| #1 I)ark[97737] |
| sc-66-27-186-137.socal.rr.com |
| FIRST WOOOOOoooooooooo |
| #2 Mistears[97738] |
| sc-66-27-186-128.socal.rr.com |
| Oh man..wrong one got uploaded.. |
| #3 Ichiro[97740] |
| spider-wb012.proxy.aol.com |
| Nice report. I like your font, whats it call |
| #4 someone[97742] |
| sc-66-27-186-137.socal.rr.com |
the br was still good. does it matter if it's wrong or not? i still think you'll get at least a 6 on this, mostly like a 7. =P.
btw, gw nice game, and the balls to report a game which you lost. o wait that's why you said it was the wrong one... |
| #5 Drintr[97744] |
| user135.pop2.cwia.com |
Nice battlereport, an enjoyable read. Towards the end you had quite a few minor spelling/grammar mistakes though. Other than that I enjoyed the battle report and am anxious to see more of them. As for the rating for this battle report... really close to getting a 7, but I'd have to say a 6.
Peace and Love,
Drintr |
| #6 Tempest[97745] |
| spider-ntc-tc044.proxy.aol.com |
| amazing how that 2v2 BGH game was somehow played on Lost Temple. |
| #7 razim|scp[97746] |
| burlingcache.lisco.net |
| Do you have a proofreader? There were a lot of grammar mistakes that really detracted from the flow. Pics were nice. I'd say 6.5 or so. |
| #8 Gyro[97747] |
| 63.indianapolis-01-02rs.in.dial-access.att.net |
| BGTemp :P |
| #9 Mistears[97748] |
| sc-66-27-186-128.socal.rr.com |
| lol. like i said dis is da wrong one if i can repost dat would be cool. i had two saved versions one dat went through microsoft word and one dat didnt and dey got switched so dis is da one dat didnt =( |
| #10 mistears[97749] |
| sc-66-27-186-128.socal.rr.com |
| nm i wont repost |
| #11 11th[97751] |
| sc-66-27-186-137.socal.rr.com |
wtf a 20kill archon?
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| #12 ScoutingDrone[97752] |
| 208-190-236-71.dialup.cyberback.com |
| Yeah, Looks like your 2v2 bgh is more like a 2v1 comp on temple. |
| #13 mistears[97755] |
| sc-66-27-186-128.socal.rr.com |
| ur rite it was lost temple the mass units just threw me off there =/. but it wasnt against comps heh i hab screenshots of us laughin at dem and dem calling us hackers and stuff. |
| #14 skimoose[97756] |
| hoproxy.proxy.lucent.com |
| Reporting a game in which you lost is cool. I actually thought you were winning the whole game.....it seemed like you killed all his probes like 34341341 times, and he didnt even attack you at all while this was going on. Did I miss the part about his expansions or something? Oh well nice report. |
| #15 M.D.S.-03[97758] |
| h24-71-229-243.fm.shawcable.net |
Nice report. I really enjoyed it, not everyone would report on a game they lost tho.......
keep up da good work
=o)
br= 7 |
| #16 BADKITTY![97760] |
| vt-lakechamplain2b-145.bur.adelphia.net |
Khas = satan.
Great report, I thuroughly (?) enjoyed it... which is to say, I enjoyed it, wrung it out, enjoyed it again, then put it in the dryer, enjoyed it through the little window on the dryer, then took it out and enjoyed it while it was hot and fuzzy... After which I tended to enjoy it every 3 or 4 hours for the next month.... Now that it's thuroughly enjoyed, I'll say some stuff that coulda not-so-sucked-so-as-so-much... but remember, overall it was THUROUGHLY enjoyed (twice to 24 times... 4 more on tuesdays) by me.
Khas = satan
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| #17 BADKITTY![97761] |
| vt-lakechamplain2b-145.bur.adelphia.net |
khas = satan
k, what sucked:
"But because it doesn't, so a goon was made and the ovie was dead. " -- what?
"But because it doesn't, so a goon was made and the ovie was dead. But because I had warning of what was to be, I had started 2 overlords beforehand." --As if starting one sentance with "but because" wasn't bad enough... 2 in a row man!
