| #1 Drintr[96457] |
| MAX04-2-105.icgla.cwia.com |
| That's annoying, it didn't look like this on the preview command... oh well. Enjoy!!!! |
| #2 mattkid[96458] |
| 00-60-97-d5-1d-d0.bconnected.net |
| hrm |
| #3 mattkid[96459] |
| 00-60-97-d5-1d-d0.bconnected.net |
| it was semi-funny |
| #4 1st Non author comment[96460] |
| host213-122-103-14.btinternet.com |
| J00 sux0r!!!1 |
| #5 damn[96461] |
| host213-122-103-14.btinternet.com |
| =] |
| #6 Starookie[96463] |
| edtn009734.hs.telusplanet.net |
very creative, i liked the style...very refreshing :)
7-8 |
| #7 Drintr[96465] |
| MAX04-2-93.icgla.cwia.com |
| Wasn't going too much for a comedy report, just trying out a new way to present a br that would keep readers interested. |
| #8 Khas[96467] |
| ool-18ba98a3.dyn.optonline.net |
Wow...so many 'Things' to say, and so little bad 'Things' you did!
Things that worked well-
-Wow, your writing style and the "story" of this report were great. I think, if you are as creative as this in every report you do, you've got a future here!
-The way you developed the personalities of each character was great, considering you had to do it within a relatively small report!
-Pic selection was good, for the few you used ;)
-You made me laugh quite a few times: "Maybe I should take my rifle and stick it up your zealot [CENSORED] and then [CENSORED]." haha...
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| #9 Khas[96468] |
| ool-18ba98a3.dyn.optonline.net |
Things that could have been better-
-Some layout troubles, where pictures overlapped text. It might just be me, but luckily, I was able to refresh and catch a glimpse of the text.
-Not sure if this is why it was out of the white block, but you need to use <table> tags in your reports.
-Nothing bad, but while viewing your source code for the report, I say <br /> which I know is XML...you don't really need to use that yet, just stick with good ol' HTML 4.0
I have to say, great report, great idea, and keep up the good work! |
| #10 Khas[96469] |
| ool-18ba98a3.dyn.optonline.net |
| asdf say = saw, my bad |
| #11 ~STIM~007[96480] |
| 1Cust138.tnt1.bend.or.da.uu.net |
| Drintr. Good report but you forgot to mention my drone attack on Ling-eries base just before he resigned. I took out about 5 key buildings. Plus you forgot about my 3 queens that went around broodling High Templar on sight. (Which was fairly easy with vision on) And got about a total of 25 kills. |
| #12 [SM]Strega~F[96485] |
| proxy2.senet.com.au |
Ummm....
Strega |
| #13 Aiurs~Pride[96490] |
| HSE-London-ppp195818.sympatico.ca |
I liked your writing style a lot although a few more pics and a bit more attitude woulda been nice.
Peace out |
| #14 )(V)(aster[96500] |
| spider-wa052.proxy.aol.com |
"Well, that’s ummm fabulous." HaHaHa i loved it... Unique layout, Pretty funny..., Be a little bit more clear next time because i got lost a couple times and couldnt figure out what was going on until i reached a minimap pic, And correct your writing next time too (Wraths = Wraiths)...
GJ 7.5
--Litz |
| #15 Suicidal Insanity/Person X[96512] |
| pD950C291.dip.t-dialin.net |
| just a quic comment... the colors don't show up to well, blue on black etc, maybe try some other codes such as #dd2222 or #22dd22 |
| #16 Khas[96520] |
| ool-18ba98a3.dyn.optonline.net |
| Colors were fine. |
| #17 Suicidal Insanity/Person X[96522] |
| pD950C2D4.dip.t-dialin.net |
| i cant read the blue on black :( |
| #18 Khas[96532] |
| ool-18ba98a3.dyn.optonline.net |
| get glasses then. |
| #19 Khas[96533] |
| ool-18ba98a3.dyn.optonline.net |
| Who gave him a seven?? People complain that there's no originality in BRs these days, I think I even remember Drefsab suggesting that to me a long time ago. If this BR wasn't totally original, then I'm a 70 pound llama falling off a cliff. |
| #20 PsychoChimpy[96534] |
| spider-tf032.proxy.aol.com |
I have a couple things.
1) Can Zerglings and Hydralisks even talk?
2) U used the phrase "So what did you do during all this" WAY too many times
3) A couple more pics would have been nice
But all in all a pretty good BR
Chimpy of Ape Ocalypse
Skydiving- Good to the last drop |
| #21 Khas[96535] |
| ool-18ba98a3.dyn.optonline.net |
1) Who really cares? I mean, do Hydralisks and Zerglings really exist??
everything else is right on, though. |
| #22 ThieverIV[96542] |
| spider-te084.proxy.aol.com |
| This was a good report. Only thing that would've helped would be a couple more pictures just to put the things that people were talking about in context, but not too many or it would interrupt the flow of the report. Other than that good job. |
| #23 Something Is Wrong[96546] |
| cr862712-a.ym1.on.wave.home.com |
something is wrong with battlereports.com, the page is all screwed, I saw it with 3 br s so far.
Anyways, great "br" but I think there were to many "What did you do during all this?" |
| #24 skimoose[96573] |
| hoproxy.proxy.lucent.com |
| One thing about this game that was omitted was the fact that at one point, Ling-erie had 20,000 minerals.....and he was the first to lose. ~STIM~007 destroyed all his tech, and he had nothing to make. Then Ling-erie took his bank account and used it to kill halby...but even with allied vision on, halby still lived on! |
| #25 halby[96574] |
| ss02.ny.us.ibm.com |
And at the end, drintr mislead me into believing the last of his troops were attacking, when really he'd left a bunch of m&m back where i couldn't see them... So I barely survived the last chunk o' terran, with 3 goons left. I jumped out of my chair and danced around a bit, when a spluttering of marine-headed, no-necked walking piles of dissapointment walked onto the screen and proceded to finish me off :(
poo poo and MORE poo! |
| #26 M2g2F8[96582] |
| tcache-to01.proxy.aol.com |
Not a bad report. =] Good style.
-m2 |
| #27 ::Maleficia::[96663] |
| spider-mtc-ti064.proxy.aol.com |
I'm sittin here eating a pop sicle and all of the sudden i see this report. I start to read and then remembe about me popsicle! Soon my entire keyboard was malfunctionizing(its my new word).
Thx for nothing.
If i was rating this i woul gie it a 1 just cuz o that.
muahahahahaahahaha
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| #28 Ling-erie[96673] |
| igw-se.astra.com |
very creative, but i found it almost impossible to read and thus gave up. A fresh approach, but so hard to keep up with.
It was a funny game, i'm suprised t was reported, i made over 500 units that game and got owned by wraiths =[
Still, gj reporting it but try to make it a little more readable, ie, if u're gonna use all coloured text, then use a lighter blue/red/whatever so it's easier to read against the black background (use pink not red, use sky blue not dark blue, use pale yellows and so on).
I'd've stayed and fought on if i knew it was being reported on.
hf |
| #29 TerrenMahem[97095] |
| 1Cust248.tnt32.dfw9.da.uu.net |
"Fabulos" report!
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