| #1 Monty Pylon[101187] |
| 1Cust220.tnt5.norwalk.ct.da.uu.net |
| One of mark4's lines is from "They Live". guess which one it is. The Ana quotes are his and I bet I will be flamed by him inside of 15 posts. |
| #2 [SM]Strega~F[101188] |
| proxy3.senet.com.au |
I preferred this fanfic to all the others you have been releasing lately. Probably because it involves "real" people. Sure, they might be lying about everything in their description, but they can talk back. It helps with interest levels.
Good job, I thought most of it was funny. Make another of this sort please.
Strega |
| #3 Whoahhj00[101193] |
| pc3.nordreisa.vgs.no |
| ey isn't this a re-release? :P or mebbe a series. Maybe I should READ the thing. |
| #4 Whoahhj00[101194] |
| pc3.nordreisa.vgs.no |
| okay so it isn't a re-release... well 'twas funny :) good writing, though the spelling errors are REALLY annoying from time to time... |
| #5 Mork[101195] |
| 165.234.190.90 |
I wish I had my own Mark4 theme song........ and big shiny words BAW-POW-SMACK and so on...
Batman Forever
Mark4 Ever
tehehe
-One by one the penguins steal my sanity |
| #6 Monty Pylon[101201] |
| 1Cust226.tnt5.norwalk.ct.da.uu.net |
| I re-read it this afternoon and could not believe the spelling mistakes. I must have blew right past them. Oh well, next time I'll post when I'm more cohirent. |
| #7 Dino Din[101204] |
| dynamic-005-039.natpool.uc.edu |
“Dino Din”
“Who the hell is that?”
heh cool I guess. You still need work dude, "dynamic deuce" doesn't make sense. "duo" would of course.
Funny I been here longer than Ana, but he's the old man. I suppose he fits that angry, grumpy, hateful archetype. |
| #8 badtz maru[101205] |
| wc02-hill012-hill.rutgers.edu |
| Holy vacuum! that really sucks. |
| #9 BOBBY357[101208] |
| spider-wo023.proxy.aol.com |
| it was pretty funny, i guess....... |
| #10 Diluvio[101209] |
| client-151-200-161-80.bellatlantic.net |
| ive peed my pants |
#11 [101218] |
| ct91955-a.richmnd1.in.home.com |
I programmed a random number generator that picks a number between 3 and 3.999999 and truncates any decimal points. I vowed to use the results of the output from this program. The result was 3.
Dref |
| #12 CrackHeadJeb[101221] |
| mu-196246.dhcp.missouri.edu |
| rofl Dref ;) |
| #13 LuckyNewbie:P[101228] |
| user-33qtoh6.dialup.mindspring.com |
"nothing has changed, nothing will change"
hehehe
i liked this monty, and no im not kidding. I also liked the other one. A good fanfic? not by praetor or drefsab? |
| #14 Shadow D'Arc[101230] |
| spider-wg053.proxy.aol.com |
Hey, umm, it was nice and all, but, where am I? I'm not that much of a flamer(Except on T_Mac, err... that didn't sound right), and ah screw it. I wouldn't have wanted to be there anyway, even though I'm kinda a member of the community, even though I don't post any BRs. Ah well. T_Mac is gay.
Peace,
Shadow D'Arc |
| #15 Whoahhj00[101237] |
| pc3.nordreisa.vgs.no |
| Dref, far worse reports than this has gotten a four and even a five... I think giving it a three is very cruel of you. :P |
| #16 SarcasticSage[101247] |
| 207.157.58.59 |
Monty, sweetness on the gosu report. I am about to start an all text br, as soon as i find some worthy players :
chillin and reelin
-SS |
| #17 Diluvio[101255] |
| client-151-200-161-80.bellatlantic.net |
"I programmed a random number generator that picks a number between 3 and 3.999999 and truncates any decimal points. I vowed to use the results of the output from this program. The result was 3. "
lol, quote? |
| #18 Eradicate~Me[101260] |
| pa-millscreek2a-123.buf.adelphia.net |
haha nice monty, although the day ana makes me leave this site is the day hell will surley freeze over. gw ;)
"Spaminator 5000" rofl
Erad |
| #19 Ana[101262] |
| phnxdslgw9poolA25.phnx.uswest.net |
| your skill in creating stupid trash is unrivaled. dref was generous to rate it at all, justified only in knowing your life time rating is further decreased to match your true writing "skill level." well done, dref. |
| #20 Mep[101264] |
| user-2inin14.dialup.mindspring.com |
Ana, that almost qualified as a flame.
Losing your touch? |
| #21 Dino Din[101293] |
| dynamic-028-057.natpool.uc.edu |
ok, I've actually had time to read this over, and it really sucks. I mean you've got conversations with 3 speakers and you almost never use "he saids" etc. It's literally impossible to follow jeez.
Secondly, you really need to remove your self from mark4's penis. I mean how much ego boost does he need? It's definetly not helping your ratings. Gad, fucking don't post anymore please. I've tried to give you suggestions, but you DON'T listen. You're not just bad, you're stubborn. You don't give a fuck what others say in spite of the fact that you ask for criticism. You are not funny, especially when you try to draw on what you assume to be popular feelings, i.e. your weak satire during the Anathema conversation, which contributes nothing to the overall lackluster plot.
I mean... do you even try to be good? Or funny? |
| #22 Twip[101299] |
| port-02.gall-ts2.cloh.net |
I'm happy to tell you that the "sense of humor" in this report was only lacking one thing.
Unfortunately, that thing was the "humor" part.
;
Btw is that last giant block of text meant to be the message conveyed by the report, or an attempt at mocking Ana? |
| #23 Patton1944[101304] |
| spider-tq041.proxy.aol.com |
| N00bs with no sense of humor are funneh O.o |
| #24 Twip[101305] |
| port-02.gall-ts2.cloh.net |
lol I forgot all about that backslash cancel-out thingy involved with JavaScript.
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I own so much it hurts.. oww.. |
| #25 Dino Din[101318] |
| dynamic-028-057.natpool.uc.edu |
for nostalgia, do an author search on Monty Pylon.
He gets some golds for about equal quality work, everyone seems to be laughing it up then, but it's just as funny as this shitty piece.
See how rating, or rather overrating does matter? |
| #26 CrackHeadJeb[101391] |
| mu-196246.dhcp.missouri.edu |
I thought that I was reading a decent segment of this fanfic, but it turns out that I was just reading Ana's forum post.
Yeah, this was bad.
-CHJ |
| #27 Tanks-A-Lot[102219] |
| 144.13.6.10 |
Funny until the end
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