#1  [96057] |
| papaya.fgm.com |
| Paragraphs would have made a much easier read... make sure you pick the right formatting button next time when you submit, so your spaces are preserved. Writing and grammar were a bit off as well... |
| #2 triped[96061] |
| cf2.utc.com |
2nd.
Wow what a thriller. I was riveted to my seat. I couldn't move. Oh wait. I spilled glue on my seat. I am attempting to get off the seat. My pants are riveted to the seat. I am now attempting to get my pants off the seat....
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| #3 StoneColdNewbie[96066] |
| AC96905E.ipt.aol.com |
Umm...I read the first sentence, neat-oh. Here's one tip though. Do not submit crap all text BR's directly after Breeze.
GG |
| #4 Franklin James[96072] |
| mkc-65-28-49-6.kc.rr.com |
| Lets see, you post a BR with no pics and not even paragraph spacings right after a perfect 10 report done by Breeze..sucks to be you. |
| #5 (;lagwagon;)[96080] |
| px2nr.wp.shawcable.net |
| learn to spell |
| #6 Yerffoeg[96081] |
| host-104.netstandardinc.net |
"I dont recall the last time somebody used spider mines apart from me! (I love those little insects...he he he). "
If your insect joke was geared towards the "Spider" in "Spider Mines" then I should point out that your statement should read, "I dont recall the last time somebody used spider mines apart from me! (I love those little arachnids...he he he).
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| #7 Shadow D'Arc[96096] |
| spider-wl074.proxy.aol.com |
Fix this. Repost. Make a pic of your map so we can see. You'll get a better rating that way. Its the little button that says "Make us do all the <BR> things for you", or something like that. Check the HTML guide for how to show your maps pic, even if you do a Custom single, Black Sheep Wall to see it, and print screen. Doesn't matter, people here have problems with their imaginations.
Peace,
Shadow D'Arc |
| #8 Xellos[96105] |
| cx187442-a.dt1.sdca.home.com |
| Spiders are arachnids..not insects *cough* anyways.. the report was decent for a first report, just make sure you check the spelling.. and more detail.. and.. if it's crappy, how can we enjoy it? ^^ gl to you when/if you decided to make another report :) |
| #9 Beezwax-{SF}[96114] |
| haymaker.leeds.wwwcache.ja.net |
Ssshhh...give me a break you guys...I wrote the report in 30 minutes or so!
Technically, spider mines are not even alive so they AINT even arachnids so shut the fuck up! |
| #10 [96116] |
| papaya.fgm.com |
If you already know your own work isn't good quality, why bother posting it at all? There's no excuse for low-quality efforts anymore.
I would rather see someone post a bad BR that they obviously spent a lot of time and effort on than a BR that an author adds a disclaimer to (pick any one: "I know it's crap", "It's 3 in the morning", "this will suck but i want to write it anyhow", "I already know my BR will suck so don't flame me") and tosses up for kicks.
Cheers. |
| #11 Beezwax-{SF}[96117] |
| magee.leeds.wwwcache.ja.net |
OK OK...
I'm currently typing another report which hopefully will be better than the other one. But still though, 4.0 is not very bad and I am quite chuffed to get these marks even with my average performance. If I do not get over 5.0 this time I'll quit so don't worry... |
| #12 Khas[96150] |
| ool-18ba98a3.dyn.optonline.net |
| Who gives a shit whether spiders are arachnids or not? I think this guy has some potential, next time, maybe he should put some work into the report, he could eventually be an exceptional reporter. |
| #13 [SM]Strega~F[96183] |
| proxy7.senet.com.au |
1000 character limit? WTF?!?! DIE! Damn damn damn! I just typed a friggin' comment and it didn't post! Hmm, well I'll summarise this time then.
Your writing does contain quality. Keep going at it. However, take that extra day or two to really get the report to an optimum standard. BTW, this is related to Khas's comment.
I started out like you. Crappy BRs, crappy scores. (3-4-4) Then, I started to take the time to proofread, to make pictures, to continuously check my work every so often just to make sure that it ran fluently. My last 3 reports went 7.5-8-8. All gold. People have requested that I do a BR for them. The moral of this comment? Keep at it.
You have a quality. That quality is ability. You are able to do good BRs, just take time to do them right!
Strega |
| #14 YOURMOM[96275] |
| dysr-01-164.dialup.netins.net |
| I'D GIVE YOUR REPORT A 2 |
| #15 Khas[96291] |
| ool-18ba98a3.dyn.optonline.net |
I started out awesome, check my records:
7, 7, 8, 4 (crapass fanfic)
You gotta enjoy the game and work hard on the BR. |
| #16 Helpless_Victim[96660] |
| spider-ta071.proxy.aol.com |
| One Word:PICTURES |
| #17 Breeze[96661] |
| spider-ta071.proxy.aol.com |
lol
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