| #1 ~STIM~007[96677] |
| 1Cust244.tnt1.bend.or.da.uu.net |
My HTML has inproved don't you think?
Thanks to Psyonic_Reaver for a little help this time. |
| #2 ~STIM~007[96678] |
| 1Cust244.tnt1.bend.or.da.uu.net |
Oh ya "Part 1" is going to be posted in a day or two.
Its done. But i need to do HTML for it. Doh
And the prolog just took me 5 hours! |
| #3 LockEmDown[96679] |
| ool-182d8521.dyn.optonline.net |
| 1st non-author...yey |
| #4 Khas[96680] |
| ool-18ba98a3.dyn.optonline.net |
| Drefsab is gonna have your ass on a platter for posting this. |
#5  [96682] |
| cb790950-b.elmhst1.il.home.com |
Good job spelling "prolog"
2
Dref |
| #6 ~STIM~007[96684] |
| 1Cust244.tnt1.bend.or.da.uu.net |
I said WAIT until I've posted the other 3 stories before you rate it plz.
Plus why u so mean? Cause I'm not a Gamma Ray Burst? |
| #7 Psyonic_Reaver[96685] |
| 1Cust244.tnt1.bend.or.da.uu.net |
"as we all know reavers are very effeicient"
-ronin~
=^)
Yay!! |
| #8 CKane[96686] |
| c209662-a.haywd2.sfba.home.com |
| Um, what gave you the idea that people would want to read this? |
| #9 Khas[96688] |
| ool-18ba98a3.dyn.optonline.net |
um retard, nobody wants to see a fanfic that has absolutely no plot and is just a setup to the next one. If you are gonna have those out in a few days, RELEASE THIS AS PART OF THEM.
go away, nobody likes fanfics anyway. |
| #10 )(V)(aster[96750] |
| spider-wb021.proxy.aol.com |
Prolog - Prologue...
Inproved - Improved...
If your gonna post this shit at least spell it right... |
| #11 Ling-erie[96755] |
| igw-se.astra.com |
what the hell?
Part 1 has a lot of explaining to do! |
| #12 the()vermind[96760] |
| AC8458E9.ipt.aol.com |
| the last time a manual was released, it was on red alert 2, and it wasn't rated. This community hates fan fics, so don't be troubled by the horrible ratings you will recieve if you publish these fan fics. |
| #13 all your base are belong to us[96773] |
| cf2.utc.com |
| oh am i funny |
| #14 strizz182[96774] |
| cr321359-d.etob1.on.wave.home.com |
um.........
I agree with ling.....confusing fanfic < fanfic but.......?
okay nevermind....
BADKITTY sux hardcore =] |
| #15 Nafarias[96776] |
| 170.89.37.77 |
| I'm a writer 007, and frankly this is NOT a prologue. This looks more like you cut and pasted stuff from the Tribes2 manual. When you write a story about a pre-established universe you DON'T have to include a glossary of every term in your prolog. Just write the story and explain any unfamiliar terms to your audience as they come up. Next time ditch this kind of data and just get into the story. |
| #16 Scarab[96786] |
| tcache-wo01.proxy.aol.com |
what the hell is this garbage?
yea, im referring to the report, as well as the reporter |
| #17 tercal[96788] |
| sdn-ar-002njnewaP324.dialsprint.net |
no. no no no no no no no. stupid. if part 1 isnt the best piece of writing i have ever seen in my life, this will have been worthless. i look forward to not reading it.
All insulting the point of this post aside, you should seriously have made the "prolog" part of the first part. And it doesnt really seem to be a prolgue at all, more of just a weapons directory. I dont really see how this could help much with the story. I dont hate fanfics as much as some other people, but think about what you are doing before you post something like this. It is only going to make your story seem worse. Good luck with the fanfic though....try to make it better than this. |
| #18 corbalt[96799] |
| alb-66-66-199-178.nycap.rr.com |
holy fuck roflmao
try skimming this report, and then thinking about the bitchy posts this guy made in the forum. if you factor in the hilariously blatant spelling errors, youve got quite a funny situation on your hands!
imagine actually spending time writing this garbage, hahahahaha. |
| #19 ~STIM~007[96842] |
| 1Cust173.tnt1.bend.or.da.uu.net |
*Sigh* dont you guys even read??? I SAID IT WAS TO HELP PEOPLE WHO DON"T KNOW ABOUT TRIBES TO HELP THEM UNDERSTAND WHAT I'M GOING TO BE WRITING ABOUT!!!!!!
I'm not gonna write it now too many people hate me already. |
| #20 CKane[96843] |
| c209662-a.haywd2.sfba.home.com |
At least one person here doesn't read, stim. :(
when's the last time you read the "dramatis personae" of a novel? this is ten times longer and many times stupider. at least include it as part of an actual report :o |
| #21 Soy~b0mB[97912] |
| c1457880-a.sttln1.wa.home.com |
Hey! Don't be so mean to him!
Heh. I crack myself up. |
| #22 NotDefault[98668] |
| h24-76-172-42.vs.shawcable.net |
ROFL
That is probably one of the funniest things I have seen lately. And no, I did not read the whole thing :). A short introduction explaining why this is nothing but a long and boring cut&paste from a manual, and then the long and boring cut&paste from the manual.
Funny.
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