTHING. Otherwise its easier to check out a replay or pic. Keep trying, you'll get it.
t2yl,
~CN |
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