"But instead of waiting I knew he hardly any detection, an observer at best, so I countered with one lurker to test the waters. " -- I'm sure you can pick what's wrong with this sentance out of a hat. (or your brain)
"Dumb, ass. " -- Dumb ass... not Dumb, ass...
"mutes" -- Mutas is the same number of characters, so DONT FUCK AROUND.
Seconds later, the probes were gone, the nexus was gone, all, gone. -- This was acceptable, but the millions of other sentance fragments that it represents really irked me.
khas = satan |
| #18 BADKITTY![97762] |
| vt-lakechamplain2b-145.bur.adelphia.net |
khas=satan
What ruled about this:
"force was strong, and it was good." -- This was most definately the least sucky thing i've ever read, It was so not sucky that it owned me and my whole family. (biblical)
"..., I had secretly loaded the 10 lurkers into 5 overlords back at my main..." --- (shhhhh)
And the whole style of it, as well as the format, was very pleasing, I loved it, 8
khas = satan |
| #19 BADKITTY![97763] |
| vt-lakechamplain2b-145.bur.adelphia.net |
| Khas = satan. |
| #20 Mistears[97765] |
| sc-66-27-186-128.socal.rr.com |
| font is ms sans serif. thanx for pointing out the probs. |
| #21 Tets_Trials[97769] |
| krone.cc.strath.ac.uk |
| "i dropped the bastards in the probe line." -- Ohhhhhhhh yeah. I liked that carefree 'get-that-fecking-job-done' line you used when toss were starting to get on your tits(nerves). Thats the type of style i need to see. Definetely a 8.567890 |
| #22 Test_Trials[97771] |
| krone.cc.strath.ac.uk |
| And just to correct:- My name is T-E-S-T Trials not tets which in the dirty mind of such as myself would seem like tits WHICH I DO NOT HAVE CUZ I AM MALE. |
#23  [97773] |
| papaya.fgm.com |
Nice work.
Cheers. |
| #24 GoZuLu[97776] |
| 195.249.56.3 |
Well done report, that deserves more than 7 ...
I don't mind grammer, grammar, gremmer ....
... spelling errors, and I don't understand the major focus, that some people are putting to it.
GoZuLu - TheOldDane
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| #25 |nt|~Squad[97780] |
| h000094c7d4a8.ne.mediaone.net |
Let me guess, you r a new yorker? keke. sounds like u are. gw.
KILL THE UMPIRE!,
squad |
| #26 Ling-erie[97781] |
| igw-se.astra.com |
| Great report, an enjoyable read, but that pic at the end was NOT BGH, it was temple...... |
| #27 'Final`Flare'[97783] |
| PPPa42-ResaleMuskegon1-3R7403.dialinx.net |
Great report!!! Very enjoyable read, and nice pictures.
Does Paint Shop Pro have any way to blurr the edges like that?
Anyway, minor errors didn't hurt it too much, but it would have been more convenient.
The thing that caught my eye so often was your excessive use of commas. You'd do something like this:
"I, went to his base, and killed stuff."
That should be writted:
"I went to his base and killed stuff."
Anyway, I'm too tired too find an actual sentence from your report. |
| #28 'Final`Flare'[97784] |
| PPPa42-ResaleMuskegon1-3R7403.dialinx.net |
ASDF
writted = written
T.T
/me slaps himself |
| #29 Somebody...[97785] |
| cc37120-a.ewndsr1.nj.home.com |
how come ur bgh game was on temple =P
sby... |
| #30 Patton1944[97790] |
| spider-ntc-td061.proxy.aol.com |
...A 7? I don't know about that. Lots of spelling errors, gramatical mistakes, excessive commas,etc.
The game itself could have had more detail, but you seem to hurry through it(i.e I drop, stuff dies, then he kills me).
