| #1 Flitred[104226] |
| www.efl.fha.dot.gov |
| 1st. .. |
| #2 Jotnar[104227] |
| eclipse.cntrvilhs.fcps.k12.va.us |
| The mighty and highly esteemed second comment is mine. |
| #3 Jotnar[104229] |
| eclipse.cntrvilhs.fcps.k12.va.us |
| Bleh. Just finish reading and I was sorta disappointed. Your writing style didn't do much for me and it needed lots of grammatical correction. Yours pics were OK and you seem to have an idea of what you were trying to communicate. Next time please go over the report, reading it outloud to yourself and see how it sounds. I would estimate about a 6. |
| #4 BigD[104230] |
| px2so.cg.shawcable.net |
| Background seemed weird to me. Also, should've used colour and not italics to contrast the conversations. Game was good, writing didn't seem all that great. 7 |
| #5 RubiksCube[104231] |
| platz02.pags.de |
I dunno, but I liked it. Prolly cuz I love that match up, too.
7-8 = 7.5 imho |
| #6 ~ViLaToR~[104232] |
| 65.33.107.252.wintersprings-ubr-a.cfl.rr.com |
Pretty good, 7-8
Less sucking up to mark4 and williamwc3 plz ^^
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| #7 Soveriegnty[104233] |
| wwck1UBR1-6-hfc-0251-40e81298.rdc1.ct.coxatwork.com |
To hell with 1st, 7th owns you :/
Nice report, although the bg made the text hard to read in a few spots. There were also 4-5 spelling/grammar errors. Still a 7-8 though. |
| #8 sMs.NT[104234] |
| dialups-251.palmer.mtaonline.net |
| CooooOOOoooool, nice backround |
| #9 Winkies[104235] |
| slkcdslgw7PoolB51.slkc.uswest.net |
good job yet again, grammar was kinda poor, lots more than 4-5 errors :( other than that great report, maybe report on a game where both zerg and toss play well instead of having zerg go straight ling-hydra :)
Still 7-8 though :) |
| #10 Rabid_Raccoon[104240] |
| A010-0022.BTVL.splitrock.net |
it wasn't a bad report, but a better game would have helped.
7-8 |
| #11 Thunder.[104241] |
| host-209-214-80-73.fll.bellsouth.net |
| Ling is one of my favorite reporters, ALOTHOUGH hes not the best in grammar.. He cant conjugate words for shit. I.E="The toss forces" or "does Templars have poeckets?" there were like 40 of those.. gramatical errors annoy me.. but i like his reports! :D |
| #12 Patton1944[104242] |
| spider-to044.proxy.aol.com |
Hydras have red blood.No pRon.
7 |
| #13 Thunder.[104243] |
| host-209-214-80-73.fll.bellsouth.net |
| LMFAO.. I criticize his report on spelling errors and I spell pockets wrong. haha.. Teach me to scrutinize someones report again.. |
| #14 Thunder.[104244] |
| host-209-214-80-73.fll.bellsouth.net |
BTW the hatches purple "shit" was a funny joke.. :P
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| #15 CTretina[104246] |
| r126165.res.Lehigh.EDU |
All and all, I would present this report with a seven if I were a rater. While I thought that ZerG~LinG's idea for the report appeared sound and that his pictures showed as well-done, I thought that his writing left and strategic analysis of the game and the matchup in general left something to be desired.
In fact, I'd like to offer to play ZerG~LinG in a game to show him (and, perhaps, all of the Battlereports.com readers) how a Zerg is supposed to play this matchup. In my opinion, ZerG~LinG's opponent in this game all but gave him the win. |
| #16 WrAth[104247] |
| px2cv.gv.shawcable.net |
You shouldn't preach definite strategies when you don't have the ideal player matchup
Lost temple is much too over rated and over played. Playing a variety of maps might produce some surprising strats and results. |
| #17 Squad[104248] |
| h000094c7d4a8.ne.mediaone.net |
| gold by far. although not higher than 8.0213987456, and three-tenths. =D |
| #18 John[104249] |
| adsl-63-202-179-35.dsl.snfc21.pacbell.net |
| Good br 7-8 |
| #19 Adrenaling[104250] |
| cr862712-a.ym1.on.wave.home.com |
GJ, GW, GG
7 |
| #20 somnolent[104251] |
| 61.171.83.196 |
good job..7-8 fo sho...easy
love readin your reports :)
91326832 |
| #21 [SM]Strega~F[104252] |
| proxy8.senet.com.au |
Well, I agree with others that the Zerg player wasn't all that good. Perhaps you could play Zerg next time, in order to show off your tactics that you keep talking about (unless you were referring to Protoss tactics, in which case I'm an idiot).
This wasn't as good as your other reports, but it was still enjoyable.
7
Strega |
| #22 Mindthief[104253] |
| ci31571-a.nash1.tn.home.com |
| Nice report, but the game was like mine, a pretty shitty one. |
| #23 Testicular_Pugilist[104255] |
| 65.102.188.253 |
The background and pics were beautiful. The writing was pretty good, but it seems that it was better in previous BR's. I personally don't find that the spelling and grammar really affect the BR adversly (unless the reader's 1st language isn't english either). A better game would have probably produced a better report. I think you should keep on with the series, but stick to games where both players are evenly matched. Overall, I give it a solid 8.
