| #1 john[100885] |
| adsl-63-202-176-161.dsl.snfc21.pacbell.net |
1st
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| #2 Triped[100886] |
| proxy1-gw.gcc.edu |
| 2nd |
#3  [100887] |
| StCatherines-ppp109177.sympatico.ca |
-better grammer
-HTML
-better game
Those are my suggestions. Other then that, good br, hope to see more from you ;). Look at some 9+ battlereports, learn from them, and let this be your first silver. |
| #4 Erduarg[100890] |
| ts1-26.f1131.quebectel.com |
- sorry for the grammar, english is not my first language
- how do I include html ?
- well it was my best game yet, but since my memory of the game wasnt that good i may have missed some point
Thx for the comment, ill take them in note :) |
| #5 KillerBoy[100891] |
| client-151-200-161-80.bellatlantic.net |
1. ok, grammar is understandable
2. include html by writing story in html format
3. play games or watch games with strong players, or just download some really good replays.
also, never start of by saying "Having not saved the replay, there will be no screenshot and i will be forced to use my memmory wich is kind of unreliable." raters usually dont forgive and forget if thats included :(
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| #6 [100892] |
| StCatherines-ppp109234.sympatico.ca |
| CB added that into one of his brs, so I forgave :D. Check out the HTML guide on the site! It's quite good as a start. |
| #7 KillerBoy[100893] |
| client-151-200-161-80.bellatlantic.net |
| wtf? a merciful rater? pashaw |
| #8 Erduarg[100895] |
| ts1-178.f1131.quebectel.com |
| Can you tell me where i can find good game ? or a chanel whit good player hang on ? |
| #9 [SM]Strega~F[100899] |
| proxy8.senet.com.au |
Man, I wish you were a rater when I started out reporting, Dag. I might've gotten a decent score for my first couple of reports. They had MUCH better grammar, and the games were of roughly the same crappiness.
Sigh...
Strega |
| #10 SarcasticSage[100900] |
| 207.157.58.60 |
this is why im waiting for all the older raters to keel over ded, that way when i finaly br the site will be run by like all these new young people who will HAVE to give props to me so my first report no matter how crappy will get straight tens, jes because im an old fart ^_^
Peace out.
-SS |
| #11 funnymarx[100904] |
| 144.92.238.226 |
Cher M. Erduarg,
Un seul suggestion. Ecrivez un BR en francais, et puis, si nous avons les problems de comprehensions, c'est notre problem...
C'est tout...
--funnymarx
"Arretez-vous ou je tir!" |
| #12 Erduarg[100907] |
| ts1-83.f1133.quebectel.com |
Cher M. funnymarx
Merci beaucoup de la suggestion, si je n'ai pas ecrit mon BR en francais c'est que je ne croyais pas que la majoritée des personnes le comprendrais .
Je crois qu'a lavenir je les ecrirai ds les 2 langues epargnant ainsi d probleme de traduction . :P |
| #13 Z-shArP[100969] |
| cr321359-d.etob1.on.wave.home.com |
haha oui le BR en francais, si vous voulez completez ca, c'est tres drole, n'est-ce pas? je suis desole parce-que ma grammaire est horrible, mais francais n'est pas ma lange premiere.
heh. nice try, I think your BR's will deffinately improve. HTML!!
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-sharp |
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