| #1 Adrenaling[107259] |
| CPE002078e0f4b2.cpe.net.cable.rogers.com |
| FIRST!! |
| #2 Adrenaling[107260] |
| CPE002078e0f4b2.cpe.net.cable.rogers.com |
| now to read |
| #3 asdf slut i paused to read ;[[107261] |
| stj-nf50-134.netcom.ca |
status
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| #4 Adrenaling[107262] |
| CPE002078e0f4b2.cpe.net.cable.rogers.com |
very good first br. beat my first ;[
but, i didn't like the horrible font color on the horrible background color. hurts me eyes.
I AM CANADIAN...too... ;] |
| #5 LuckyNewbie:P[107263] |
| dialup-209.245.3.155.Dial1.Denver1.Level3.net |
| in position --- no tangos in site |
| #6 katome[107264] |
| px2ar.ed.shawcable.net |
| actually I picked those font color/bg colors to avoid that problem.. those are the forum text/bg color... it shows up fine here, I don't know why it doesn't work for you :( |
| #7 LuckyNewbie:P[107265] |
| dialup-209.245.3.155.Dial1.Denver1.Level3.net |
damn you adrenaling, that was supposed to be with the "status" comment. Nice read tho. 8 cuz its a good first report. Or change your name to basferd and you'll get a 9.
MAKE MORE |
| #8 katome[107266] |
| px2ar.ed.shawcable.net |
| woah thx ^^ I will, with better games :D |
| #9 Mjotnar[107267] |
| client-151-200-161-80.bellatlantic.net |
Excellent. I liked the color format, was very pleasing, and your pic layout and html skills were excellent for a first br. Bonus points because 3rd person rocks and we weren't invaded by small square boxes with red Xs.
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| #10 John[107268] |
| adsl-63-206-88-68.dsl.snfc21.pacbell.net |
| Its a good br make some more!! |
| #11 katome[107270] |
| px2ar.ed.shawcable.net |
| yeah, katome likes third person too ;] |
| #12 Arsenic[107274] |
| sdn-ar-002nmalbuP044.dialsprint.net |
Katome, awesome report. Easy 8. I really liked the graphics and the font was good for me. Very informative and good writing!
8 |
| #13 katome[107275] |
| px2ar.ed.shawcable.net |
| thanks ^^... your report was good too; as I said in comments ;] |
| #14 badtz maru[107284] |
| pcp108471pcs.echryh01.nj.comcast.net |
READ MINE SLKFKLSAF:KLASDKLSAKAJ
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| #15 Anonymous[107285] |
| 216-224-146-48.thegrid.net |
| The game was absolutely horrible. Both players sucked. However, the report was good. The html sucked, especially the design and layout. A 3 for the game, an 8 for the report, and a 3 for the html. Average = 4.7 |
| #16 Mattkid[107290] |
| 00-60-97-d5-1d-d0.bconnected.net |
| I love Canada =] |
| #17 retardboy[107291] |
| px2cv.gv.shawcable.net |
| So do I |
| #18 Furious[107300] |
| bal-ts1-2500.tpgi.com.au |
That was a very solid battle report, I enjoyed it!
8-9, borders would have added alot to your pics!! |
| #19 |||l||||ll|||||[107301] |
| cdm-66-6-191-tylr.cox-internet.com |
katome - 3rd person == bad; i would suggest that, if youre playing in a game, you try to tell it from your perspective, and only throw in things that you learned from the replay to keep the readers from getting too confused... imo thats part of what makes battlereports popular in spite of replays
it also helps if the game wasnt very good =/ |
| #20 RubiksCube[107305] |
| cache2.shlink.de |
| nice for a first. 7? maybe 8 |
| #21 aseq[107317] |
| eagle.ksa.fnt.hvu.nl |
cool, a report with the writer playing in it :}
very good for first, plz continue...
The players were good enough imo....mayb cos im newb?
ltr, Aseq |
| #22 CaughtNaked[107319] |
| 205.222.244.173 |
| i had to highlight it to read, probly just netscapes gayness though |
| #23 katome[107322] |
| px2ar.ed.shawcable.net |
| I'm not sure why people have trouble with the text color, like I said its the forum text/bg color T.T I know the game wasn't very good, but now that most of you think I'm decent I hope to watch some better games :] So #15 basically what you are saying is the br.com html sucks...? It was basic, clean and without any problems. I don't see what you are saying. And if you have anything to criticize you make yourself look like an idiot if you don't suggest something better; what you are saying is you are jealous/stupid. I have alot of experience with html. The pics as well, I think I will try a border next time; that just increases time it takes alot so I wasn't gonna for first ;] |
| #24 ~Fenix~[107324] |
| bess-proxy.wiu.k12.pa.us |
| good br, 8.4524645, anyone who cant read gray on black needs big nerdy glasses and a kick me sign |
| #25 'Final`Flare'[107327] |
| spider-wi073.proxy.aol.com |
Great first BR Katome. It shows great potential.
Tons better than my BR.
8.
(Font was fine btw. I liked) |
| #26 BigD[107335] |
| px2so.cg.shawcable.net |
+5 for being Canadian. Therefore, 13.5 (just kidding).
