| #1 tercal[99207] |
| sdn-ar-001njnewaP105.dialsprint.net |
| 1st |
| #2 ~)]agomar(~[99213] |
| Ottawa-ppp3517195.sympatico.ca |
| SECOND!!!! |
| #3 badtz maru[99218] |
| barry-asy-6.rutgers.edu |
| another good installment but check your spelling and things next time. " i can do that jim " ? =o i like it plenty |
| #4 LuckyNewbie:P[99222] |
| user-33qtonn.dialup.mindspring.com |
| OMG QUIT POSTING THESE |
| #5 Hype[99229] |
| 203-149-237-24.sol-dial.gci.net |
i never used to read them, but i've read the last 3
i like em enough....
LN can stfu as far as im concerned
Bye |
| #6 [e2]Squad[99242] |
| h000094c7d4a8.ne.mediaone.net |
| Hurry and finish plz. |
| #7 |]agomar[99244] |
| Ottawa-ppp3517238.sympatico.ca |
The titles these things have make them all the more hilarious/pathetic: Bat Out of Hell?
I think bats would get fried in hell. And who cares about a bat anyway? It's the demons you should look out for.
The writing wasnt even that bad . . . . lol comment #6 |
| #8 |]agomar[99245] |
| Ottawa-ppp3517238.sympatico.ca |
| n/m that last compliment, I just read it again. |
| #9 BOBBY357[99249] |
| spider-tk052.proxy.aol.com |
| it was ok, i guess. im not a big fan fic fan (but then again, who is?) but overall, it wasnt bad. |
| #10 Psyonic_Reaver[99255] |
| 1Cust152.tnt1.bend.or.da.uu.net |
| Again...Didnt Monty SAY he was not gonna write any of these anymore? And I'm sure the REAL Monty would check his spelling. |
| #11 Ramogad[99257] |
| Ottawa-ppp3517247.sympatico.ca |
| For some strange reason, I agree with everything Dagomar said. |
| #12 Monty Pylon[99284] |
| 1Cust21.tnt10.norwalk.ct.da.uu.net |
Dag, not your cup of tea? That's cool, but why do you insist on reading them if you don't like them.
Psyonic, if you read the comment section to the farewell fic, I say that there was a chance I would be back. And, my spelling was never that great to begin with. |
| #13 Shadow D'Arc[99289] |
| spider-we074.proxy.aol.com |
Thanks for clearing up on how they survived the nukes. Keep writing. T_Mac is gay. BR.Com is a ritual to me. Sign on, go to BR. Read Monty's Fan-Fic. Talk to people. Read Monty's fan-fic again. Make fun of T_Mac. Report on various games. T_Mac is gay. Play SC for a while. Sleep. Repeat. T_Mac is gay.
Peace,
Shadow D'Arc |
| #14 [c]Napoleic[99301] |
| h24-77-168-9.ok.shawcable.net |
poor T-Mac
when you think gay you think Kids In the Hall.. SNL Fashion boys, Big Gay Al, Dweb and Carriers, but he will always top the list in the minds of br.com goers =[ |
| #15 |]agomar[99321] |
| Ottawa-ppp3517266.sympatico.ca |
Monty Python, sorry if I was being hurtful or anything :(. That was stupid of me. I was merely saying that you should work a little harder on you writing skills. You have good potential, but these could be alot better. If you like, I could send you an e-mail explaining in a more in-depth manner what I mean, and citing examples.
The thing is, only the very best fanfics are worth reading, and, until you write some of those very best fanfics, these aren't really worth reading.
Hope that cleared things up a little,
-Dagomar |
| #16 Monty Pylon[99346] |
| 1Cust215.tnt10.norwalk.ct.da.uu.net |
| Dag, I appreciate your advice and have read your fic posts and I must say it was very good. I lose inspiration quickly and write only when I am inspiried with an idea that I believe will be entertaining. I write in my spare time, and use fan fics for fun. Some people like them and some don't. Perhaps in the future I will write a new fic that is a bit more elegant and longer. But I think I'll finish this series first. |
| #17 |]agomar[99349] |
| StCatherines-ppp109174.sympatico.ca |
Cool Monty, I won't criticize these as harshly =). These aren't half as bad as most people state, and I'm sure they'll get better over time.
Of course, if you DO post something, try and make it as good as possible, so as to make sure people will get as much out of it as they can.
Just my three cents. |
| #18 picky text guy[99361] |
| ACB43EA3.ipt.aol.com |
| can't you make the text like uh, bigger, so it's easier to see? |
| #19 |]agomar[99573] |
| Ottawa-ppp3517267.sympatico.ca |
| By the way, I'd give this a 5. |
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