And I'm giggling like a school girl now that CB is back, but "Cheers" is Dref's =/
In conclusion, I enjoy marmalade. 5. |
| #31 noasis[97791] |
| ppp-03-1-11.dialip.rit.edu |
| hahahah, serves you right you stupid zerg user. ZERG IS THE RACE OF THE LAMER. IF YOU GET ZERG AS RANDOM YOU SHOULD QUIT B/C ZERG ARE SO STUPID. |
| #32 Polock[97792] |
| cdm-66-50-205-lufk.cox-internet.com |
| OMG, read what bad kitty wrote about 2,000,000 times and then decide that you are a dumb ass and posses little more than a third grade education. Really man, h00k3d 0n ph0n1c2 wuk3d 4 mi! Proof read your reports and then laugh at your horrible mistakes instead of letting me roll on the floor instead. |
| #33 Syndrome_Zed[97807] |
| P124-Dell.Stanford.EDU |
Nice report. I'd say more but the grammar issues and stuff have already been said.
A couple good pics too! Aren't replays a wonderful new toy? |
| #34 OnSlaughT[97809] |
| proxy1-external.pr1.on.home.com |
Because you post on BR.com, I assume you are not black (not racist, just a fact) and therefore I doubt you say "dat" and "dose" in real life. Please avoid using "gansta talk" in BReports, it really does make them quite stupid IMO. It's not hard to replace a "d" with a "th", and it makes the Gay Factor go down a hell of a lot quicker.
Also, I find that reading edited reports is a lot better than reading something you can tell a person typed without even using a spell check. This is just IMO, but colloquial language isn't appropriate. |
| #35 [Thunder][97810] |
| 204.29.64.37 |
wow, u are dumb.
"Because you post on BR.com, I assume you are not black (not racist, just a fact)"
yeah, real big fact. love the logic moron. i guess we black people cant post can we? suck dez nuts, biotch |
| #36 klapdout[97811] |
| svcr-247ppp192.epix.net |
nice report
"He asked for re, I said yes, but AGAIN I got Terran. We recreated over and over and every single time I got Terran when randoming. "
choose race??? |
| #37 mistears[97812] |
| sc-66-27-186-128.socal.rr.com |
choose race? not my style =D
actualy i dont want to chose race in ladder cuz it gives away da race so dey can pre-plan |
| #38 Test_Trials[97819] |
| krone.cc.strath.ac.uk |
| WHAT THE FECK DO YOU MEAN --"Because you post on BR.com, I assume you are not black (not racist,just a fact)"! FECK YOU and all your other rascist comments 'Onslaught' cuz that was wat that was. Since when could you tell wat colour a guy was because of 'WAT' or how he typed eh, EH! ANSWER ME you no dick, apple sucking toothless pimp motha FECKER! You speak that shit again and ill make you eat it with pickles and fries! A Warning from the Protoss master of starcraft. |
| #39 Gyro[97820] |
| 135.indianapolis-03-04rs.in.dial-access.att.net |
If you aren't going to choose race, you should play with what ever you get.
I hate the people that can only play one race, yet they random and quit if they don't get that race. *cough* queer *cough*
If you random you should be confident of your skills in all three races... |
| #40 OnSlaughT[97822] |
| proxy1-external.pr1.on.home.com |
It's quite naive to say that I just made a "gay assumption". I'll bet you the ratio of non-black : black people on BR.com is quite high, like 50:1 high. Therefore my comment was based upon a thought, not personal bias.
Secondly, it doesn't even matter what race he is (life, not Starcraft race). My point was that speaking in that kind of "half ebonics" makes his very good report a bit less respectable to read.
Thirdly, to #39, I just have to say LOL. How else can I tell his race, I can't see him can I? I make assumptions by the only information I am given online -- his text. "A warning from the Protoss master of Starcraft." Ok, your skills in Starcraft have nothing to do with your intellect regarding our discussion. Don't try to drag your strong points into non-related subjects; Microsoft tried it, and got sued. It doesn't work in the commercial nor the social world. I also don't appreciate your fruitless threat responding to a comment which is IMO. |
| #41 Dr.SandMan[97823] |
| 204.29.64.37 |
| onslaught is racist. how crude to think that because he posted on br.com he isn't black. and then he says its a fact. wow. be less gay please. |
| #42 LuckyNewbie:P[97825] |
| user-33qtp4h.dialup.mindspring.com |
| But hes right... mistears isn't some badass gangster that goes on starcraft. Dem peplz r fony (im cool now) |
| #43 ground-LOBP-[97834] |
| syr-24-169-180-86.twcny.rr.com |
why exactly did you chronicle your ladder adventures in the first paragraph when they had nothing to do with the br
"But then the archon came. In the end, a 20 hp wielding archon was all that was left."... archons don't have 20 hp
7 |
| #44 OnSlaught[97857] |
| proxy1-external.pr1.on.home.com |
To #42 -- "I assume you are not black".