8.5, very, very good. It was a good game, and I can't really see any flaws in the report-just not too flashy. Keep them coming. |
| #27 KHiLL[107340] |
| ool-18b8a2a6.dyn.optonline.net |
Pics were cool, report was cool.
btw sorry to hear your Candian |
| #28 CaughtNaked[107341] |
| cp606088-a.mtgmry1.md.home.com |
| its just gay netscape, on IE it works fine |
| #29 stonecoldnewbie[107343] |
| 24.245.64.22 |
| nice job, at least a 7maybe 8 |
| #30 Manius[107357] |
| adsl-81-167-121.asm.bellsouth.net |
| Nice first report. I thought the font/bg was fine. Good pictures. 7-8 |
| #31 |]agomar[107365] |
| St-Catherines-ppp112378.sympatico.ca |
| Great work for a first report - but what Lucky said :). Better games! I'll give this an 8. |
| #32 TheCh0b0[107371] |
| 1Cust87.tnt1.holman.wi.da.uu.net |
| nice job, i had no problem reading the grey/black, IE is ownage (usually...) anyway nice 8 ez |
| #33 katome[107373] |
| px2ar.ed.shawcable.net |
| thx Dag ^^ now you guys give me gosu games >D |
| #34 Anonymous[107386] |
| 216-224-143-235.thegrid.net |
| I dunno (i'm #15), ya i didn't explain, so here goes. I got IE 4.0 and i can't see any text at all unless i highlight everything. Maybe text="#8E7B75" isn't very widely accepted by comps, or the br.com stylesheet automatically sets every < p > text color to black. About my jealousy, i never posted a report, so how can i be jealous? good work anyway. I still say 4.7 |
| #35 Patton1944[107387] |
| spider-wi024.proxy.aol.com |
Wow. I'm amazed here. First BR, and it owns Badtz like a cheap korean hooker ;]
I liked the font color and pics. Game was pretty good,too.
8, easily. Keep em coming. Who knows, we might just be seeing the next Breeze...
Gosu Pfl45h next time, plz . ^^;
America > Canada. Our strippers look better.Eh. |
| #36 |]agomar[107390] |
| St-Catherines-ppp112378.sympatico.ca |
A) Anonymous it's a common occurance and not due to the report, rather it's due to the browser and is no reason to rate down a BR
B) Patton, Canada>US and you know it ;). Our girls are thanx |
| #37 Anonymous[107392] |
| 216-224-143-235.thegrid.net |
Oh ok my bad. That would make it...7. Happy? =)
How come no one here is from Africa... |
| #38 +/-[107395] |
| adsl-63-200-52-10.dsl.snfc21.pacbell.net |
I liked. An error or two in the dialogue ("rushed them at my tanks"), but overall well done. I liked the clean style of the pics but add a small border. Cheers.
(canada breeds the best snowboarders) |
| #39 znzf[107412] |
| CPE00201867e97e.cpe.net.cable.rogers.com |
wicked BR in terms of style, imaging, etc etc
BUT.. if u have time to SS a pic of someone storming your wriaths you have time to move them out of the way
unless u took pics out of replay.
hmm./ |
| #40 Mjotnar[107416] |
| eclipse.cntrvilhs.fcps.k12.va.us |
| With a better game you could really put more 'umpf' into your writng, make it meatier and juicey, go for the 9-10 rating. |
| #41 omg[107424] |
| host-216-77-212-89.fll.bellsouth.net |
Katome, nice first br.. i only browsed thru it instead of reading it.. for 2 reasons..
1:you said "from experience i know that 4 scvs should be taken to destroy the pylon"
2:i looked at the end and saw "i am candian" |
| #42 katome[107426] |
| px2ar.ed.shawcable.net |
| yah znzf I took those pics afterwords, that storm was godly fast :( (where I missed pics of the battle I was just too lazy to go back and get em t.t) and #41 your a moron :p |
| #43 Patton1944[107445] |
| spider-mtc-tb061.proxy.aol.com |
| America > Canada. Rednecks > Maple-leaf-type-people |
| #44 katome[107450] |
| px2ar.ed.shawcable.net |
You who think America is superior, I have two... 'words' that will devastate you: George Bush
ouch |
| #45 Patton1944[107457] |
| spider-mtc-td071.proxy.aol.com |
| NOOOOOO!He's an exception! Die, you french canadian! |
| #46 0c00l[107458] |
| regncache3.sasknet.sk.ca |
| heh plus patton1944 uses gAyOL T_T |
| #47 Tavernology[107479] |
| proxy1.senet.com.au |
Really good first BR. I had the problem with the text on netscape, but now I'm using IE, and it works fine.
