| #1 Weirdo_from_space[101921] |
| adsl-63-202-180-37.dsl.snfc21.pacbell.net |
| ack, I'm first |
| #2 Weirdo_from_space[101922] |
| adsl-63-202-180-37.dsl.snfc21.pacbell.net |
| Hmm... well, now I know how hard it is to write up a report using one's imagination. Oh, and that ending is soooo lame... |
| #3 luae42[101923] |
| 64-60-21-42-cust.telepacific.net |
| Ack, I'm third. |
| #4 NotDefault[101924] |
| h24-76-173-79.vs.shawcable.net |
Ack, what's the point?
NotDefault |
| #5 weirdo_from_space[101925] |
| adsl-63-202-180-37.dsl.snfc21.pacbell.net |
| Just like the word...it emphasizes someone's point, yet nebulizes (???) it as well.just ignore my comments posts. |
| #6 weirdo_from_space[101926] |
| adsl-63-202-180-37.dsl.snfc21.pacbell.net |
| I also realize that the final last "this has been a report...."words detract greatly from the overall feel of the report. I humbly apologize....but I still would like some food. |
| #7 Munkii[101927] |
| 210-55-32-43.dialup.xtra.co.nz |
It's origional...
I think you should work on elaborating complex strats in your next one
Keep up the good work
Peace
Munkii
Ps. ack, I'm seventh. |
| #8 RubiksCube[101928] |
| platz08.pags.de |
Ack (new word of the day) 8th.
Write a br of this style about a game that actually happened. I like the writing. With some pictures it would be awesome. So do it do it do it. |
| #9 Dino Din[101929] |
| dynamic-150-142.dorm.natpool.uc.edu |
| stop stealing firsts from your own reports people, that's sad. |
| #10 Dino Din[101930] |
| dynamic-150-142.dorm.natpool.uc.edu |
| stop stealing first comments from your own reports people, that's sad. |
| #11 Gojky[101933] |
| schefflera-79.csee.uq.edu.au |
| Just a comment how is it that he burrowed the zergling with no gas? As you say he finally puts up an extractor. If you make something up at least be consistent. Ack. |
| #12 Flood[GM][101934] |
| client-151-200-161-80.bellatlantic.net |
Not quite a double reply, but close enough.
3 |
| #13 NotDefault[101935] |
| h24-76-173-79.vs.shawcable.net |
Okay, here's a constructive comment.
1. Report a real game. The writing isn't bad, but there's nothing very exciting about a fake game. I believe that a fake game CAN be done well, but only for humor purposes (does anyone else know of any examples?). Also, if you're going to report a fake game, don't say so until the end :).
2. Ditch the inferiority complex. If you're going to present a battlereport, do it without any bias either way. In other words, don't state at the beginning that your battlereport is the best thing since Starcraft, but don't say that it's pathetic and that everybody will hate it.
NotDefault |
| #14 [SM]Strega~F[101938] |
| proxy8.senet.com.au |
That game was lame. If you're going to make stuff up, it shouldn't be some newbie beatdown.
That's about all the time we have right now...
Strega |
| #15 [SM]Strega~F[101939] |
| proxy6.senet.com.au |
P.S.
ACK!
Strega |
| #16 NEW TREND[101941] |
| 202.188.200.227 |
| ack im 16th |
| #17 CaughtNaked[101945] |
| 205-222-90-182.mcps.k12.md.us |
um,
a) dont start off with how much you suck. We will decide that.
b) you suck
c) reports on real games are easier to do
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| #18 CaughtNaked[101946] |
| 205-222-90-182.mcps.k12.md.us |
| and ack! |
| #19 ZerG~LinG[101947] |
| p418-096.ppp.get2net.dk |
pictures plz
real game plz
and a little less of the ACK! |
| #20 ::Geist::[101953] |
| h24-79-190-212.lm.shawcable.net |
| ..and there i was reading something about MANGEBLE when all of a sudden i get error msgs... |
| #21 stonecoldnewbie[101955] |
| 24.245.65.200 |
i wonder who rated with no comment :o
anyway..this was pretty gay. the writing and stuff was ok..and you obviouslly know (some) html..so do a real report...and yes if youre going to make a game up get some good shit in it or something..sheesh.
21. Ack =/ |
| #22 Ana[101956] |
| phnxdslgw9poolD134.phnx.uswest.net |
stupid name, worse text
fucking ban |
| #23 BOBBY357[101960] |
| spider-mtc-ti024.proxy.aol.com |
| lol this sucked. ban. |
| #24 DO A REAL 1[102341] |
| 24.0.88.219 |
| ack im 24th |
| #25 -^Puppy^-[103105] |
| spider-ntc-td063.proxy.aol.com |
ACK ACK ACK ACK ACK ACK ACK ACK ACK ACK-ETY ACK ACK!!
....Someone help me. |