| #1 mattkid[105964] |
| 00-60-97-d5-1d-d0.bconnected.net |
| 1st, burn :P |
| #2 Mattkid[105966] |
| 00-60-97-d5-1d-d0.bconnected.net |
| Did 1, now go for 4 :P |
| #3 Shadow D'Arc[105968] |
| spider-wm054.proxy.aol.com |
I choose 3. That sucked, no detail whatsoever in ANY of the battles. "I sent in and got raped", "I got lucky and raped him" Gets boring, even if the report was about you getting beat down. Then again, at least you DID report a game you lost.
NO ONE IS - SAFE,
Shadow D'Arc |
| #4 John[105970] |
| adsl-63-206-88-68.dsl.snfc21.pacbell.net |
| 6, cause it needs more detail but still a decent br |
| #5 znzf[105971] |
| CPE00201867e97e.cpe.net.cable.rogers.com |
hotkeying units confuses me more than helps ^_^
hotkey gates |
| #6 Cer1dan[105973] |
| px2ht.ok.shawcable.net |
| i just reread it and i rarely said anything like "got raped" and stuff like that, it was usually me flanking, screwing up on my flank, trying to pull troops back ect, how much more detail am i supposed to put? it wasnt any more or less detail than my other reports because pretty much these battles consisted of close to no micro, only had to flank and that was about it. |
| #7 Cer1dan[105974] |
| px2ht.ok.shawcable.net |
| btw, znzf, i hotkey my units on 1-4 and gateways on 5-0, took some getting used to at first but i was better off doing so. |
| #8 [SM]Strega~F[105975] |
| proxy7.senet.com.au |
Hmm, I got very excited when you did the first paragraph, because it was all "I decided on this because.... and I did this as it seemed...."
I was figuring that it'd be 1st person all the way. It was for the most part, but some of it took the guise of 3rd person. =/
The report itself was pretty good, at the start at least. After that it seemed to be pretty rushed and there weren't enough details etc.
I'd have to give this a 6.5, sorry =(
Strega |
| #9 Cer1dan[105976] |
| px2ht.ok.shawcable.net |
| oh ya, also znzf, i hotkey main nexus to 0 as its very close to the P(right above it) and nat nexus to 9, by the time my nat is up and running i usually have 5-0 filled up ;) |
| #10 Cer1dan[105977] |
| px2ht.ok.shawcable.net |
| no problem strega, it wasnt exactly my best game in the world but i havent had many games where I havent been raping somebody and near the end wouldnt have been all that interesting, if ya watch the replay, my units would live no longer than about 2 or 3 seconds :) |
| #11 |||l||||ll|||||[105981] |
| cdm-66-6-206-tylr.cox-internet.com |
| last section of comments and shit isnt a trademark for you, lots of other reporters do it =/ |
| #12 Cer1dan[105982] |
| px2ht.ok.shawcable.net |
| you mean with my 4 choices thing on what your gonna do isnt new? wow...never seen it before and i've read ALOT of reports. |
| #13 [SM]Strega~F[105984] |
| proxy7.senet.com.au |
I remember 1 other report with the end-of-report options in it. Can't remember who did it though, but I know it's been done at least once. =o
Strega |
| #14 Cer1dan[105985] |
| px2ht.ok.shawcable.net |
| ya, i did it in my last report :P |
| #15 Cer1dan[105986] |
| px2ht.ok.shawcable.net |
| ooo, btw strega, my next report is gonna be pure 1st person because it just sounds like fun :) |
| #16 NO)Pain[105989] |
| spider-mtc-tk064.proxy.aol.com |
| you diss yourself too often, your stupid |
| #17 Squad[105999] |
| h000094c7d4a8.ne.mediaone.net |
NO PICS!
6 |
| #18 bleh[106000] |
| host-216-77-220-68.fll.bellsouth.net |
More details plz, make the reader feel like THEY are playing.
I think thats the best kind of BR.
Also I think you shouldn't use gay words like "poser" and such, that word was stupid when I was in 6th grade (4 yrs ago) and it's even gayer now..
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| #19 Cer1dan[106003] |
| px2ht.ok.shawcable.net |
bleh, its a word used at my school so i decided to use it.
NO)Pain, there is nothing wrong with dissing yourself, its not stupid, im not calling myself stupid, an idiot, i was making mistake after mistake that game, i wasnt exactly at my best.
Squad, I said in my last report i was text only, just like Praetor. was, I find that if I foxus on the writing(not my best work this time) it becomes much richer and more enjoyable. |
| #20 |]agomar[106007] |
| StCatherines-ppp109082.sympatico.ca |
| I detect the odour of mild newbiness =[. "Don't attack Terran at their natural" Lack of detail was kinda sad. I won't rate down for lack of pics cause text onlies are sexy sometimes. Humour was alright . . . 4-5 . . . I'll give you silver :). |
| #21 BigD[106013] |
| px2so.cg.shawcable.net |
Text only reports are good WHEN detail is provided. So, no detail=bad report.
4.5 |
| #22 Cer1dan[106015] |
| px2ht.ok.shawcable.net |
Dagomar, if they have their cliff protected with tanks and anti air(even more so at the 6:00 position, its suicide to send units in unless you can reproduce them quickly enough.
And another thing, this isnt exactly my best, I was waiting for a good game but couldnt find one and am not fond of writing BRs of replays of people I havent talked to, so this was all I had for a game and it was rather hard to make into a good BR, the game lacked therefor the report lacked, there wasnt much detail to provide as there was not much happening. |
| #23 Drintr[106016] |
| 66.60.184.32 |
I would have to agree with comment #4, your report did need more detail. The majority of your battles, especially the significant ones, were singularly composed of a description like, "The terran forces attacked, but I had protoss forces waiting to kill the invaders. I won the battle." Tell us what happened in that battle, if the battle took place near a base ramp were you able to position dragoons on your base ledge to fire at the charging marines (or whatever the unit) attempting to get into your base? All in all, I'd say this report deserves a 4 or possibly 5, the lack of detail as well as some grammatical/spelling errors made the report not as good as it could of been.
Anyways... nice job. I will be looking forward to your next br.
Peace and Love,
Drintr |
| #24 el_sux0r[106097] |
| helios.compusa.com |
| I know that, you like to, talk this way but, could you, at least, remove some, of those commas? ;) |
| #25 posterX[113778] |
| 63.161.26.47 |
cer1dan you are one of the worst BW players ive ever seen. stop making battlereports because you seriously have no skill or talent whatsoever. you are a newb and you always will be you filthy mexican. now go to your room and think about what ive said.
PS: you are fat and ugly |
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