7-8 IMO, but if you get a better game, you could get a 9 or 10. Good work. |
| #48 TAiMALAi(X)[107484] |
| nh-merrimack1b-245.mrrmnh.adelphia.net |
8 easy
And i have the answer to the canda vs america war
Britain > Everything
Pip-Pip Cheerio :) |
| #49 katome[107491] |
| px2ar.ed.shawcable.net |
| I'm actually not french canadian so nyeah |
| #50 katome[107492] |
| px2ar.ed.shawcable.net |
'George Bush'
hahahaha tremble in fear of your stupid president >D |
| #51 Unidentified newbie[107516] |
| AHdialup109.slkc.uswest.net |
Since this is a "report" and not internet "chat," please do not include smilies. Your writing style is effective enough to display your emotions without needing the smilies. Work on grammar please. I got confused many times because I was unsure of what you were saying.
Hopefully these comments will make your battlereports better (which is not bad). |
| #52 katome[107518] |
| px2ar.ed.shawcable.net |
| my grammar is fine I know what I'm doing as far as that goes, thats a completely unfounded complaint. If you get confused learn how to read stupid. Smileys are allowed in BRs, it works nicely, this isn't formal writing and no one put you in charge of rules so fuck off thx ^^ |
| #53 Unidentified newbie[107519] |
| AHdialup109.slkc.uswest.net |
"JaVm-deW's Dragoons sit on the low ground firing, only unloaded on the high ground"
Please tell me what this means? |
| #54 katome[107523] |
| px2ar.ed.shawcable.net |
| they were unloaded on low ground of island first, only to be loaded up and re-unloaded on the high ground just as my dropship arrived carrying the later mentioned cargo |
| #55 katome[107526] |
| px2ar.ed.shawcable.net |
| of course you took it out of context, you need the full sentence. granted its not the most obvious sentence, but it -is- gramatically correct and you shoulda been able to get the jist of it if not from the sentence itself but from the context. |
#56  [107529] |
| ct91955-a.richmnd1.in.home.com |
Hmmm, the first 5 paragraphs could have been summarized in two sentences. Once you got to the action though the report improved significantly and the pics were decent though a bit scrunched. Overall not bad. I'm going with a 7 because I didn't have gizz on my hands when i finished reading it.
Cheerio |
| #57 katome[107533] |
| px2ar.ed.shawcable.net |
| I'm not the most concise person in the world :o what you mean by no gizz on your hands when you finished? thats gibberish to me ;) |
| #58 Roaddog[107542] |
| wc01.ym.rnc.net.cable.rogers.com |
Very enjoyable read.
There was the random error, I counted around 10-15 spelling mistakes/grammar errors (not like I'm better =D ), but the pics were according to the text and the game fit together very well, just some of the pics seemed a bit bland and I think you could've put a bit more effort into them by making some more collages and stuff like that.
Overall I believe this is how it rates.
Content (The game, how close / one sided it was) - 2/2
Writing (duh) - 2/2
Grammar/Spelling mistakes (duh) - 1/2
Pics (pictures accordingly/collages/how they look) - 1.5/2
Enoyability (How much fun I had reading it) - 1.5/2
_____________
Rating = 8/10.
Nice Br!
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| #59 katome[107550] |
| px2ar.ed.shawcable.net |
| my next one has much nicer pics and I have read it over thouroughly and had someone else check it :) when the report centre is fixed I'll get it up t.t |
| #60 Dude-man[107555] |
| ajshukla2.utmem.edu |
Dude-man say battlereport good. Game=bad. Dont make more, this site no so good. Starcraft old but very legendary. Three races & all =. Need make other newer game at Blizzard. Go play counter-strike now.
The Dude-man from Japan. |
| #61 katome[107563] |
| px2ar.ed.shawcable.net |
| I'm hoping for wc3 beta so I can report that :( CS sucks, q3 !! but non-blizz rts brs suck :/ cept for that one uber mechwarrior 3 one. |
| #62 Shadow D'Arc[107569] |
| spider-wa011.proxy.aol.com |
Katome in #57-He means he couldn't jack off to your report. No lesbians or anime chicks=Slightly lower rating usually.
Peace,
Shadow D'Arc |
| #63 katome[107591] |
| px2ar.ed.shawcable.net |
| oh hmm... I'll have to grab an anime chick for the next one so I get an 8 or more outta Dref :p |
| #64 Anonymous[107742] |
| 216-224-156-78.thegrid.net |
Katome, Katome, where's your home?
Stop being so defensive you gay-terd gnome. |
| #65 katome[107749] |
| px2ar.ed.shawcable.net |
um.
what? |
| #66 Sovereignty[107775] |
| 68.14.88.133 |
Lol. Last line. "Hope I didn't screw anything."
8 |
| #67 ~KING~[107795] |
| host213-122-175-194.btinternet.com |
Wrong this is last line :-)
Battlereport was very nice 8 I say |
| #68 kaej[107956] |
| 64-213-127-149.roc.frontiernet.net |
| ya, both players pretty much sucked. Of course, I sorta wish I sucked more b/c that would mean I wouldn't have been wasting time playing this game for the last year and a half. Katome, quit while you're ahead and go read a book or something. thx. and real men don't use smileys. |
| #69 SomeGuy[108088] |
| nic-118-c8-60.mn.mediaone.net |
| SomeGuy would like to say, that u are some guy... |
| #70 Arkane Ass Hole[108233] |
| px2ar.ed.shawcable.net |
| Cool BR man! O ya im CANADIAN to! |
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