| #1 luae42[97718] |
| 64-60-21-42-cust.telepacific.net |
| Second! |
| #2 luae42[97719] |
| 64-60-21-42-cust.telepacific.net |
| asdf |
| #3 Psyonic_Reaver[97721] |
| 1Cust32.tnt1.bend.or.da.uu.net |
| well pretty good for a return to B.Net after such a long time. A good BR but still, pictures, pictures, pictures. They help mold your story and to show the highlights of your story. Your sentences flowed smoothly but you had some spelling errors. 6-7. Keep it up! |
| #4 Drintr[97722] |
| MAX04-3-188.icgla.cwia.com |
Neat battle report. There were a few minor problems such as spelling, grammar, ect., but not anything major. I'd say this battlereport is deserving of a 5. What you had was good, but it was nothing spectacular. You should right more battle reports, with some extra time and thought you can probably produce some excellent golds.
Peace and Love,
Drintr |
| #5 Drintr[97723] |
| MAX04-3-188.icgla.cwia.com |
Doh, right=write in post above. "Drintr wacks himself on the head"
Peace and Love,
Drintr |
| #6 razim|scp[97725] |
| burlingcache.lisco.net |
For not writing any reports in a long time, it's not too shabby. The game was extremely one sided, though, as shown by your comment that your strategies were reverse of what they normally are. There was enough there to keep me reading, but I could see the end coming a mile away. Next time, get a better game to report, add a little flair, and it'll be a solid gold.
As it is, 6. |
| #7 Drache[97727] |
| 169.st-louis-115-120rs.mo.dial-access.att.net |
| Sup razim. Nice report for coming back, hope you write more and fix the grammar mistakes :) |
| #8 Syndrome_Zed[97728] |
| P124-Dell.Stanford.EDU |
Thanks for the comments. I'm trying to refine my writing skills, and have never used pics in the past, so for now they'll be text-only. I write while I'm between experiments at work, too, so I usually don't have access to my graphics programs for these.
Yeah, the game turned out more one-sided than I expected, but since it really hinged on one important point - his lack of recon - it was the best one of the few I played that night. And if he'd kept his mutas or made more devos it could have been much closer.
But what spelling errors? Other than Skool, which was deliberate, of course. I did try to write it in "speaking" style, so yeah, the grammar has a few "licenses" taken :). |
| #9 Khas[97729] |
| ool-18ba98a3.dyn.optonline.net |
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YOU DONT FUCKING NEED PICTURES TO MAKE IT AN ENJOYABLE REPORT.
everyone must die.
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| #10 Syndrome_Zed[97731] |
| P124-Dell.Stanford.EDU |
| Heh. If you want to see some of my old stuff it's still here - I just didn't use the underscore before - search for Zed and there's a few all-text jobbies there - several golds, a couple of which have some really ugly colors in them :). Ah well, it was a while ago after all...... |
| #11 ground-LOBP-[97732] |
| syr-24-169-180-86.twcny.rr.com |
| chapstick? |
| #12 Drintr[97733] |
| user135.pop2.cwia.com |
Agreed with Khas. You have some nice writing skills and you could definitely get gold if you were to do a nice text-only br. Good Luck!
Peace and Love,
Drintr |
| #13 Syndrome_Zed[97734] |
| P124-Dell.Stanford.EDU |
Thanks :)
Oh, ground - the Chapstick's for the ass-kissing ;) |
| #14 Spuzz[97735] |
| 63.175.166.54 |
Hah, good read. It kept my interest even though it wasn't hard to guess the outcome :)
Nice map, too--one of my favorites.
Keep it up!
Spuzz |
| #15 ~STIM~007[97736] |
| 1Cust226.tnt1.bend.or.da.uu.net |
| Nice. 5-6 |
| #16 skimoose[97754] |
| hoproxy.proxy.lucent.com |
| Gj dude, the chapstick joke cracked me up. |
| #17 [SM]Strega~F[97766] |
| proxy7.senet.com.au |
First-person BRs rock!
8
Strega |
#18  [97772] |
| papaya.fgm.com |
No pics necessary.
It's a good "welcome-back" report... keep up the effort and get yourself a closer game, and you'll be all set.
Cheers. |
| #19 GoZuLu[97775] |
| 195.249.56.3 |
Nice report. It is nice to see other oldtimers (30+) attending this site. It is not always, that I finish text-only reports, but your writing style kept me hanging.
5-6 is too low. 7 I think. Keep up the work (and include pics :).
GoZuLu - TheOldDane |
| #20 Syndrome_Zed[97806] |
| P124-Dell.Stanford.EDU |
Thanks for all the comments, and the rating CB. I wish I could get a better game, but so far I've played 4 and either I get spanked or do the spanking ;). No good close ones yet, but you'll all know when I do get a good one.
BTW, I still don't see any spelling errors. I think you guys just said that automatically now ;). |
| #21 BADKITTY![97826] |
| ss04.ny.us.ibm.com |
| Told ya khas=satan. |
| #22 Syndrome_Zed[97847] |
| P124-Dell.Stanford.EDU |
| He did seem to be speaking in tongues up there, didn't he? |
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