"assume"...
This means I am making an assumption. Do you understand what that means? It states that I have not been given all the information (A picture of Mistears) in order to form a fact, and therefore have to take an educated guess. And that's what has been done.
"And then he says it's a fact".
?? When did I say that no black people could post on BR.com?
I said it's a fact that a lot of people just like to mistype to be cool. And IMO that weakens a report. Case Closed.
|
| #45 idiot[97867] |
| 204.29.64.37 |
"Because you post on BR.com, I assume you are not black (not racist, just a fact)"
hmmm...seems to me you said it was fact right there. |
| #46 ProtossBoy~[97868] |
| 204.29.64.37 |
| wow, he said cased close so i guess it must be =[ |
| #47 Test_Trials[97870] |
| krone.cc.strath.ac.uk |
| CASE OPENED ASSHOLE! If you claim that 'WAT' you said was an 'assumption' then it means that you dont know, and if you dont know why the feck would we want to hear you take a guess eh? Who fecking cares. Why make excuses when you can just shut the hell up to start with. All this proves, onslaught, is that you are an asswipe that i would be ashamed to wipe my arse with. Now be a good boy (assumption: yeah i know it sucks cuz you could be a girl, a man or a homo space alien from jupiter) and just dont even try to justify yourself by replying. Just FECK OFF! CASE CLOSED! |
| #48 someone[97876] |
| sc-66-27-186-137.socal.rr.com |
| hey onslaught are you on your period or something? |
| #49 Mistears[97893] |
| sc-66-27-186-128.socal.rr.com |
| the title changed..well there were some problems at the report center...uhh yea.. |
| #50 [DFWM][97985] |
| proxy.sjc.netsetter.com |
lolol i just read this =P its all good =D
hahahaha the muta and ultra/ovie pic love that got like 10 ss of that =P |
| #51 OnSlaughT[97987] |
| proxy1-external.pr1.on.home.com |
#49 - Good one. . . .
#48 - You missed the original point of the comment and continue to sit upon something I've explained before, and don't feel like doing so again for the "special learners" out there (ie. you). And if you really didn't care, you wouldn't write anything, and yet I see a combined total of around 500 words of you stumbling over thoughts trying to explain something. Let's just say you didn't come across very understandable to say the least.
In response to the part that made sense, I say this: You are correct in saying I do not know what would make a good report, because my opinion does not affect the raters' opinions; however, I can guess that some of my comments may also be shared by raters. When any non-rater writes a comment down revolving around improvement, they are doing the same thing.
Save yourself the trouble of trying to find the right keys for 1/2 hour and just don't respond -- your points have been made and they are not valid.
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| #52 Test_Trials[97988] |
| krone.cc.strath.ac.uk |
| Onslaught go away and never return. |
| #53 Arthor1[97992] |
| 204.29.64.37 |
| onslaught.....if you say case close them stfu. |
| #54 OnSlaughT[97995] |
| proxy1-external.pr1.on.home.com |
Yes, I believe "them" should stfu also.
Nice typo retard. |
| #55 +[98000] |
| 204.29.64.37 |
| well, in the end, everyone is against onslaught. wonder why he bothers to reply, like he actually cares, eck, they hurt his feelings so he must flame ^o^ |
| #56 |]agomar[98251] |
| Ottawa-ppp3517243.sympatico.ca |
| This title was SO . . . horribly, rmbarassingly . . . L A M E . . . that I didn't even bother to read the br. I'm sorry man . . . maybe the report was great but . . . wow . . . that title . . . nasty. |
| #57 shy.1ove[tEs][138064] |
| cpe-24-31-43-220.socal.rr.com |
| You guys all just got owned by OnSlaughT. His reason and passive argumentation owned all your little "stfu's" "lamer" "feck off (wtf?)" and etc. Don't mess with people like him (or her) because they can tear your irrational little brains apart. Want to try me as well? Brains. |
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