| #1 [SM]Strega~F[105774] |
| proxy8.senet.com.au |
| 1st!! |
| #2 [SM]Strega~F[105776] |
| proxy1.senet.com.au |
Arghghhh!!!!!!!
Fanfics!!! It burns! IT BURNSSSSS!!!!! |
| #3 Furious[105778] |
| bal-ts2-2500.tpgi.com.au |
| 3rd |
| #4 Furious[105779] |
| bal-ts2-2500.tpgi.com.au |
| good job oct It should get gold! |
| #5 ZerG~LinG[105783] |
| p414-111.ppp.get2net.dk |
5th!
i own~~
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| #6 Ice_Kobra[105784] |
| spider-te052.proxy.aol.com |
| 6th! Now to read. |
| #7 the()vermind[105786] |
| p69-236.acedsl.com |
| i don't like fan fics, and in most cases, neither do raters. Emphasis on the word most, read monty_pylon's examples of fan fics |
| #8 LuckyNewbie:P[105791] |
| dialup-64.156.36.185.Dial1.Denver1.Level3.net |
| no, not another month of fanfics. no!! |
| #9 Sovereignty[105803] |
| wwck1UBR1-6-hfc-0251-40e81298.rdc1.ct.coxatwork.com |
| Eww, another fanfic. I would've read it if the paragraphs were indented.. |
| #10 Shadow D'Arc[105847] |
| spider-wk062.proxy.aol.com |
....Odd. Ah well, good try, even for a fanfic.
NO ONE IS - SAFE,
Shadow D'Arc |
| #11 kidonfire[105861] |
| 202.188.198.164 |
| this one looks better than the other... stil... didnt read it make it pretty! |
| #12 Furious[105872] |
| bal-ts1-2500.tpgi.com.au |
| In octavians defense a good story doesn't need pretty....and if you dont read fanfics why bother posting some crap about being not willing to read it. If you dont like it and are not going to offer any constructive critisicm, flame it for sucking, read IT then dont post! |
| #13 BigD[105908] |
| px2so.cg.shawcable.net |
Not a bad story. An attempt at making it look nice and an effort at formatting would've served you well.
5.5 |
| #14 CaughtNaked[105912] |
| 206.215.11.15 |
| doesnt dag hav a fan fiction site to post this stuff? |
| #15 |]agomar[106008] |
| StCatherines-ppp109082.sympatico.ca |
lol, yes - if you want I can post it there and mention it in my next br ;). www.geocities.com/fantasyfictiononline . . . though it's a FANTASY site, not fanfic! I thought this wasn't such bad writing . . . it did get cut off and the story wasn't too great . . .
6 =[. Better next time! HTML, story telling, longer . . . you'll get gold =]. |
| #16 [106566] |
| dhcp6555.dhcp.unc.edu |
| No more stealing Shakespeare, thx. |