| #1 Eradicate~Me[102596] |
| AC9D6E91.ipt.aol.com |
| 1st gg |
| #2 stonecoldnewbie[102598] |
| nic-245-c65-200.mn.mediaone.net |
| 2nd |
| #3 stonecoldnewbie[102599] |
| nic-245-c65-200.mn.mediaone.net |
ok
bad grammar -1
ok games i guess +1
ok writing +1
newbie ladder hax +4
5 |
| #4 ground-LOBP-[102600] |
| syr-24-169-68-11.twcny.rr.com |
the lesson: only idiots play ladder games.
i don't really have too much positive to say about this br. at the core it's a decent, average report. but:
*text was hard to read with the similar colors of text and bg. a minor gripe, but a gripe nonetheless.
*you could have used some proofreading.
*why report on games that suck/games that are short? they don't make for interesting reads.
a decent effort, but my time was pretty much wasted reading this. i give it a 4. |
| #5 Dino Din[102601] |
| dynamic-148-001.dorm.natpool.uc.edu |
| Hmm... not bad. Maybe I have weird taste, but wound up not needing pics. |
| #6 Casper...[102602] |
| spc-isp-tor-58-22-153.sprint.ca |
| nice to see people ripping off other people's stuff for a change |
| #7 x36.iceni[102603] |
| wittgenstein.ti.telenor.net |
Cas: what? What did I rip off?
I like dino. |
| #8 Nook in[102604] |
| spider-wg031.proxy.aol.com |
| Just happy to see a real battle report for once. to that shabby of one either 6-7 |
| #9 LuckyNewbie:P[102605] |
| user-33qtpcf.dialup.mindspring.com |
Ignore ground, hes a fool
i give it a gold at least, good writing, fair games, didn't need any pictures.
report these guys next time :[ |
| #10 Gunslinger[102606] |
| spider-wg031.proxy.aol.com |
Nice. Giver a 7
" Ka " |
| #11 Breeze[102607] |
| 62.176.93.129 |
| Is this a Blaze report or am I too sleepy? Or both... |
| #12 John[102610] |
| adsl-63-206-91-190.dsl.snfc21.pacbell.net |
| Is this a blaze br? |
| #13 BOBBY357[102612] |
| spider-mtc-ti032.proxy.aol.com |
| not bad. |
| #14 (...Blaze...)[102613] |
| wittgenstein.ti.telenor.net |
omgh i won tourney go me!!
anyway nice to see other norwegian ppl, hi yo^^
and no its not my br :[ |
| #15 iggy[102614] |
| adsl-64-160-24-131.dsl.lsan03.pacbell.net |
| vhat an idiot |
| #16 Shadow D'Arc[102618] |
| spider-mtc-ta041.proxy.aol.com |
He balanced out the short-gameness by posting 3 different games. I suck. Anyone who knows me knows that(Jebby, you remember). But I get lucky sometimes. Those times, I automatically hack, just because they suck. I know how you feel, man. I hope you got SS's of the first guy saying DBL-Disc. See if Blizz will actually enforce it's Zero Tolerance think.
Post better games next time. 4-7.
Peace,
Shadow D'Arc |
| #17 [SM]Strega~F[102621] |
| proxy6.senet.com.au |
The games themselves sucked, but in my books that counts for very little. The report itself was very well done, and I foresee that you will be a great all-text reporter one day.
You covered the details well, and made sure that we knew what was happening. Also, 1st person reports are thx. I see all too many people write about a game they played, using the 3rd person styles.
"I don't want to know what your opponent is doing in his base, unless you actually saw it yourself during the game." That's what makes a 1st person report good. You seemed to adhere to this rule fairly well.
GG.
Strega |
| #18 DC_Tsunami[102622] |
| 223-pm3-4.ala.tularosa.net |
They were decent games but I didn't care very much for them. Your writing style seems bitter and conceited (I would be bitter too, though, if I played two disconnectors, and got trashed by another guy).
Also, don't just use line breaks to separate paragraphs. Use paragraph breaks. If you do use line breaks only, use a tab (I forget how you do tab in html, something like ). The lack of paragraph breaks made the layout look sloppy, but the colours and font, in my opinion, were fine.
Also, somebody already said it, proofread is thx. 'Assains' is no thx.
