| #1 Drintr[97666] |
| MAX04-1-13.icgla.cwia.com |
| Enjoy!! |
| #2 Bullis[97667] |
| d3o70.telia.com |
| cool writing =) |
| #3 Phukin Retard[97669] |
| AKCF2.xtra.co.nz |
haha
this was cool good work Drintr
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| #4 willwinforfood[97671] |
| ool-18b81465.dyn.optonline.net |
hmm. that was pretty cool. at some points i think you lost the whole this is a letter thing and went into a normal battle reporting mode. i dont blame you though cause it must of been hard doing it in this format.
oh yeah, i was hopping the last letter would be like:
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dear mrs. sdfgdlkfg,
[inseret letter about protoss owning and she lost her son. but although he died he was a brave man blah blah.]
sinerely,
ued
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i dunno. imo it would've been cool if toss won. = |
| #5 'Final`Flare'[97672] |
| spider-wc082.proxy.aol.com |
Great report Drintr! I always look for your name now =)
WWFF, Terran won, he can't help it. Not like this was a fanfic, and he could make his own outcome. :)
'Final`Flare' |
| #6 Gyro[97674] |
| 37.indianapolis-03-04rs.in.dial-access.att.net |
| Sweet... excellent writing, cool style, and it would have been cool if Bruno died in the final attack :) |
| #7 willwinforfood[97676] |
| ool-18b81465.dyn.optonline.net |
| i know terran won, but if he reported a game where toss won and used the same format, thats all. i am finding it hard to report decent games these days though.. |
| #8 Eradicate~Me[97679] |
| pa-millscreek2a-240.buf.adelphia.net |
| interesting |
| #9 ~STIM~007[97680] |
| 1Cust219.tnt1.bend.or.da.uu.net |
I agree with wwff. i kept thinking at the end he would die and the letter thingy. but i guess not. :p
On the other hand, good stuff. |
| #10 Spuzz[97681] |
| di210.opencominc.com |
Heh, this was pretty cool. You had some nice screen shots and the narrative was neat :)
I hope to see more of Bruno, the mamma's boy!
Spuzz |
| #11 iggy[97682] |
| adsl-64-167-12-52.dsl.lsan03.pacbell.net |
| too short |
| #12 iggy[97688] |
| AC89D937.ipt.aol.com |
| IM GAY |
#13  [97689] |
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| High score for originality. Not so great score for the rest =] |
#14  [97701] |
| papaya.fgm.com |
Very original; It kept my interest all the way to the end.
Cheers. |
| #15 CoolGuy[97703] |
| 209.29.120.145 |
| How do you get a gold report when the score is 7 - 7!?!?!?!?!?Otherwise I really enjoyed this |
| #16 willwinforfood[97706] |
| ool-18b81465.dyn.optonline.net |
| 7+ is gold.. |
| #17 |nt|~Squad[97709] |
| h000094c7d4a8.ne.mediaone.net |
This was a fairly good report. Originality saved your gold though. In some places, the html was screwed up (around the pictures). And I found it hard to find some of the sentences, or the beginning of them anyway. Maybe it's just my computer, but did any1 else think that it was a little screwed up? Even though the writing was good.
Squad
PS
KILL THE UMPIRE!
(didn't think that was coming, did you? My little quote from now on) |
| #18 'Final`Flare'[97710] |
| PPPa46-ResaleMuskegon2-5R7023.dialinx.net |
I appear to banned on my other computer...
This was the last thing I replied to =(
Mark, what's wrong?
T.T |
| #19 Wr@th[97713] |
| HSE-Montreal-ppp104796.sympatico.ca |
| Bruno seemed to come from the intergalactic texas =/ |
| #20 'Final`Flare'[97715] |
| PPPa38-ResaleMuskegon1-3R7403.dialinx.net |
Admins, I posted on the forum.
Please delete comment #19 and this one (#21)... |
| #21 someone[97717] |
| sc-66-27-186-137.socal.rr.com |
how do you pronouce or name?
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| #22 Drintr[97720] |
| MAX04-3-188.icgla.cwia.com |
Hehe, this is not the first time somebody has asked me that question. Pronounce my name as if there were an "e" between the "r" and the "t". Drin-ter. Hope that helps!
Peace and Love,
Drintr |
| #23 BADKITTY![97724] |
| vt-lakechamplain2b-145.bur.adelphia.net |
| This, and the last report, are not in origional styles, they are both styles that I, and millions of other people, used in high school... Not pissing on Drintr, just the ppl who thought it was origional. |
| #24 [97730] |
| ip158.herndon38.va.pub-ip.psi.net |
| First time I read a report like this = original. |
| #25 StoneColdNewbie[97739] |
| AC99F4CA.ipt.aol.com |
| #24 = Owned. |
| #26 SarcasticSage[97743] |
| 207.157.58.64 |
*agrees with wwff #5, and #25-26 :D*
-SS |
| #27 MasterRace[97750] |
| 1Cust53.tnt1.reno.nv.da.uu.net |
| The game wasn't the greatest but it was still very interesting, nice writing style, and there were very few errors. |
| #28 BADKITTY![97764] |
| vt-lakechamplain2b-145.bur.adelphia.net |
| "My name is spot. See me run, Run spot Run." <-an origional battlereport style |
| #29 Dampiere[97768] |
| ares.uwimona.edu.jm |
Nice flavour dude, when is Bruno's mama gonna hear from him again? nice style, good work!
later
May the terrans prosper
Dampiere |
| #30 [97770] |
| papaya.fgm.com |
#29:
"spot" should be capitalized.
"See me run," should end with a period; you've created a run-on sentence.
"Run spot Run" should only have the first run capitalized, and the name, Spot, should be separated with commas.
You switched from first-person to third person perspective. Pick one and stay with it.
Plus, the game is pretty one-sided. All Spot did was run? Why didn't he counter??
Cheers. |
| #31 GoZuLu[97777] |
| 195.249.56.3 |
Lol @ CB.
You have too much spare time ...
GoZuLu
PS: the caps inside my gosu name is not an error ... |
| #32 willwinforfood[97779] |
| ool-18b81465.dyn.optonline.net |
| w00t. people agree with me! =o |
| #33 'Final`Flare'[97808] |
| spider-mtc-tb011.proxy.aol.com |
w00t! People ignore me!
^^
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| #34 willwinforfood[97821] |
| 206.187.219.69 |
| haha. ^^; |
#35  [97850] |
| on-tor-blr-a58-01-275.look.ca |
pretty good text, and [cee]storm (the infamous C_Time) was in it, so thats +1
8! |
| #36 Agent_of_Sol[97905] |
| nav-34d.dsl.navpoint.com |
I really like this format!
Nice report! |
| #37 C_Time[97969] |
| proxy2.mtmc1.on.home.com |
wow, you didnt make me look bad Drintr
nice br~
cheers! err, yah .. |
| #38 Reddemer04[98005] |
| spider-wi054.proxy.aol.com |
| Kinda funny how he ended letters without love, i think CattleBruiser #31 must be a Literature teacher |
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