| #1 Phukin Retard[97464] |
| AKCF2.xtra.co.nz |
ok this ones better, it has paragraphs so it won't hurt yer eyes (soz bout the last one forgot about those BR tags)
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| #2 Ling-erie[97467] |
| igw-se.astra.com |
That was a funny read, although i'm suprised you care about your record enough to shout "ally me" or whatever.
Alright game, nice writing style, thanks |
| #3 Phukin Retard[97470] |
| AKCF2.xtra.co.nz |
| i dont care that much about it, just that i always ally ppl i beat and so do lots of others (probably why i have such a crap record) |
| #4 Ling-erie[97473] |
| igw-se.astra.com |
Yeah, i always ally ppl i beat in pubbies if it was a good game. Recs mean nothing to me =/
Anyway, try not to name your report in such a way that people will look at it and think "I really don't wnt to read that". Once people know your name then they'll read you report if you title it "get lost freaks!!!" cos they know that they like your stlye or whatever, but for your first few, try to make the title more appealing to the potential reader.
that's all. |
| #5 LockEmDown[97475] |
| ool-182d8521.dyn.optonline.net |
| That was pretty damn funny. Lack of pictures actually made it better. Somehow I think having pictures would have ruined it, but that's just me... =) |
| #6 Eradicate~Me[97489] |
| pa-millscreek2a-240.buf.adelphia.net |
| rofl |
#7  [97490] |
| barry-asy-76.rutgers.edu |
hi fukn retart
i like youre report expect for some errrors |
| #8 Drintr[97491] |
| user198.pop2.cwia.com |
Good report, easy to follow and interesting to read as well. The only problems were that you had a few spelling errors and grammar errors located in various places of your report. Anyway, I'd give this a 5-6 -- the report was good, but I'm not sure if it was "gold" quality. You should definitely consider writing more reports.
Peace and Love,
Drintr |
| #9 Psyonic_Reaver[97493] |
| 1Cust180.tnt1.bend.or.da.uu.net |
| Ya pretty good for a 1st(?) battlereport. Your probably get a higher rating then I did. 6 sounds about right. What I saw when reading your report is that some of your paragraphs werent long enough or too long. And in some places the words didnt flow right. And the report seem alittle one-sided. Lots of spelling errors too, so dont forget to use spellcheck next time! But pretty good, Keep it up. |
| #10 [1]=)[97494] |
| mur-fw.cvgs.net |
| :D |
| #11 Syndrome_Zed[97499] |
| P124-Dell.Stanford.EDU |
LOL - sounds like a pretty f'ed up game :). Everyone else pretty much said about the report what I would have too - not bad, but not great.
One question - why didn't you expand into Yellow's old base for the extra gas? It might have turned the game around for you when orange attacked.
And don't forget, it *was* a ffa after all - just because orange took advantage of blue's intelligence (as in military, not in actual smarts since that was clearly lacking), it doesn't make him gay. No reason he should wait for you to finish blue before he attacks you, after all.
On the other hand, I also ally with everyone nowadays. My record has no bearing on my quality of life :). |
| #12 Falcon[97500] |
| ilm25-36-082.ec.rr.com |
| pretty damn good, IMHO. |
| #13 PoLTerGeiST_001[97501] |
| h24-79-190-212.lm.shawcable.net |
| I never see 7vs1 comps anymore...anyway, about the game. It was pretty good although you had 10k in the bank-that you coulda used for other stuff...such as alot of static defense. |
| #14 Phukin Retard[97502] |
| AKCF2.xtra.co.nz |
wow thanks everyone, not one flame yet. I realise that from the game it might look like orange was doing something anyone in a ffa might do, but i guess you had to hear what was being said to get the full picture (i wish they added text to these replays)
and towards the end i was getting hugely bored anyway, i just wanted to get rid of blue and leave, not have an attrition war with a bunkered in terran. |
| #15 skimoose[97535] |
| hoproxy.proxy.lucent.com |
Was I the only person that notcied:
a) This was a report about a FFA on bloodbath with obvious newbies.
b) The reporter dissed people the whole game and LOST.
c) Too many spelling and grammar errors for a flow to be established.
Other than that, I did have a solid laugh for 3 seconds. GJ, my day at work was not so bad. A better game, some pics of what ppl are saying, and a spellchecker are my suggestions for next time. |
| #16 PhukinRetard[97538] |
| AKCF2.xtra.co.nz |
wow, did u learn that from the title?
in case u didn't notce, i wasn't trying to win. anyway, the person who wins ffa games EVERY time is the guy who sits back and masses his army while the rest go at it. i prefer to score winning ffa games on points, not who turtles in their base then finishes their weakened opponent.
i just re-read it, and dear god there are some horrible spelling mistakes in it. Net time i will check it properly, not the half-ass job i did this time.
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#17  [97553] |
| papaya.fgm.com |
It is kind of half-assed, but there were some redeeming amusing points.
5ish.
Cheers. |
| #18 slappyputty[97591] |
| vt-lakechamplain2b-145.bur.adelphia.net |
Not a bad report on the whole, but I did have some issues.
1: using the word gay is gay
2. Spelling, and punctuation for sentances.
actually, thats pretty much it. I personally belong to the school of people who think that pictures are better, but you definately did ok without them. Over all, I think this report diserves a 5 or a 6. |
| #19 BADKITTY![97601] |
| ss09.ny.us.ibm.com |
I loved it, especially the attitude... Fuck everyone. Its ppl like you what give me a happy smiley day... Appreciate the 15 minutes spent putting a smile on my face, good job.
KIT-KAT SAY "KHAS=SATAN" |
| #20 BOBBY357[97653] |
| spider-mtc-tb051.proxy.aol.com |
| hehe that was pretty funny. maybe just check your spelling and grammar next time, and add a few pictures, and a report of this quality could get at least a 7. gj. |
| #21 SqueakyMonkey[97655] |
| syr-66-66-32-229.twcny.rr.com |
You're not the same Phucking Retard from a few years ago, are you?
Teehee, reading that aloud really sounds funny. |
| #22 Phukin Retard[97657] |
| AKCF2.xtra.co.nz |
| no sorry, this is a nick ive used ever since i first got my wee 28k modem back in the old days of doom, just a massive concidence i guess. |
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