That's my opinion anyway. |
| #19 MrFacist[102625] |
| spider-wa032.proxy.aol.com |
| Yawn |
| #20 astante[102641] |
| proxy.westbelt.calltech.com |
| hmm, did you steal the fonts and layout from blaze? It was an ok br, but try for a different look ;) thx gg |
| #21 Satan'sCookies[102648] |
| cs6668128-221.austin.rr.com |
| Fags play video games :| |
| #22 Satan'sCookies[102649] |
| cs6668128-221.austin.rr.com |
| Fags can play video games i meant to say. The double discers and dance dance revolutioners and Eradicate~me's :o |
| #23 Eradicate~Me[102657] |
| AC8FED8F.ipt.aol.com |
| asdf |
| #24 (...Blaze...)[102661] |
| wittgenstein.ti.telenor.net |
hahahahhaha satan^^
|
| #25 Satan'sCookies[102667] |
| cs6668128-221.austin.rr.com |
| <3 |
| #26 Marek[102669] |
| bess-proxy02.wiu.k12.pa.us |
"I couldnt read it because of the font color?"
Maybe you need to buy a new monitor then, you dork... thats generally what people do when they cant read the font.
The first two games were not that good, but the style was good... the only problem with the grammar I see, and this isnt really grammar, is the paragraphs. Make a space between paragraphs, it moved too fast without them.
The third game was average at best, but the writing style was good, very little grammatical errors, not enough to warrant lowering the rating. The banner at the top was excellent, and with pics I would say 8 - 9, but without them,
7.
-Marek out. |
| #27 CaughtNaked[102680] |
| 206.215.14.63 |
not bad, what font did u use? and what background color? i liked it alot. :} and good report to, it didnt really need pics for some odd reason but it still would have helped. diffenitly keep reporting and tell me the font stuff ect... or ill be forced to view source. :}
7
t2yl8r,
~CN |
| #28 Sovereignty[102683] |
| wwck1UBR1-6-hfc-0251-40e81298.rdc1.ct.coxatwork.com |
He used the lovable Veranda :), albeit insanely small on 1600x1200. I liked the color scheme. I think it would've been better with pics though. The games were kinda too short to really be enjoyable. In any case, I'd give it a 6-7.
Hasta luigi
-Sovereignty |
| #29 Iceni[102685] |
| wittgenstein.ti.telenor.net |
hmm as told earlier I used verdana, 11 pixels i think. Bgcolor was in the darker range of gray, #303030 or something around there.
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| #30 HellBoy[102687] |
| ti121210a063-0216.dialup.online.no |
Jon André, detta er dritten din, er det ikke?
(Norwegian, dont ask ;)) |
| #31 Breeze[102691] |
| 62.176.93.129 |
It's our right to ask, drittunge
;o |
| #32 Iceni[102694] |
| ti121210a063-0233.dialup.online.no |
| its my shit k? Plz stop harassing me :[ |
| #33 ~ViLaToR~[102709] |
| 24.27.226.93.wintersprings-ubr-a.cfl.rr.com |
How do you put pics in a BR? Im gonna write one and its my first and i would like to know. Also how do you change the background color?
Sry to bother you but thx anyway.
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| #34 Eradicate~Me[102741] |
| AC891544.ipt.aol.com |
| this isn't gold. |
| #35 John[102775] |
| adsl-63-206-91-190.dsl.snfc21.pacbell.net |
| I have to agree with Erad there I though this was worth a 5-6 |
| #36 TerrenMahem[102811] |
| 1Cust205.tnt25.dfw9.da.uu.net |
Uff da!! lolz, im part norweigion, my moms side of my
family is from norweigion imigrants. I also do norweigion
dancing (in case your wondering, i only did that when i was
5, and now its kinda stupid, god i hate poka :(). Anyway,
i like this report, you need to make more.
I like eggs. Yum.
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| #37 binjured[102844] |
| cvg-65-27-241-109.cinci.rr.com |
ya ground is basically an idiot, tho that goes w/o saying ;P
Good report, after the first 2 i woulda probably either killed someone or broke the sc disc, ppl are so fucking gay. It's not the points obviously, just the principal that if you lose you accept it. Of course, everyone hacks who wins, its common sense i mean, its not like they could have more skill cuz skill = hack, duh, learn ur SC sir ;) |
| #38 Shadow D'Arc[103291] |
| spider-wk043.proxy.aol.com |
This is a Blaze report. I can prove it. Look at the comments on ShadowAngel's "Comp Stomp" report. He says he is Blaze and Iceni. GG yo.
Peace,
Shadow D'Arc |
| #39 Missi[107990] |
| 205-213-112-67.sdb.k12.wi.us |
| Hello |
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