Is Skeletor the master of your universe?
- The Puncher of Balls |
| #24 Cer1dan[104256] |
| h24-81-28-90.ok.shawcable.net |
| well, you seemed to use the same terms over and over such as "when the dust cleared" and "the protoss forces". When i BR, me being a text-only BRer, i try my best to have a variety of phrases with the same meaning. Like in many cases i'll say "the zerg swarm" "the many ranks of honourable protoss warriors" "A perilous sea of zerg" "glimmer of metal from the magnicifent siege tanks and vultures" "The winding snake of zealots" or "A ominous cloud of mutas" are all terms that could be used many many different ways when i could have just as easily said "the Zerg/Terran/Protoss forces". Anyways, fix the repetitiveness and you got yourself a pretty good report. |
| #25 KissBlade[104257] |
| as5800-1.216-194-3-134.nyc.ny.metconnect.net |
5 hatches vs. 12 gateways = win for toss no MATTER what dumb strat the toss is doing. Especially mass goons. Hydra ling can so own toss if zerg isn't a dumb fool and makes only 5 damn hatches vs. 12 gates. Smooth ...
Good work on the battlereport though. GAme could've been better. |
| #26 GoZuLu[104260] |
| 195.249.56.3 |
Good report, but not your best ever ....
Please love me. Danmark sparker røv.
GoZuLu - TheOldDane
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| #27 Twip[104261] |
| 156.63.129.18 |
| Maybe I'm mistaken, but I recall that when I used to 1v1 a lot, if you go 12/13 gate, that's too late to stop me from early-expanding on you on Temple (PvZ) ..unless the zerg gets stuck with 12 (which you didn't actually mention as your reasoning). |
| #28 ZerG~LinG[104262] |
| p426-034.ppp.get2net.dk |
Well, maybe a better game could help. Next time i'll probably do it on a BR, and yes this guy wasn't the best zerg player. Anyways before the next PvZ series I will do a special christmas report.
And btw, GoZuLu what happeded to your report? :D If you're better at english grammars and such, maybe you could safecheck mine? Plz? mail me at okkegokke@get2net.dk
And last but not least, im fucking 15 years old, so dont expect any overly gosu writing. |
| #29 Cer1dan[104263] |
| h24-81-28-90.ok.shawcable.net |
| im 13 so i expect better than me ^-^ |
| #30 Dino Din[104264] |
| dynamic-152-183.dorm.natpool.uc.edu |
| 13 huh? It all makes sense now... |
| #31 Reader_54[104267] |
| 128.238.4.176 |
| My eyes hurt. - _ - |
| #32 BOBBY357[104268] |
| spider-wo073.proxy.aol.com |
| the game was pretty crappy, and there were lots of grammar errors, but the overall, its was well written, and the strategy guide part itself was cool. 7-8. |
| #33 Testicular_Pugilist[104269] |
| 65.102.188.37 |
13? I'd say that's pretty damned good writing for a thirteen-year-old.
- The Puncher of Balls |
#34  [104277] |
| 206.214.215.71 |
| The background detracted from my enjoyment of the report. It seemed like unnesary flash...no real value added. Some of the writing verged on the fan fiction type...a little too much personification for my taste. Still, not bad. Just style issues mostly. 7. |
| #35 Dragonsven[104311] |
| 170.158.87.245 |
Ling, I'm blessed with an extremely large brain and the ability to correct grammatical and spelling errors. If you would like, you could email me your reports and I can fix them that same day or by the next day. Cheers.
-Dsven |
| #36 ArchAngel(ILK)[104332] |
| mtrs-92ppp67.epix.net |
| ^^ messed up name = changed =D |
| #37 CrackHeadJeb[104405] |
| mu-196093.dhcp.missouri.edu |
Nice attempt at a WWC3-like layout. It may not have turned out the best way but remember, WWC3's first layout wasn't the greatest, either. ;)
Keep at it, you've got the potential to be a great battlereporter.
-CHJ |
| #38 katome[104542] |
| h24-82-14-88.ed.shawcable.net |
| pics a bit much... not bad tho |
| #39 Ling-erie[104570] |
| proxy6.leeds.ac.uk |
Pylon on 8, gates on 12 and 13
this is not a rush
nice report though =] Background was gay and annoying |
| #40 NotDefault[104622] |
| h24-83-95-176.vs.shawcable.net |
| 10?? |
#41  [104679] |
| ct91955-a.richmnd1.in.home.com |
Totally agree with Mark. Who gave this a 10? That had to have been an accdent. I'm going with a 6 on this one.
To add to what Mark said about backgrounds, if you're going to use white text, you don't want to have shades of white in the background.
Dref |
| #42 ZerG~LinG[104781] |
| 212.237.49.61 |
omg i just checked this....who gave it a 10???
phew tnx man =) |
| #43 xxxChigalOxxx[105223] |
| pool0397.cvx28-bradley.dialup.earthlink.net |
wow, i don't expect to write any brs, so i can't really crititcize, but, hey, as a standard American student, i really think correct grammar and spelling would've helped the br a lot.
i also think you should add more minimap updates to keep the mental image factor up.
hey, thanks for even listening to me...
7-8 |
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